RISHBALA FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT - (Last Part Updated on Pg 12 - 14/7) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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am blown up with this story.. Best part madhu BBBed dipali or else its always dipali who trouble madhu... Madhu's character is different and i lyk it... I dnt knw bt i have a feeling that madhu gonna break rk's heart.. She hasnt 4Gt her insUlt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cont. Soon... Eagerly waiting for next part...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: HypocriteLover

i love this. i cant believe Madhu will change overnight. why i feel she is going to ditch him and thats why she did all this drama to take revenge on him. waiting to read more.


Glad dear that you liked the update 😳 well lets look if your guess was correct or not 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: as-Sweet

am blown up with this story.. Best part madhu BBBed dipali or else its always dipali who trouble madhu... Madhu's character is different and i lyk it... I dnt knw bt i have a feeling that madhu gonna break rk's heart.. She hasnt 4Gt her insUlt


Glad Dear that you are hooked up to the story . Well what happens next is for you to read out 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OK Guys here is the next Part . I hope you will enjoy it 😊


PART 2




*In college Hall*

Everyone were looking the best today since it was their farewell night . RK was looking smoking hot and all girls were just ogling at him making their boys jealous of RK . Suddenly every boy looks towards the main entrance of the hall .

Madhubala was coming in a dark red summer knee length dress looking evergreen that RK in fact no boy could take their eyes from her .

Madhu (coming near RK) - RK stop looking at me like that . Everyone is looking at us . Have some shame .

RK (smirking) - What can I do Madhu you are looking breathtakingly gorgeous that I can't help myself from seeing you .

Madhu smiles looking at him

*Soon the party starts and everybody joins the dance floor*

RK & Madhu also joins the dance floor on the song Raabta (from Agent Vinod) . Deepali standing at one corner of the hall looks at them who were smiling looking at each other .

Madhu - RK don't you think that you need to say something to me which I am longing to hear ?

RK (knowing what she meant but still pretending) - What are you talking about Madhu . What do you want to hear from me ?

Madhu (faking anger) - Haww RK you are so mean . You very well know what I mean . I will not talk to you .

And saying so she leaves from the dance floor . When suddenly the music stops and the spotlight fells on Madhu . She looks to see towards RK who was holding the mike and smiling at her .

RK - Madhu so now the time has come to say those things which you always wanted to hear from me . (While saying this he comes closer to Madhu) .

RK (bending on his knees) - Madhu I love you so much . I know that I am not that rich in status like you but my heart is very rich to love you and keep you like a princess forever . I will always stay by your side and will always keep you happy . I love you a lot Madhu . Will you be mine ?

*Suddenly they both hear laughter sounds from somewhere*

Latika - Omg . Just look at him . Poor him .

Arjun & Centaine - Seriously RK you are so good .

Madhu - Guys did you all hear what Rishabh Kundra said . That he loves me and wants to marry me . He will keep me like a princess . (looking at RK)Princess my foot.

RK (shocked) - Madhu ... whats all this . Why are you talking like this ?

Madhu - Still you din't understand anything RK . OMG ! you are such a fool . Luckily I am going to be spared now .

RK - I din't understand Madhu ?? You are playing a prank ?

Madhu - Lol . I was playing a game till now RK . Now its time to end this game because I am getting bored of this game . So you think that Madhubala Malik will love and marry a middle class good for nothing looser like you . This was my revenge on you RK , to make you fall for me and humiliate you just like you humiliated me in front of the whole college to protect that looser girl Deepali . I am feeling on top of the world today after seeing you on your knees in front of me . Seeing you like this is giving me priceless happiness .

RK couldn't believe this nor any other person or professors present in the hall could believe that what was happening .

RK (standing on his feet) - Madhu I know this is all your prank to irritate me . Right ?

Madhu - Ohhh RK you think that you will make fun of me in front of the whole college and I will leave you like this . You made me say Sorry in front of the whole college and from then , whole college has been having a wonderful laugh seeing Madhubla Malik defeated by a middle class man like you . RK that was the biggest blow to my ego and that day only I decided to teach you a lesson . Apologizing to you and pretending to fall in love with you was my plan to make you fall for me so that you can confess your feelings for me .

