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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Maria must say you are a brilliant writer, i am in a trance reading the update, i am transported in their world while reading it. Fantastic update, loved it.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM Maria.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

Damn!! That was one intense chapter!! That pain, the gore, that fierce passion in all aspects, be that the love for a brother, a friend, a crush or just simply the hatred for an enemy. Girl, you nailed every single emotion with perfection! 👏 Not sure if any of your other readers have noticed or not, but me having read and caught up with this story just recently, i can see the huge and amazing development in your writing! You have just been getting better and better. Believe me on that. Did i even mention how much I loved this chapter?! Like when the first part came to an end, i was just flipping out here for the next part! All i could think of was "This girl better not leave me at such a cliffhanger" and hank god you didn't! But if i am not wrong then there still is a second half to this chapter right? Woman, you better upload that soon, or believe me i will spam (I have done it before, and i even have a spamming team so do not challenge me okay? 😆


Meera + Virat
Now because she didn't have much in this chapter (or just part 1 of it 😛 ) there isn't much to say but we got to know how much Viraj actually means to her. He's her best friend, who just happens to have fallen for her (ah, this destroys so many pure relationships *shakes head*), and she obviously wants to keep him in her life because come on, who would want to lose their best friend right? Him giving her a condition was a very shit move to be honest. I like him but then giving options to a person who you love and care about just because she has feelings for someone else, meh idk, just seems very hurtful to me (for Meera i mean).

And well, finally got to see more of the Meera and Rishaan ship 😉 What's their couple name btw? MeShaan? RishEra? MeRi? RiMe? RM2? 😆 Hahah, well until you decide on a ship name i'll call the MeShaan just because RishEra reminds me of RishBlala and we all know that they aren't even the reincarnated version of them 😆 Now since the beginning Meera has been showing clear interest in Rishaan who appreciates her alright but hasn't shown any signs of attraction back. But, here we got to see more of Meera's crush on him, the desperation of knowing that he is ine and that the news is a false, the desperation of not hearing anything else, that kind of desperation which made her break down!

I know i am probably wrong, but please tell me that when he was looking at the screen and saw 'her' it was Meera. For some reason i just don't think it was Maya, because first, no name was mentioned, second Meera is his PA so she would be present at those interview panels too, where he would have gotten a small glimpse from, and last but not least, because it's you writing it! 😆 You fooled us for about a good 8/9 chapters making us believe Rishaan is Rishabh, but nah, it turned out it was Rudra, so sorry to say, i am not trusting you on couple matters now 😆

Maya
Gosh I already feel like my comment is getting way too long and that you will probably just end up skipping it due to it's length. But as I told you in my last comment, I hadn't commented much about the plot or it's characters, so you will just have to put up with my essay long comment dear 😆 😉

Anyway off to Maya! Now she has been intriguing from the start! Especially those nightmares, which i feel you kinda forgot about. At the beginning you mention how she either has sleepless nights due to those 'Madhu' nightmares or just past nightmares with Big Joe (i think that was the name right), and even same goes to Rishaan, both were taking sleeping tablets because either they wouldn't sleep at night. I know you have shown it at various times, especially with Maya, but i think i'd like to see Rishaan's struggle too. And now his past is kinda coming out too.

Okay back to Maya (yea i get distracted a lot 😆), now seeing her panicking was something i loved. Not because she was panicking and all, because i got to see the Maya you introduced us to. The one with Anxiety and panic attacks. It just add's so much to her character because she isn't just fighting a battle with life and problems around her or related to her. No, she is fighting a battle with herself too. Because Panic attacks are usually triggered with memories that haunt you as a person, gosh I LOVE Depth in characters!!

I kinda like the relation Maya and Rishaan share, i know she explained to Meera, but her questioning her back kinda set me off guard too. But I'd like to believe that them two actually just share a friendly bond, someone whom she can trust and rely on. Kind of like a best friend whom you look up to and turn to in times of need. I would love to read more about these two, and see this special bond of their develop.

