RISHBALA FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT - (Last Part Updated on Pg 12 - 14/7)

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FS - FOREVER WITH GUILT



PART 1

*Mount College's First day*

This colleges is known for its best education all over India but the only thing that this college feels ashamed of is Maleficent Group which consists of their leader Madhubala and rest of the members Arjun,Latika,Esha,Fara,Ishika and Centaine .

Maleficent Group - See that girl in behenji clothes is coming . Lets do her ragging .

Fara to Madhu - Yes babes it would be a fun to watch .

Centaine - But what are we gonna make her do ?

Madhu - Chill guys . When Madhubala is here don't fear because I always have super awesome ideas.

Madhu - Hey u Miss Behenji .

The girl looks at her - Me ?

Madhu - Yes yes you Miss white top and pink skirt . Come here .

That girl comes near Madhu and her group

Arjun - Whats your name ?

Girl - Deepali.
Suddenly Madhu's group snatches Deepali's bag and looks into her bags and finds 10,000/- cash .
Latika - Ohho so you stole it from somewhere or pick pocketed it ?? Just look at you .. A poor girl like you can retort to only such methods of stealing and pick pocketing.

Deepali - No. This is my money . I haven't stealed it . This money is for the admission fees I bought so that in lunch I can submit it .

Madhu - Where do u stay ? And whose money is it ? Your rich BF ?

Deepali (now in tears) - I stay at Juhu Chawl . My dad gave me this money after breaking his FD . Please give me my money . If I don't submit it today then college will not allow me to sit in class from tomorrow.

Ishika - Madhu look . We got extra 10,000/- . Now we can have party for another 2 days. What say ?
And with this whole group including Madhu burst into laughter .The group starts playing passing the pass with her money .

*Suddenly a voice comes from behind Deepali*

Voice - If u guys are so interested in playing passing the pass . I have the ball with me . We can play with it to make it more interesting why do you need to make money as a substitute for ball ?

All the eyes of college turns towards the direction of the voice because till now no one has ever dared to look at Maleficent Group forget about replying back to them on their mistake .

Passerby - Oh my gosh ! who is this deadly handsome man ?

Second Passerby - Is he single or dating someone ?

Centaine - Oh so Behenji's savior came . Who are you ?

Voice - I don't give my intro to petty people like you . Give this girl's money back to her or else I will play passing the pass with you . But there will be a slight change in the game . I will not play with the ball or money but with you guys . I will throw you against the wall , the wall will then pass you to me and so on . The only participant in my game will be me , you and wall.

Madhu (who was shocked to see this handsome man speaking in such a tone) - Guys leave him and this Behenji.

And the group left from there .

Voice - Are you OK ?

Deepali - Yeah . Thnx for saving me from being ragged . This money was necessary for me else from tomorrow I couldn't have sat for lecs.

Voice - Its OK . Hi by the way I am Rishabh Kundra aka RK .

Deepali - I m Deepali .

*4-5 weeks later*

Deepali was sitting in one corner of the canteen having her food.

Latika - Oh so this beggar doesn't even have that much of money to have food from canteen ?She brings her own home made food.

With this the group takes her lunchbox and finishes it off giving to Madhu also to have some taste

Madhu - Must say the food is quiet good . So what does your father do ? Begging ?

Deepali (meekly) - No . He is a laborer in construction work.

Madhu - Leave her guys lets have our food . I am feeling hungry. And her food was so oily and spicy . I need to do dieting else my figure will get spoiled .

RK who was watching this whole episode comes to Madhu's table and takes her plate of pizza . And goes to dips and says her to eat.

Madhu - Ohh ho Miss Deepali . Your BF always comes to your rescue . Such a cute couple with oodles of romance.

RK with the speed you took my plate to give to that beggar with the same speed you are going to order another plate for me .

RK - I am not your servant Miss Madhu . You have got two legs and hands in a working condition and your vocal chords seems absolutely perfect to me . So make use of your legs to stand and go to the food counter then use your vocal chord to order your dish and then with your very own beautiful hands take your food tray , come to your table . Join your group of vamps and villainsand have food.

Whole canteen was witnessing this scene and were suppressing their smile because till now no one has dared to mess and talk to Madhubala Malik like that.

Suddenly Principal comes there.

Principal - Whats happening here ?

Madhu - Sir look at him . He is arguing with me .

Principal - Mr RK you are a student and is this the way you behave here with your fellow students? Say sorry to Madhu .