*RK was in tears now*

Madhu (looking at RK and his tears) - Ohh RK your tears are giving me so much of relief that I can't express it to you in words . I haven't even kept utensils in kitchen in my home , but at your house I made tea just to impress you so that my plan doesn't get ruined . Wearing those Behenji types suits to impress you , becoming oppps let me correct it - acting all those sugary coated sweet was a part of my plan and all this was necessary to make you fall in love so that today I can enjoy it to the fullest .

RK (keeping his hand on her shoulders and making her look towards him) - Why Madhu . Why did you do this to me . I like a fool kept on believing that you also love me . I like an idiot kept on making those dreams real just for you to give you all the happiness of this world and you were playing games with me . You were playing with my emotions and feelings till now . Madhu for once also you never ever felt love for me ? For once your inner conscience din't scold you to do such things with me ? For once your din't flinch on committing such a sin ?

Madhu (pushing his hands off from her shoulders) - No RK . I have never ever felt love for you . RK ! My name Madhubala isn't kept just like that on the yest-year actresses beauty , but also because I can act very good like her . You think that I will fall for a looser like you . RK ! Love,Romance and all such shitty words doesn't exist in Madhubala Malik's dictionary . Madhubala can never fall in love .

Madu (looking at RK) - I hope RK that you will remember this lesson through out your life . By the way RK you are so handsome and dashing but the only problem is that you are from a middle class family . Else I would have definitely made you my BF for time pass .

Madhu (Looking at the public) - And even you all . You all had a hearty laugh that day when I apologized to RK . Always keep this in mind that if you try to mess with Madhubala malik or even dare to cross my path then she teaches you a lesson to be remembered for lifetime .

Madhu (Looking at RK) - See guys this is what happens when somebody tries to insult and preach Madhubala Malik . Get lost RK .


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RK was walking on the lonely road reminiscing all those things that happened just few minutes ago . Until now he was a happy man weaving dreams about his future with the love of his life and now everything was ruined in fact he was ruined to no extent . This dark night was symbolizing his dark life and this lonely road was symbolizing the loneliness and agony he was suffering right now . Today even dogs weren't barking on streets nor the streetlights were glowing to make the road look brighter , nor crickets were chirping , maybe they have a heart which felt RK's pain . Today even the black sky was mourning with RK in his grief . Even the nature was feeling pity and sad for RK today .



Precap - Female - Not funny RK . By the Way RK did you ever felt guilty of marrying me ?

RK (shocked) - Why do you ask me that ?

Female - Because...

RK - I felt guilty of marrying you ...




(Kudos to all those who predicted that Madhu will ditch RK after reading the first chapter . Well Hats off to you guys for predicting it correctly . You all are so smart . 👏
And regarding PM thing . I can't do that so whenever you guys are free just read and comment . And yes most importantly Thanks everyone for liking and dropping in your precious reviews 😳.)
Edited by BurnThemAll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Hey its awsome😃...U have written so well...!
But the twist of Precap is not settling well with me...did Rk married to Dips or what ?! I expected that Madhu would realize her love and would be the one to marry Rk after a great apology though...coz i cant imagine Dips being married to my Rk...LOL...anyways may be u have planned ur story in that way...!!

So wen is the next update gonna be ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update dear
I thought this only that madhu vl ditch rk
After reading precap i guess deepali is rk's wife but lets see whats there in the store pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
i was right, she broke his heart, no infact crushed him.. She hasnt forget her insult, its so obvious... One thing hasnt she love him tid-bit...?? Because if she does then she is gonna regret... !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Precap:- dipali rk's wife...i think so... Or is it madhu..?? Am sure dipali wont miss out this golden opportunity... !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As expected Madhu ditched him. Sure she is going to regret it.
Feeling bad for RK.
Is RK going to marry Deepali?
Eager to read how you've planned the story next.

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