Ah!! And that phone call😳 They both trusted in each other and soothed one another's pain. Gosh the intensity was erupting in that scene!! Tbh, whenever we get a scene with Maya and Rudra, its intense. And I believe that will be the key to their attraction towards one another. Rudra might love her already but let's not forget, he loves Madhu and as Rishabh, the Rudra is yet to fall for Maya. The same goes for Maya, she too has to fall for him, because they are two whole new beings brought up in two different continents with two very disturbing pasts. So yes i think this un-named bond, trust and comfort which they receive from each other will make them fall for each other. And what shall be the name of this ship? 😉

Shaurya
Well I like him just for the psychopath he is 😆 Okay I know how you gave a note and all, saying how it's gonna get dark and all, and we should prepare ourselves or that we might not even like it. But Girl, I LOVE THIS!! You just made me like this story all the me just by adding this violence and torture in it, because reading those other mushy mushy romantic stories is torture!! One needs pain to make a story seem more energetic! (P.S. Believe me i am not a psycho 😆) But i really enjoy reading this obsessive, insane and manic killer!!! I want to know more about the younger him and how and why exactly he killed RishBala - would be such a better closure than the one the show gave us *sight*. And i am interested in finding out if he knows or has doubts of Maya and one of the RK's being reincarnated? I know to any person to believe such would be crazy but he is a director right? A story teller. Plus a Maniac. It shouldn't be too hard for him to believe because story tellers have this broad imagination in which anything can fit in tbh.

Okay gonna cut him short because i still have the RK's to go through and already this must be as long as your update 😆

Rudra
As i have said before, it still blows my mind that he has the memories of two lives in that brain of his! And I do not just mean romantic memories, but also all his relations with people, his mother, his father, bittuji, Sasuma, ect. And then he has the memories as Rudra, the childhood which will soon be revealed, his brother, Maya. You get what I mean? Crazy!! How hasn't this guy yet suffered from some brain hemorrhage?! 😆

But Yh I am so glad we are finally seeing more of the RK brothers!! I know they care for one another, don't want anyone to say a word against the other but we have never seen them share a real bond. A bond which brother share, who are friends and confine in each other. We know they used to in the past, but something obviously happened which broke our Batman Robin hearts 😭. But then in this chapter we saw how vulnerable Rudra became having maybe lost his brother again. To darkness??

Well phone call, I already mentioned earlier, so lets not repeat that. But yes i would want him to realise and accept that Maya is in fact not Madhu. And he needs to stop looking at her through Rishabh's eyes, but find, love and cherish Maya through Rudra.

Rishaan
Finally!! Made it!! See, i was saving the best fr the last 😆 and am not gonna lie to you, but Rishaan is my favourite character!! I know I should be going gaga over Rudra but it's this guy who keeps me on my feet wanting and craving for more! Hits wits are firstly on point! That attitude is kick ass! He is mysterious! And has a intense and deep past, which gains him brownie points from my side!! 😆 So warning you, you better return Rishaan in one piece or else... *squints eyes*

The torture was beautiful *wipes tear*, but it's that little flashback which caught my attention! I am guessing that he might be his father, and actually I don't know what to even say right now about that. The fact that he knew the belt by weight? The fact that he didn't try to stop his? Resist? Scream for help? My poor heart goes out to him!! 😭 And then the fact that he has been living under a mask all these years, under the mask of the great Superstar RK. He became him, first I always thought it was to get his hype up, because not only did he share the same initials but also that face! But now, it makes me question if he just wanted to escape his own life, live through another's, taste that stardom, the kind that consumes you, drugs you, makes you ride high (his words).

And him and Meera, idk i just have this feeling he was thinking about her when he saw her on TV, because even though he has shown no signs of attraction, he still kept her as his PA since this long. Yes she might be good at her job, but this is the superstar who has replaced countless PA's and yet he did not let her leave. He knows she likes him and i think maybe he does too but considering his past he doesn't want her to get close to him. Rather be a mean brat so that she can hate on him. I am possibly thinking it all wrong, but hey let me dream okay 😆.

Okay I am to tired to continue so whatever i left out, i'll add it with the next part of this chapter comment. Now goodnight I am off to bed 🥱

And Hopefully i didn't bore you with my essay 😆


Are you kidding? I loved loved loved your comment! Will reply to you in detail later...
You can write as many essays you want... I love writing (reading) such essays too... but I guess you already know that...😆 and don't worry... your comment will never be longer than my chapters... 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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⭐️Superrbbb yaarrr. U just nailed it, seriously. I dont hav wrds to xplain. Outstanding😊. Sooo d past s going to open up. Hmmm lets seee. Again & Again want to say daatt. Itz a DHAMAKEDAR part. May god blz u yaar, itz a blssing dat u hav a talent lik writting. Stay happy & Blssd. And plzzz post nxt part soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲 my god...pl...in the next chap...let rudra find rishaan n let him get healed...pl give some happy momebnts in all their lives...pl..pl..


