RISHBALA FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT - (Last Part Updated on Pg 12 - 14/7) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Beautifully written, loved it, i think Madhu is going to take revenge on R.K by breaking his heart and then she will live her life in guilt.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Loved how there are role reversals in this story, Madhu is arrogant, evil and Dips is innocent.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please update soon and PM me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Roch-

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Yay! I'm first to comment Such a promising plot! 👏 I liked the change of the Madhu's characterization, which is apart from the typical innocent Madhu like in every other story 👍🏼 Infact you made Deepali the innocent one 😆 Good going!

Madhu used to trouble Deepali & every time RK was there to save Deepali & also to give a reality check on Madhu 😉 One incident made Madhu realize her mistakes & later she became good friends with RK & Deepali. Time passed by & RK-Madhu fell in love with each other

RK is all geared up to propose Madhu in the farewell party 😳 Deepali is hurt with the fact that RK loves Madhu. OMG what did Madhu mutter looking at the mirror? 😲 I sense something bad! I feel like Madhu been pretending to be in love with RK & she wants to ditch him 😈 OMG I'm so into this story It's gonna be super awesome to read! & yeah your title gives that kind of a clue 😉😆


All the best with this story! 🤗Looking forward to read the further updates. Please update soon! or I'll keep pestering you 😆


Thanx a lot Roch Dear 😳 Your comments means a lot to me . Well to know what happens next is for you to read . I will update it soon Dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lathaprasad

beautifully writtend
loved the change in characters of madhu and deepali
so madhu will ditches rk and later she will be in forever with guilt
plz cont soon 😊


Thanks a lot Dear that you liked this role reversal 😛 . And what happens next is for you to read out so I will try to update the story soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: twinklev20

Excellent plot...but looks like some twist is coming up...

pls update soon...


Thanks a lot Dear that you are hooked up to the plot 😊 Well its for you to read to find if there's any twist or not 😆. I will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucygrey21

wow nice start. waiting for next part


Thanks a tonn Dear 😳 I will try to update soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Interesting update soon


Thanks a lot for your comments 😊 Will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Glad Dear that you liked the starting of the story 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: parimaniya

awesome start...so madhu will ditches rk and later she will be in forever with guilt?...bt honestly says dont want rk-madhu separated... cant see them like that...so pls dont do sad ending...waiting 4 next...plz cont soon


Thanks a lot Dear for your words 😳 Well what happens next in the story is for you to read and find out .😆 I will try to update the next part soon 😊

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