RISHBALA FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT - (Last Part Updated on Pg 12 - 14/7)

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: pirl18
Nice n alag hatke starting 😉
But plz don't saprate rishbala
Plsh 😳

Aww pirl Dear 😳 .I am glad that you liked the starting 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Very interesting.
liked the way you developed the characters,Madhu is evil and Deepali is innocent and RK the saviour.
i think Madhu is pretending and is going to dump RK.
waiting to read more.

Thanks a lot Dear for your comments 😳 Glad , that you liked this role reversal . Will try to update asap 😳

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
you had to stop there?? I have a bad feeling about what is going to happen...

The suspense is great and your writing is very good. I am looking forward to the next part.

🤣 To create suspense I thought to stop there . Well what's going to happen next is for you to read and find out 😳 I will try to update the next part asap 😊

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: ananya2010
Beautifully written, loved it, i think Madhu is going to take revenge on R.K by breaking his heart and then she will live her life in guilt.

Thanks a tonn Dear 😳 Glad you liked this role reversal 😊 . Keep reading to know whats gonna happen next 😛

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Nithunavi
Very interesting and awsome...!!

Thanks a lot Dear that you liked the starting 😳 Keep reading to know what happens next 😊

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Hey Can i know when is ur next update...Im looking forward for the suspense to be revealed...

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nithunavi
Hey Can i know when is ur next update...Im looking forward for the suspense to be revealed...

🤣 OMG I din't knew that the story created so much of suspense and I was scared here of public reaction 😆 . Nithu I will try to update by tomorrow noon 😳

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Nithunavi

@Nithunavi

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: BurnThemAll

🤣 OMG I din't knew that the story created so much of suspense and I was scared here of public reaction 😆 . Nithu I will try to update by tomorrow noon 😳

Hehe...dont worry everybody must encourage every writer here...everybody has their unique ways of writings and no one is less or more and everyone is learning more day by day...So no need of insecure feelings...All of them love reading on Rishbala...And thanks for info about update...

And Check out my stories too which are on Rishbala here...may be u like them :) and ur good name plz...! 😃

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Hehe...dont worry everybody must encourage every writer here...everybody has their unique ways of writings and no one is less or more and everyone is learning more day by day...So no need of insecure feelings...All of them love reading on Rishbala...And thanks for info about update...
And Check out my stories too which are on Rishbala here...may be u like them :) and ur good name plz...! 😃

Thanks a lot Nithu 😊 I will surely read your stories once I m free 😳 . You can call me Ishu 😆

and yeah you are right that every one has a unique style of thinking the plot and stories . Everyone in this forum is a good writer 😳

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Charlotte

@HypocriteLover

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

i love this. i cant believe Madhu will change overnight. why i feel she is going to ditch him and thats why she did all this drama to take revenge on him. waiting to read more.

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