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Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

Damn!! That was one intense chapter!! Told you so! 😆That pain, the gore, that fierce passion in all aspects, be that the love for a brother, a friend, a crush or just simply the hatred for an enemy. Girl, you nailed every single emotion with perfection! 👏 Thank you so much! Not sure if any of your other readers have noticed or not, but me having read and caught up with this story just recently, i can see the huge and amazing development in your writing! You have just been getting better and better. Believe me on that. Thank you so much! I always hope to get better! But I am happy to know that you noticed there is improvement in my work. Did i even mention how much I loved this chapter?! Like when the first part came to an end, i was just flipping out here for the next part! All i could think of was "This girl better not leave me at such a cliffhanger" and hank god you didn't! Hahah! 😆 But if i am not wrong then there still is a second half to this chapter right? Woman, you better upload that soon, or believe me i will spam (I have done it before, and i even have a spamming team so do not challenge me okay? 😆 Yes there is a second part... but I guess everyone needs time processing and analyzing this chapter. And a little breather. Don't worry, will update soon!


Meera + Virat
Now because she didn't have much in this chapter (or just part 1 of it 😛 ) there isn't much to say but we got to know how much Viraj actually means to her. He's her best friend, who just happens to have fallen for her (ah, this destroys so many pure relationships *shakes head* Tell me about it!), and she obviously wants to keep him in her life because come on, who would want to lose their best friend right? Him giving her a condition was a very shit move to be honest. I like him but then giving options to a person who you love and care about just because she has feelings for someone else, meh idk, just seems very hurtful to me (for Meera i mean).
I agree with you, from Meera's point of view. No one understands how she feels. Everyone keeps telling her to move on... like it is that simple. If it were she would have done it. So, she is fighting for her right to love with everyone important in her life and the one she is fighting for, couldn't care less, as it seems.
But yes, coming to Viraj now. See... he is just like Meera but a little more open about his feelings. He has been in love with her since they were kids. He knows her well.. he knows she is going to fall if she keeps running after the moon she can never touch... He has been her friend as much as he could, but now he is done. He is human only and it's difficult being friends with a person you love, especially if they are hopelessly in love with someone else who doesn't care about them. He is kind of giving her tough love... because after all... like Meera, he cannot let go either. And he believes that they can have a beautiful life together. Meera asking him to move on was also selfish. It's a little complicated. 😆

And well, finally got to see more of the Meera and Rishaan ship 😉 What's their couple name btw? MeShaan? RishEra? MeRi? RiMe? RM2? 😆 Hahah, well until you decide on a ship name i'll call the MeShaan just because RishEra reminds me of RishBlala and we all know that they aren't even the reincarnated version of them 😆 Now since the beginning Meera has been showing clear interest in Rishaan who appreciates her alright but hasn't shown any signs of attraction back. But, here we got to see more of Meera's crush on him, the desperation of knowing that he is ine and that the news is a false, the desperation of not hearing anything else, that kind of desperation which made her break down!
Haha! Ship names... ummm... you can name them whatever... don't go aboard just yet. 😛 It's much more than a crush for Meera. She is in love with him... but more on that a little later... 😉😆
I know i am probably wrong, but please tell me that when he was looking at the screen and saw 'her' it was Meera. For some reason i just don't think it was Maya, because first, no name was mentioned, second Meera is his PA so she would be present at those interview panels too, where he would have gotten a small glimpse from, and last but not least, because it's you writing it! 😆 You fooled us for about a good 8/9 chapters making us believe Rishaan is Rishabh, but nah, it turned out it was Rudra, so sorry to say, i am not trusting you on couple matters now 😆
Oh my! 😲😆 Okay... I get why you don't trust me... hurts... but okay. 😆 I am sorry.. but that was Maya. see how the whole scene went. Rishaan was looking at clips of his movies and old onscreen interviews on television and he saw her with him... in a scene of his last movie. Who did he work in his last movie with? And who bewitches Shaurya... as he says?
Maya
Gosh I already feel like my comment is getting way too long and that you will probably just end up skipping it due to it's length. I love long comments! So, don't worry! 😆 But as I told you in my last comment, I hadn't commented much about the plot or it's characters, so you will just have to put up with my essay long comment dear 😆 😉 Gladly!

