RISHBALA FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT - (Last Part Updated on Pg 12 - 14/7)

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Superb end i totally agree with this end

P.s. pls write more

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

superb ending for this story
justifies title very well
keep writing dear 😊

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Glad that you posted the final part.

I too love Rishbala, but in the end its a story.

kudos for trying a different concept. It was good.

keep writing.

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Hey its nice end...!! Ur story as a creative thinking skills it rocked for Sure...😊 U r gud at ur story telling skill too !!

But I have something to say dear...about which u mentioned in ur note Ishu...Actually Every reader must welcome new creative writings from a writer...but here...its a Forum and its a fan based forum totally and after serial closed we all redeem ourselves by reading these lovely stories where we get atlast Rishbala togetherness with not so much of negativity and no evilness winning over much like in our Saurabh tiwari or KSoap serials...its all about here getting a new fresh story lines with less negativity and more of Rishbala based Stories...All wud enjoy such...

And its a gud concept u have written but wer as wen u come to fan based forums like this it wud hurt some people...they dont agree with naturality its obvious...if u have posted this story in wattpad or some non fan based forums or blogs ur story and writing wud never get cricticized for sure...coz it is well written...But we fans want always to see wtever may be to Rishbala together...again if we read stories like Sultan coming in btwn and marrying madhu or Rk marrying with dips it wud surely make every fan upset...and thats the reason only few ppl commented like that and even me if u felt upset abt even mine comment too...otherwise there's nothing against u and ur writings...and ur first story is simply Awsome Girl...keep writing !!😃

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

chapter-3 rk lost his mom... Quiet painful... Rk finds love in dipali... I should be hating depali for this but cant as she doesnt show any traits that of crapy cranky womaN

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

ch-4 if dipali would be in madhu's place i would be very happy as am used to it but with madhu it feels different... Justified ending with the title... !!! Rk gave her both recap & precap... !!!