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sonia khanna

@soniakhanna01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Sorry for late reply

Awsom ending

YOU give it a perfect ending.

Flashback scenes is too good .

I love this ending 👏👏

Keep writing dear.I really like your writing.👍🏼

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Zarine_94

@Zarine_94

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Superb story

One of the most interesting stories I've ever read

Poor, poor Madhu, suffered so much

Balraj bas***d, he does not deserve forgiveness, as he could do so with his own daughter, scoundrel

The RK committed many crimes, but unlike Balraj, he did it

with other girls, and not with someone from their relatives, and in general in everything is guilty Mohan, that the life of the RK has developed like this. The RK has not received proper upbringing and children always take an example from their parents

Two people with a bad past have found happiness and love in each other

Loved how the RK took care of Madhu

I like very much how you described the story from beginning to end

Loved these words of the RK "People can survive without their relatives, but I can not survive without you" perfectly dear

Eventually Rishbala found her little happy family

Thanks a lot that you shared such a wonderful story

Totally loved it

Congratulations on completing your first ff dear

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Beautiful story...wrote it well...will miss this one .

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Sayma Afrin Khan

@AfrinHrid

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Awesome chapter

Beautiful ending

Poor madhu she suffered so much

Glad that they start a new life

Loved it so much

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
Beautiful end..
Thank you

Rk planned everything..
Yes he is smart one

They left their past & started a new life..
Yes New life with new identities and new place

Awesome story..
Thank you so much dear I'm glad you like it

Will miss it..
I will miss it too

Thanks for writing in such serious topic..

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17
Beautiful end

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Srivalli.t
Awesome update!!
Lovely ending.

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg
lovely update

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Beautiful end to a beautiful story.
Thank you dear I'm very glad you like it

Rishbala started afresh with new identities and are now settled in Egypt.
Yes new start and new life

They are blessed with a baby boy. A family of four and a loving mother Padmini too.
Yes

RK planned everything coz he knew his enemies won't spare him.
He is smart one

Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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Hend Refai

@Hend_Refai

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan
Beautiful ending dear...
Thank you dear

Rk and madhu changed their name and started a new life in a village...
Yes a new life very far away from their old one

I know rk is smart...He planned everything nicely and his enemies don't know about them...Now rk and madhu blessed with a baby boy and living happily😊
Yes he is a smart one and he protected his family

Thank you so much for your lovely comment

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