Anyway off to Maya! Now she has been intriguing from the start! Especially those nightmares, which i feel you kinda forgot about. No, I didn't.😆 At the beginning you mention how she either has sleepless nights due to those 'Madhu' nightmares or just past nightmares with Big Joe (i think that was the name right), and even same goes to Rishaan, both were taking sleeping tablets because either they wouldn't sleep at night. She still pretty much sleeps either drunk or afte rtaking tablets... nothing has changed. And yes... Rishaan takes pills too. If I am not telling you something, doesn't mean it's not happening. 😉 I know you have shown it at various times, especially with Maya, but i think i'd like to see Rishaan's struggle too. And now his past is kinda coming out too. Rishaan struggles in his own way... He has struggled all his life...

Okay back to Maya (yea i get distracted a lot 😆), now seeing her panicking was something i loved. Not because she was panicking and all, because i got to see the Maya you introduced us to. The one with Anxiety and panic attacks. It just add's so much to her character because she isn't just fighting a battle with life and problems around her or related to her. No, she is fighting a battle with herself too. Because Panic attacks are usually triggered with memories that haunt you as a person, gosh I LOVE Depth in characters!! Thank you so much! I am glad you are able to understand the complexity of the characters so well.

I kinda like the relation Maya and Rishaan share, i know she explained to Meera, but her questioning her back kinda set me off guard too. But I'd like to believe that them two actually just share a friendly bond, someone whom she can trust and rely on. Kind of like a best friend whom you look up to and turn to in times of need. I would love to read more about these two, and see this special bond of their develop.
It is a very special bond actually... They understand each other... because as you see... there are some similarities in their struggles through life... and something else that I shouldn't say right now... It's more than just friendship. It's more like companionship.. as for Meera's cross-question... umm... you will see.
Ah!! And that phone call😳 They both trusted in each other and soothed one another's pain. Gosh the intensity was erupting in that scene!! Tbh, whenever we get a scene with Maya and Rudra, its intense. And I believe that will be the key to their attraction towards one another. Rudra might love her already but let's not forget, he loves Madhu and as Rishabh, the Rudra is yet to fall for Maya. The same goes for Maya, she too has to fall for him, because they are two whole new beings brought up in two different continents with two very disturbing pasts. So yes i think this un-named bond, trust and comfort which they receive from each other will make them fall for each other. And what shall be the name of this ship? 😉
Bang on! That's all I will say!and also... yes... thank you! 😆
Shaurya
Well I like him just for the psychopath he is 😆 Okay I know how you gave a note and all, saying how it's gonna get dark and all, and we should prepare ourselves or that we might not even like it. But Girl, I LOVE THIS!! You just made me like this story all the me just by adding this violence and torture in it, because reading those other mushy mushy romantic stories is torture!! One needs pain to make a story seem more energetic! (P.S. Believe me i am not a psycho 😆) But i really enjoy reading this obsessive, insane and manic killer!!! I want to know more about the younger him and how and why exactly he killed RishBala - would be such a better closure than the one the show gave us *sight*. And i am interested in finding out if he knows or has doubts of Maya and one of the RK's being reincarnated? I know to any person to believe such would be crazy but he is a director right? A story teller. Plus a Maniac. It shouldn't be too hard for him to believe because story tellers have this broad imagination in which anything can fit in tbh.
I am actually happy you like Shaurya. Doesn't make you a psycho... 😆 I think.. 🤔 but who am I to say... I like him too actually... he is very very twisted and dark... I always love antagonists in books and movies. I always want the antagonists to be strong and complicated and a couple of steps ahead the other characters because it makes for a good plot. It adds to the story and helps our protagonist grow and develop enough to beat him. Make them better characters. So, I actually like Shaurya a lot. 😆 ... anyway... yes you will learn more about him. He is a very integral part of the story. The story started with him, didn't it? Maya's dream/flashback? About him knowing about the reincarnation... actually no.. he doesn't really. But, he is... you know I cannot say much. Remind me to explain it to you after the next chapter, if you still don't get it then.
Okay gonna cut him short because i still have the RK's to go through and already this must be as long as your update 😆
@Bold- Never gonna happen! 😆
Rudra
As i have said before, it still blows my mind that he has the memories of two lives in that brain of his! And I do not just mean romantic memories, but also all his relations with people, his mother, his father, bittuji, Sasuma, ect. And then he has the memories as Rudra, the childhood which will soon be revealed, his brother, Maya. You get what I mean? Crazy!! How hasn't this guy yet suffered from some brain hemorrhage?! 😆
Haha! That's a very valid question! And an interesting idea. 😛😆
But Yh I am so glad we are finally seeing more of the RK brothers!! I know they care for one another, don't want anyone to say a word against the other but we have never seen them share a real bond. A bond which brother share, who are friends and confine in each other. We know they used to in the past, but something obviously happened which broke our Batman Robin hearts 😭. But then in this chapter we saw how vulnerable Rudra became having maybe lost his brother again. To darkness??
Yes, something definitely happened. Things are very different now... but they still love each other deeply.
Well phone call, I already mentioned earlier, so lets not repeat that. But yes i would want him to realise and accept that Maya is in fact not Madhu. And he needs to stop looking at her through Rishabh's eyes, but find, love and cherish Maya through Rudra.
Bang on, again! 😆
Rishaan
Finally!! Made it!! See, i was saving the best fr the last 😆 and am not gonna lie to you, but Rishaan is my favourite character!! I know I should be going gaga over Rudra but it's this guy who keeps me on my feet wanting and craving for more! Hits wits are firstly on point! That attitude is kick ass! He is mysterious! And has a intense and deep past, which gains him brownie points from my side!! 😆 So warning you, you better return Rishaan in one piece or else... *squints eyes*
That actually makes me very happy. Rishaan is very special to me. He is a character that wrote his own journey in my mind. And what a journey... you will see.. 😆 But about Rudra... don't judge him yet. I have been telling people for so long.. you don't know him. I mean you think you do because he has the most monologues and because it looks like he is ahead of everyone... already figured out his past... he is just RK trying to get his Biwi... no... there is much more to him. So, hold your judgement on him. 😉
@Bold- Cannot exactly promise you that. 😛😆
The torture was beautiful *wipes tear*, but it's that little flashback which caught my attention! I am guessing that he might be his father, and actually I don't know what to even say right now about that. The fact that he knew the belt by weight? The fact that he didn't try to stop his? Resist? Scream for help? My poor heart goes out to him!! 😭 And then the fact that he has been living under a mask all these years, under the mask of the great Superstar RK. He became him, first I always thought it was to get his hype up, because not only did he share the same initials but also that face! But now, it makes me question if he just wanted to escape his own life, live through another's, taste that stardom, the kind that consumes you, drugs you, makes you ride high (his words).
Okay obviously, I cannot tell you much right now... I am trying my best though (without spoiling anything) because I see many people are confused... I am hoping this may help them understand everything better. But yeah... I will say... that's a good analysis. 😉
And him and Meera, idk i just have this feeling he was thinking about her when he saw her on TV, because even though he has shown no signs of attraction, he still kept her as his PA since this long. Yes she might be good at her job, but this is the superstar who has replaced countless PA's and yet he did not let her leave. He knows she likes him and i think maybe he does too but considering his past he doesn't want her to get close to him. Rather be a mean brat so that she can hate on him. I am possibly thinking it all wrong, but hey let me dream okay 😆.
Yes... he might or might not feel something for her ... I mean he kept her with him. She is over-qualified and good at her job... are good enough reasons actually. 😆 ... But yeah... I am not going to brush aside this theory. But no... that was Maya he was thinking about. But you can dream. I am totally okay with it. 😆
Okay I am to tired to continue so whatever i left out, i'll add it with the next part of this chapter comment. Now goodnight I am off to bed 🥱
Alright. Looking forward to your next comment. 😆
And Hopefully i didn't bore you with my essay 😆