RK - Sir , she was the one who did all wrong and instead of asking her to apologize you are asking me to apologize just for helping someone .

Principal - Ohh so you are arguing with your Principal .

RK - Mr Principal . I in fact you are the principal of this college and its your duty to be neutral and not to favor any student especially the wrong ones . I know that Miss Malik's dad is very powerful and so not to get in his wrong books you allow her to behave like the ruler of this college and even if she is at mistake you punish the innocent one . I guess you should resign from the post of principal if you don't have that much of guts to be on the side of truth . Having said that , I don't care if you throw me out of this college but what is wrong is wrong and you cannot make it right .

Principal (seeing the attitude and spark in him for d first time behaving like a principal) - Miss Malik apologize to RK right now or else you will be send to your home for 3 weeks.

Madhu - Mr Principal do you know whom you are telling to apologize ?

Principal - Yes for the first time I am realizing that what I am doing is right and from now on I am taking the side of right . So either you apologize or enjoy the comfort of your house for 3 weeks.

Madhu looked at her surrounding . Whole college had witnessed this and were smiling to see her defeated for the first time . Seeing that the whole college was looking at her she apologized to RK

Feeling insulted she goes towards an empty class .

Arjun - Madhu this principal and RK insulted you infront of the whole college . If you want you can talk to your Dad and get this principal & RK removed from college.

Madhu (looking at her friends) - You guys are so cheap . After all this also you all din't change a bit.

Esha - Madhu whats wrong with you ?

Madhu - Now I know what I have to do . You all will not bother me again . Leave .

Madhu - Now its Madhu time and I know what I should do .

*In another corner of the college playground*

Deepali - Thanx again RK for saving me .

Suddenly they hear someone's footsteps.

RK - So miss Richie Rich is here .

Madhu - I m sorry Deepali & RK for all my earlier actions . I am apologizing to you both from the bottom of my heart.

Maleficent's were shocked .

Ishika - What are you saying Madhu . You and sorry .

Madhu (Ignoring them) - For the first time in my life someone has made me say sorry and tell me my mistake . My parents have always pampered me and never ever scolded me even if I was wrong and so I never knew how to behave with others . I have always been that brat and snobbish and arrogant . But this incident and your talk to principal made me realize how wrong I was all this while . I am asking you both for forgiveness . Its OK if you both don't want to forgive me . That will b my punishment . I am OK with that.

Deepali - Madhu I forgive you . I have no problem with you . You realized your mistake that is more than enough .

Madhu (feeling happy) - Thanks Deepali .

She looks at RK . But seeing no reaction from him she turns to leave.

RK - Madhu I forgive you . After all life is all about forgiving people . And anyways you realized your mistake . I m more than happy.

Madhu - Thanks RK Deepali . Can we be friends ??

Rk was first hesitant but soon gave in . OK friends.

Deeplai - Yes of course friends .

After that day Madhu used to be with RK most of the time . And with this their 1st year of college came to an end . By now RK has developed a soft corner for Madhu.

*1st day of Second year after college reopens*

All the passerby and students looks towards the College gate

Centaine - Omg . I dont belive this

Fara - Count me in

Arjun,Latika,Esha and Ishika - Even we can't believe this .

RK also looks towards the college gate and is shocked .

Madhu - Hi RK . How am I looking ??

RK - Madhu ? What's this . You and in churidaar suits ?

Madhu - Am I not looking good ?

RK - No Madhu you look beautiful . Just like an angel descending on earth.

Hearing this Madhu blushes . Deepali looks at them.

Madhu - Hi Deepali . How am I looking ?

Deepali - You look great Madhu . You are defining Indian Beauty.

RK couldn't concentrate thorough out the day in any lecs . His gaze was all the time on Madhu and Madhu was just blushing seeing his gaze on her . Madhu in this whole one year has become sweet ,simple and down to earth . In fact she had cut all her contacts with the Maleficent group .

*Someday's later *

RK - Madhu . Amm would you like to come with me to meet my parents.

Madhu - RK I would be more than happy.

*At RK's house*

At first she felt awkward to come in such a small house but later that feeling subsided.

RK - Madhu meet my mom .

Radha - Hello beta RK always keeps on talking about you .

Madhu blushingly looks at RK who is embarrassed with his mom's confrontation.

Madhu (smiling) - RK is such a nice person . You are lucky to have him as your son.

Radha - Beta you sit here with Madhu and talk till then I will prepare some tea for Madhu .

