Untitled Love - Final Part updated in pg 22 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Continue soon, waiting for the next update.

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Very different concept

rishabh is shown ruthless here

he doesn't know what he is doing

he is accusing madhu for miscarriage

the article that madhu was reading was awesome

it is very true

Originally posted by: My_VivJaan

Welcome Back vinu di 🤗
it was very different nd intriguing one!!! RK is very ruthless here... waiting for nxt!!!!

Originally posted by: ainanwer

oh my God Rk is so cruel how can he do this to madhu

different concept

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

OMG!! u are back that too with an interesting concept...I just loved the start...

Originally posted by: -Vinu-

Thanks a lot for your feedback Deepti😳😃glad you loved it.

Originally posted by: ..Annabelle..

Wow Vinu! what a brilliant piece of writing! 👏 Specially the first lines! Feelings of a little kid about her parent's heated argument. You have managed to write down Madhu's feelings well, her inner turmoil. I wonder why RK is behaving so rude! 🤔 There should be a reason behind it. Waiting to read the next part! I won't be much around next week due to my exams but please do send me the PM! 😆 Nice description about the woman in the 21st century! Madhu's article! and me too love Astronomy & science fictions 😃 A total different fresh concept ! I have never read about a love story of an Astronaut 😉

Missed you so much & happy to see you back 🤗

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Woww...Vinuu...is Backkk !!! 😆 The concept was supperrbb...and the way u write...u know very welll...i love ur writings like crazy...So its a Supperrrbbb Come backk story of u...!! Wub b waiting for next...cont..soon !!

Originally posted by: rdave1

Hey dear nice to hear from after so long. Don't study too hard. :)

I love the concept though I must say I loathe this version of RK. Can't stand any man that hits a woman especially the one he claims to love. And this jerk does it in front of his young kids. I hope Madhu leaves him and takes the kids with her; he doesn't deserve her or the kids. The line for the next chapter is very intriguing and seems to fit perfectly for the situation Madhu is in. Great job!

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Waiting for you to update the next part.