Thank you so much for such an amazing review and analysis... I won't call it just a comment. 😆
I hope I answered some of your questions, if not all. If you still want to discuss or ask anything. Go ahead. And you can write as many essays as you want.. as a blabbermouth, I actually encourage it. 😆
Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 9 years ago
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#86

Originally posted by: mimibm

Was waiting for the update...now let me read it...😆

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You know what Maria...you have made a papri chat of my brain with your super-duper-hyper fantastic (of the highest degree) update... I will come back to the rest of the characters later, but tell me if I am over-analysing...about Reeshan...I remember vaguely that in the beginning of the story as you had depicted Rudra's visions from his past life, there were some hints about some darkness in Reeshan (don't remember last or present life)...what sinister truths are you hiding from us that might shock us more than Shaurya's crimes...girl, you are a genius in shady affairs 😆...what could it be that Reeshan is distracted from his inhuman pain inflicted by the evil Shaurya? What is it that Rudra regrets about and blames himself for Reeshan's predicament? What was that flashback about child abuse? Maria...the nation wants to know!! 😆😆
Sorry for spamming with my gibberish..but truly my brain is now a dahivada with everything mixed beyond recognition...and I guess that was your soul intention..
Ok, now Madhu and Meera...the same vacuum I feel between Rudra and Reeshan...this world of 'Entwined' has numerous blackholes that do not let the characters reach out to each other...but Meera's intensity of her feeling towards Reeshan comes out in her state of utter shock and despair on hearing the kidnap news...Maya is admitting about her forgiveness for Reeshan...for what? Did I miss something conspicuous or am I suffering from amnesia?
After all the crap I said so far, I have something to confess...I skipped some of the gory scenes of torture you portrayed...because I don't trust you...you write so realistically that I end up having nightmares 😛😆
Anyway...to retrieve my brain I need some answers and hope to get them soon in the upcoming updates...till then...shabbakhair..