Madhu - Aunty please let me prepare tea for you and RK . I will be more than happy to serve you special tea from my hands .

RK & Radha smiled at her . While Madhu was in kitchen preparing tea for three meanwhile in hall

Radha - I liked my daughter-in-law . When are you going to propose her ?

RK (blushing) - I will do that soon mom but I need to tell my best friend about my love .

Radha - Who ?

*At night in RK's house , RK calls someone*

Voice - Hello RK what happened ? You called me now ?

RK - Yes Deepali . I needed to tell you something .

Deepali - What ?

RK (smiling) - Deepali since you have always been one of my close friend I just want to tell you that I love Madhu and very soon I am going to propose her .

Deepali (shocked but composing herself) - Congrats RK . Lucky you that you both love each other . Amm RK I am feeling sleepy , can we talk tomorrow ?

RK - Yeah sure . Goodnight .

Deepali (crying) - Why does this happen with me ? Why ? I loved RK but he loves Madhu . Now what am I gonna do ? Why fate is so cruel to me ?

*Next day at college*

Esha - Madhu what's wrong with you ? Why are you doing this to yourself ? Look at you . How you have changed yourself , your dressing style of suits to your nature just for that RK . This is not Madhu's style .

Arjun - Yeah Madhu . RK isn't your types . He is just from a middle class family and he isn't rich also . He has got only looks and charm and no money . He looks perfectly alright with that beggar . How will you live with that middle class RK in a middle class house ?

Madhu - Shut up everyone . Madhu doesn't needs advice from you all . Leave . Now .


Time flew by and now they were in their final year of college . Whole college from professors to peons to students to tress and flowers knew that RK and Madhu were in love with each other. They have become the hottest gossip of town . Everyone can see the depth of love in RK & Madhu's eye for each other . Deepali would just look at them and controlling her tears would run away from there . Now it was the day for farewell party tonight .

*Farewell Party Night*

RK (all smiling and getting ready at his house for the party and looking at mirror) - Tonight I m going to propose you Madhubala in front of the whole college . Tonight is going to be a surprise for you Madhu ...

Deepali (to herself while getting ready) - I am sure RK that today you are going to propose Madhu in front of the whole college . Tonight is going to be a surprise for everyone of us ...

Madhu (getting ready and smilingly talking to her reflection in mirror) - I know RK that you love me so much that at least now on farewell you are going to profess your love to me . Tonight is going to be a surprise for you RK..


Precap - RK (shocked) - Madhu ?????




INDEX

Chapter 2 - Page 5

Chapter 3 - Page 9

Last Chapter - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay! I'm first to comment Such a promising plot! šŸ‘ I liked the change of the Madhu's characterization, which is apart from the typical innocent Madhu like in every other story šŸ‘šŸ¼ Infact you made Deepali the innocent one šŸ˜† Good going!

Madhu used to trouble Deepali & every time RK was there to save Deepali & also to give a reality check on Madhu šŸ˜‰ One incident made Madhu realize her mistakes & later she became good friends with RK & Deepali. Time passed by & RK-Madhu fell in love with each other

RK is all geared up to propose Madhu in the farewell party 😳 Deepali is hurt with the fact that RK loves Madhu. OMG what did Madhu mutter looking at the mirror? 😲 I sense something bad! I feel like Madhu been pretending to be in love with RK & she wants to ditch him 😈 OMG I'm so into this story It's gonna be super awesome to read! & yeah your title gives that kind of a clue šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†


All the best with this story! šŸ¤—Looking forward to read the further updates. Please update soon! or I'll keep pestering you šŸ˜†
Edited by -Roch- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully writtend
loved the change in characters of madhu and deepali
so madhu will ditches rk and later she will be in forever with guilt
plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excellent plot...but looks like some twist is coming up...

pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice start. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start...so madhu will ditches rk and later she will be in forever with guilt?...bt honestly says dont want rk-madhu separated... cant see them like that...so pls dont do sad ending...waiting 4 next...plz cont soon
Edited by parimaniya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice n alag hatke starting šŸ˜‰
But plz don't saprate rishbala
Plsh 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very interesting.
liked the way you developed the characters,Madhu is evil and Deepali is innocent and RK the saviour.
i think Madhu is pretending and is going to dump RK.
waiting to read more.
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you had to stop there?? I have a bad feeling about what is going to happen...

The suspense is great and your writing is very good. I am looking forward to the next part.

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