An Encounter with Karna (OS)Last Part on Pg23 - Page 21

thanks panchu for those lovely words...ya u n sayanee both chose same part...😳 n my fav too...😳.. its really flattering to read that my work inspired u to write on karna..you are truely a talented writer... and i hope to read many more from you soon...😊

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

"I was not sad, nor depressed. I was lone, like the evening fading before my eyes... And he came, sat beside me, took my right hand in his hand. I felt his warm hand, making my cold and clammy hand warm, spreading a feel I'm not lone. He didn't speak; his silence spoke words forgot long ago. Slowly, he did let me rest my head on his shoulder, just above his heart, and circled his arms around me. I heard him slowly breathing, reminding I'm alive with him. I closed my eyes, in a feeling I never felt, to a sleep I never slept. And when I opened them, I was lone again. I felt I needed nothing else; even the loneliness he left was more comforting... But who was he? How did he know me? Why did he come when I needed someone the most? I ... I still don't know..., perhaps a best friend I lost in some other birth..."

Sometimes, dreams are more powerful than reality. When I began reading this last update, I chose to read from the first word of the first part again. I was floating like a paper boat lost in stream. I could only end up in no other words than I wrote above. Mostly, my imaginations are as weird and moody as I am. (and I'm sorry for leaving them here)... Surely, this spellbound OS, has to be magical that it found way to my heart to stay forever...🤗

Keep writing!⭐️

Originally posted by: Nan08

very beautifully written ritiii 🤗

thoroughly enjoyed reading your encounter with one of your all time favorite mythological characters ⭐️👍🏼

🤗Aww..nandoos..thanks for reading and liking it dear...

Riti.. 🤗

You know I just want to make it as a short movie (with Aham on it 😉) ..an encounter with karna, the title itself already give me some magic feeling, sooo thank you for the os.. really wonderful!activate javascript

Riti maa subhah subhah you're making me blush calling me a gifted writer!☺️. Thanks a lot for that. I'm not much a critical analyser of a writing. So I can't post anything than what I feel while reading. I'm really glad you liked my words. And this is not only your journey, it is mine also. So how can I not feel the same? Whatever you write always have something I can relate to myself somewhere. You know legilimency spell, don't you?

I don't know when I'll write next story, may be after some months or so.

Originally posted by: obefya

Riti.. 🤗

You know I just want to make it as a short movie (with Aham on it 😉) ..an encounter with karna, the title itself already give me some magic feeling, sooo thank you for the os.. really wonderful!activate javascript

Originally posted by: Simantini_M

oh woww riti di...aftr such a long tym u continued n finally finished this os of urs...jst amazing ending...always luv ur style of writing n ur writings on karna is something on another level...evry bit of it is so mesmerising that its lyk always a grt pleasure for me to read...this part is so touching ''Whenever any needy used to
come here with something to ask
for..i used to feel like accepted ..
somewhere a part of them..
somewhere a reason for their
joy ..those tears of happiness in
their eyes used to wipe all those
unshed tears of mine... those
blessings from them used to heal
the blemishes of curses within... I
was not a danveer Riti.. but biggest
needy of them all.. this place was
where i used to get my daan..in
those fulfilled prayers of
someone.. " U put da perfect emotions of karn in this part...luv it a lot...A big hug to u dear Riti di for making the ending so incredibly beautiful

Originally posted by: riti4u

thanks panchu for those lovely words...ya u n sayanee both chose same part...😳 n my fav too...😳.. its really flattering to read that my work inspired u to write on karna..you are truely a talented writer... and i hope to read many more from you soon...😊

First of all, so sorry for the late reply!