Panchaali, and the Men That Mattered (Update: Page 4 & 6)

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sayee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

u write well...👍🏼👏...continue soon I am waiting...

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InkAndFable

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

The first word that come in my mind aftr reading ur OS is
"Awesome..."
the concept s rrally nice
how beautifully u express the relation of sibling...
Loved your writing skills
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Eager to read more...
Plez PM me when you post next story

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maharjunfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Its very nice..pls continue soon..

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shinningstar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome...loved reading it...plz continue ...i loved it. plz pm me when u write next...or better still u can mail me it would be awesome...look forward to the next post :)

Edited by shinningstar - 11 years ago

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wonderf so hrt touchy

Welll done

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729619

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful writing! You made me emotional reading it! 😊

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Payal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: bunnylovessunny
I love the conceptualization! Draupadi is THE woman to reckon with in the Mahabharata. Although her inner beliefs and thoughts were never really given significance, her state of mind is one of the main reasons why every incident occurred in the epic after her birth.
Dhri was the first man in her life and she must have depended on him until she was wed off to Arjuna. I loved how you've penned your thoughts about what their relationship must have been like. I can't wait to read more from you! :D :D

Hello, I am so glad you liked it. I kinda always imagined Drish and her to have a very beautiful bond

I shall continue soon 😳😳

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Payal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sanchita_ArSha
👏 👏 awesome start payel
Love it Keep writing like this thanx for pm

Thanks, glad u liked it. 😃

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Payal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: amritat
Beautiful concept...👏

Honestly, I have thought about Parth-Panchali, Panchali-Abhimanyu, Panchali-Govind pairing, but never had given much thought to Panchali-Dhristadyumna...😊

Beautiful writing indeed, just loved it...😊

Her pain as she held the corpse of her dear brother, in her hands...very heart-wrenching...

Please continue, and take your time for the Parth-Panchali one...😊

Amrita

Amrita, I am so glad u liked it. About the pain part, yeah I am kinda a huge sucker for sad stuff, so I tend to write a lot of such things 😆