RM FF ||Love - A Right Mistake|| Parts 18 Page 55 (15/10)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love - A Right Mistake


After some big misunderstanding, Madhubala thinks the man of her dreams, RK has proposed her. She runs away from her wedding for him only to find him completely oblivious to the situation. RK, who is in love with Trishna refuses to accept her and clears the misunderstanding between them. But as Madhu cannot go back after the drastic step she took, she starts to live at his house by force. While hating each other and blaming each other for their own misfortune they begin to develop feelings for each other not aware of what their destiny has planned for them.


Madhubala - a simple girl next door who is jealous of her sister style and popularity. She wants to be like Trishna but she knows she can't so she pretends to be happy with the way she is and tries to prove that she is better than her sister all the time. She can do anything to stay in her parents' good books so she agrees to marry the boy of their choice although she has a secret crush on RK but hides her feelings by showing she dislikes him as RK is after her sister

RK - a handsome boy who is a bit naive. He is helplessly in love with Trishna at least that's what he thinks. He is attracted to her outward beauty and confident personality. RK acts all confident but at times proves he is actually a coward. He always found Madhu dull and depressing so never liked her much.



















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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reserved!!!
Will comment tmrw...

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OMG! my 'Mystery' Queen is back!!! 🥳
Welcome back dear... 😃

OMG!!!😲 Rk thought he proposed Pady!!! that's hilarious! 🤣
Aww... I'm sure Madhu will get hurt when she comes to know that Rk wanted to propose Trish & not her...
why do i feel that Madhu will stop her marriage with Mukkund & tell everyone that she loves Rk & he too loves her... 😉 Then Rk can tell he didn't propose her but Padmini aunty...🤣 then Malik uncle can get mad at him for proposing his wife... 🤣 that would be so much fun nah... the whole throng of guests making an "Eewww" face at Rk for his choice... 🤣
okay, jokes apart.. interesting start... wonder how Rk & madhu will get together when Rk is attracted to Trish... & madhu is engaged to Mukku...😳
is this a mystery or love or mysterious love story??? 😆

thanks dear for coming back here with ur lovely story... 😛
i loved all ur stories... and i m sure i will love this one too... 🤗


Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its very interesting story
plz continue fast .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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definitely this story sounds different!!!

I was expecting a mystery with the title but now it seems more like a love story.

Poor Madhu! Bad enough to be ignored esp on your wedding day but all this drama! Why did her parents guilt her into this marriage!!!! She is obviously miserable.

And RK. So all he sees is Trish's outside beauty and completely ignores the person she really is.

Then ending was funny with RK thinking he proposed Padmini. I hope he realizes it was Madhu.

But now I am afraid for Madhu - what steps will she take thinking that RK loves her???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So Madhu is jealous of her own sister.
She loves Rk. But he is after Trishna. She has confident personality. Rk seems he is not sure about his feeling.He is seeing Madhu's outer appearance only. When he sees her heart, he'll fall in love with her. So, Madhu is marrying some other person just to come in good book of her parents. Oh no!! Hope this marriage ends.
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Edited by kaustavi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!amazing start dear..
excited for next update!!!!
poor rk,going to propose trishna
propose madhu and thinks he propose padmini.
pls update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Quite an interesting start buddy!! 👏

Madhu would be beautiful with or without specs. But here Trishna is more beautiful than her sister. She wants to be a model...Not bad! But she looks to be an arrogant one. Since she refused the proposal Madhu is a substitute? Why should see bear for her sister? Their parents shouldn't have forced her.

Madhu...fallen for RK but can't refuse the proposal since her lover is after her sister. She is burdened with the marriage. At last RK's mistaken confession makes her happy...I hope she doesn't do anything hastily. RK is neither aware of her love nor ready to make any commitments.

Coming to RK...Madhu's dream man but his dream girl is Trishna! Lol I am finding him quite funny here...he is so afraid to confess his so called love to the confident Trishna! The last part esp where he thought that Padmini heard it!...it was 😆😆 After confessing he slipped away embarassed! So he fell for the outer beauty

Thanks for PM. Do continue soon 😃
Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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🤣 🤣 hahaha.. rofl... the last part was superb..
reading the title, i thought..😆..
rk is different, down to the earth type...
madhu in bhenji style, but still has lot of attitude.
Rk's proposal was awesome..
But consequence🤣 omg..
Next time Rl WONT DO ANYTHING woth lights off🤣
Awesome.. Loved it !!!.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start,
Madhu and Mukund are going to get married and she was forced to agree for this marriage,
Rk loves trishna and he wants to propose trishna but he proposed madhu thinking her as trishna
last part was funny he is thinking he proposed padmini,
continue soon, thanks for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really super update.
Madhu is going to marry mukund.But that is the compulsion.
Rk love trishna.Poor Rk.
Proposal is nice.What madhu is going to do?
Last part is funny.Rk thinks ,he proposed to padmini like that.
Plz update fast.

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