Oh God...😲 😆 Your comment made me laugh! 😆
I did not mean to do that... really. I hope your brain gets better soon... 😆
Mimi.. I would recommend you to not skip anything ... everything is important... trust me. If you can then read it... otherwise you might not get everything.
Tell me if you do and still don't get it... I will try explaining you as much as I can without spoiling anything.
I will answer your question related to Maya right now... See... when Maya confided in Rishaan... she trusted him... she opened up to him... It was a huge deal for her... you have to understand. It can be a huge deal for anyone... but it is Maya. She is very very closed off... very isolated and in many ways rigid. And what happened next day? Rishaan told her he told his brother everything without even consulting her first, let alone asking permission. That's an entirely different matter that we know Rudra found it on his own and Rishaan lied to her. But she felt betrayed. And after that they never got to talk. even when he left, they did not get to talk. But now, somehow, she had had time to think and cool down and understand... after talking to Rudra and then Viraj... she was ready to forgive him.. not just for his betrayal but also for the fact that he brought her here... to Bollywood and everything else... but then... well.. Shaurya happened. 😆
As for your questions related to Rishaan... I would say read all of it ... then if you don't get ask... and some of your questions might get answered in the next chapter. Though I am sure you will have many questions after that as well... but oh well... 😆...
And no... Rishaan doesn't have a past life that I know of... 🤔😆 ... it was this life I always referred to when talking about his past.
And that flashback about child abuse was just that... child abuse. 😆 ... but yes there might be a little more to it. 😉

I hope... I answered your questions... if you still have some ... you can ask.. though I might not tell you everything. Don't want to spoil anything 😆

But seriously.. I do recommend you to read the whole chapter. I hope you can.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I knew you wouldn't trust me 😆 ...but I had a very horrible nightmare last night as well, with people being tortured and their ears being torn off!! 😕

But seriously Maria, that is not your problem, it's just that I am faint-hearted and live alone, so sometimes graphic descriptions give me nightmares 🤢

But I have decided to go through the chapter again...in broad day light...and if I still have some pressing questions will pm you and bother you with my gibberish 😛
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Originally posted by: mimibm

I knew you wouldn't trust me 😆 ...but I had a very horrible nightmare last night as well, with people being tortured and their ears being torn off!! 😕

But seriously Maria, that is not your problem, it's just that I am faint-hearted and live alone, so sometimes graphic descriptions give me nightmares 🤢

But I have decided to go through the chapter again...in broad day light...and if I still have some pressing questions will pm you and bother you with my gibberish 😛


Oh my! I am so sorry.
I know you said it's not my fault and all.. but I feel bad. Sorry.
And yes... try if you can... but I am telling the next chapter is gruesome as well.. and pretty much... like this one... or worse.. I don't know. But prepare yourself... read it in public... 😆 ... whatever makes you feel better. But yeah.. you can ask me questions... here or on PM... your call.. it's fine by me. will be happy to discuss with you.
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Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis


Thank you so much for such an amazing review and analysis... I won't call it just a comment. 😆 Well you deserved it! I hardly ever even comment, your story however just is amazing that i couldn't help but analyse, even though i don't analyse text much but it's not that different from TV and Film as you write in great detail, giving me a great image to study 😆
I hope I answered some of your questions, if not all. If you still want to discuss or ask anything. Go ahead. And you can write as many essays as you want.. as a blabbermouth, I actually encourage it. 😆 For your story, i'll make sure to analyse every once in a while if not every chapter!

Btw, I am Lubeeda but you may call me whatever you prefer as i know it's quite a mouthful 😆

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@Lubeeda: It's not going to be a TVD rehash (I hope you get the reference)... don't worry. Just wait till chapter 29. You will see what I mean.

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