RM FF ||Love - A Right Mistake|| Parts 18 Page 55 (15/10)

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ananya2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#371

Tia thanks for the PM dear.
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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#372

Part 13:

Very well written tia... I loved how u made Rk just like all men checking out Serina the sexy girl when his eyes fallen on her..."we know men r like that...they don't intentionally do that or want to go back of them leaving their loved one but it's in their nature.. LOL

Really that's wt I love from u Tia... like I said before u take care of minute details & make it very realistic...

Madhu was sad knowing that if she was hot like her he wud not take his off her & Rk didn't even realize wt hurted her... hahaha

anniee is one irritating bitch of this story along with Trish & that's y she only can show Trish her place ,but who wil show her ryt place to Annie...may be it's madhu from the upcoming heroine updates I guess...!

So Irene is keen abt making madhu heroine fr her flim... hope she gives hero role to Rk as v r addicted to see Rk Bala romance... but let's see wts in store...

Rk shoved off Annie... she is thinking he's like all men who licks her ass...

Now that Mr.oberoi had come to know abt trish interest on acting ,may b trish might get a role in Irene picture.

karan is cool guy... & not like Annie that's very gud.. already negativity from Trish & Annie is enough ha-ha...

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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#373

Part 14

Suppeerbb Update !

So Parents r missing their daughters...

Padmini is ryt coz of Malik critical thinking only madhu had to pretent to b in their good books as he thought doing wt they don't like makes them bad..

And imp thing is parents should never force children in marriage decisions..

Aww ..his madhu is going & Rk is feeling sad...

How romantic..after 3weeks she comes here only & will not go anywhere.. :)

Trish is really stupid...she doesn't know to love anyone but herself all this life till now...

she only loved herself like Rk said that y she's thinking in wrong way abt the pure love of them...

She needs some one who can show her some love & kindness in life towards her & set in ryt track & change her like madhu how she changed with Rk's love...

It's true when someone accepts her the way we r & if they r positive we become better & adopt to their positivity...

Tia..really lovely updates..

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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#374

Part 15:

This trishna I say...she's obsessed with her heroine dream... that's y she's even gng out of limits to break up her sister's love..

I think she needs someone like Karan'love in her life to get some brains & some kindness which he has even though being a rich kid..

she needs may b ryt person to show some love & lessons in life to get in track & changed behavior at least to some extent.

It's nice that Rk's love changed madhu...

When someone accepts us for the way we are... it changes to good & positivity in life & same with madhu.

Awww...Rk is already missing her...

Poor madhu is tensed abt her life changing to gud all at once suddenly...

This Rk is really innocent...& adorable at the same time...

He's thinking Annie really is sorry & called fr that only..

But is Annie chatting with some stranger ? & want to marry that prince & become princess...

I hope he's a beggar in disguise of prince...LOL

amazing update Tia...

Your back to back updates r a pleasure to read...

addicted to this story already...

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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#375

Part 16

Very nice Update..

So this Annie fooled Trish abt her mom accepting to give chance as heroine...

Gud that in this Irene oberoi is graceful & intelligent lady...she can see through ppl very well and strong too.

This Trish is so selfish that... even in serial she not to this extent...hahaha

Rk was determined to believe wtever madhu said him face to face even when he was starting to doubt madhu from Trish words... that explains how much he loves madhu...

thanks fr PM

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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#376

Part 17

Great update..!

Poor Madhu...felt sry fr her...

Trish got gud slap from her..

she's not ashamed of her act still...stupidity that in hope she asked if they broke up...

Rk is really confused & needed some time... & he loved madhu truly.. but can't come to terms with all the sudden revelations.

But madhu did ryt by telling truth.. & if he hasn't loved madhu insanely he wudnt feel disgusted with Annie around... it shows it all how he didn't felt anything when in starting he danced with sexy girls his mom arranged even though he had thought he loved trjsj & now how he didn't want to b around Annie...

fantastic Tia... story is really interesting... :)

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Nithunavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#377

Part 18 :

Marvellous update !!

Really fantastically written...

how madhu decided to get even with the world & determined to take the chance of heroine is great...

aww...my heart went out to her situation whn she was crying at the pics of Rk with other girl.

Nice that Annie is shutting out Trish..its Trish pay back time...

Fabulous of Irene that she kept it a surprise from all madhu is the heroine..

I loved karan & Raj veryy much for their open mindedness..

Mainly karan is a sweetheart I feel...coz he's of same age as rk but he didn't feel bad when his father said Rk was too handsome for role & even agreed with him..

who's this another man in heroine life ? I'm eager to know...

Most of all... Is karan final fr the hero role..

But wtevr The entry of madhu as heroine infront of all the ppl who thought she was aunty as a diva was fabulous I say !

Loveddd the update alooottt !!!

and I'm thankful for u for speedy updates... as I feel now its really getting too much interesting turn..

All the lives are taking new turn now I guess...

Rk may b accepting Irene offer I feel...it wud be great if so...

waiting wt wud b Rk decision now coz now he knows madhu is heroine & he's already smitten by her beauty & moreover jealous that karan is around her.

Trish didnt identify her sister & thinking it to be someone still...

Now I'm dying to read next update as I want to see wt wud b Trish reaction after knowing madhu the heroine hahha...

Annie is already jealous...

Plz.. update the next chap...sooonn ...

can't wait tia...hhaaha..

Loving it soo much..

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#378

Finally finally.. Most awaited update..!! Madhu introduced as heroine..!! I want this to happen.. Rk feeling uncomfortable & at the same time stunned to see madhu like this.. God.. The whole family is making flim.. Lol.. Awesome update.. Thanks for pm.!!

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Insaneniyu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#379

Awesome update
Pls don't separate them hate Trish n Annie

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Badbuddy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#380

Superb update!!!

Yeah!!! Madhu!!! She became heroine!!! Yeah!!!!! I love Irene...she is such a great person...saw potential in Madhu and decided to make film only if she is ready, and changed Madhu to beautiful girl and helped to develop her courage...and Deepali too...she is not a villian here...

Madhu had become such liar and did all wrong things just because she was being criticized for her appearence...now all the people who criticized her would be shocked and also jealous of her hehe..

Rk...he recognized her but not Trishna? why is that? Waiting to see what will Rk do now?

Trishna..her reaction was😆...she expected to be heroine...hehe...

And that Annie 😡...hate her so much...now when she would know Madhu is heroine, hehe...waiting to know what will be her reaction!!

It was an amazing update!! Thanks for pm..