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Originally posted by: soniakhanna01

Sorry for late reply

It is ok my dear

Awsom ending

YOU give it a perfect ending.

Thank you so much I'm very glad you like it

Flashback scenes is too good .

Thank you

I love this ending 👏👏

Keep writing dear.I really like your writing.👍🏼

Thank you for your support

Originally posted by: Zarine_94

Superb story

Thank you my dear

One of the most interesting stories I've ever read

I'm glad you like it

Poor, poor Madhu, suffered so much

Yes she had a hard life

Balraj bas***d, he does not deserve forgiveness, as he could do so with his own daughter, scoundrel

He is an animal. worse than animal. But he got his punishment

The RK committed many crimes, but unlike Balraj, he did it

with other girls, and not with someone from their relatives, and in general in everything is guilty Mohan, that the life of the RK has developed like this. The RK has not received proper upbringing and children always take an example from their parents

You are right but RK is guilty too. maybe his first crime he was young. But after that he was adult and responsible for everything he did. But he regrets all his sins now and wanted to repent it

Two people with a bad past have found happiness and love in each other

Right

Loved how the RK took care of Madhu

Yes they both took care of each other. They both need each other

I like very much how you described the story from beginning to end

Thank you dear I'm very happy you like it

Loved these words of the RK "People can survive without their relatives, but I can not survive without you" perfectly dear

Madhu was not only his love she was his life

Eventually Rishbala found her little happy family

Yes at last

Thanks a lot that you shared such a wonderful story

Thank you my friend

Totally loved it

Congratulations on completing your first ff dear

Originally posted by: AisiDeewangi

Amazing update

Originally posted by: .Wissam.

beautiful update

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Beautiful story...wrote it well...will miss this one .

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Awesome chapter

Beautiful ending

Thank you

Poor madhu she suffered so much

Glad that they start a new life

Loved it so much

Originally posted by: taahir004

Beautiful Chapter

Thank you

Rishabh and family accepting Islam

Yes

he planned everything in an orderly way

He is smart one

now everyone can start their lives afresh

Originally posted by: taahir004

I will return to IF at the end of July

will be extremely late in responding to PM's