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Titli

@afterlife.

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Dear, you've very nicely justified RK's anger in this part. Thoroughly depicted his pain, anger, turmoils and helplessness. I couldn't help but felt bad for him...in previous update, he was a ruthless insensitive man from Madhu's POV but in this part we saw a very different side of him. It was necessary to see his pov. I understand now..as every story has three sides. One hers, one his and other is the truth. I don't know at the end whom to blame. But a new fear appeared there. Oh God! R u going to kill Madhu?? Taking her away from family forever?? Oh no. She'll be next Kalpana Chawla.. Plz update soon. Don't be lazy this time.. 😆

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aan-rish

@aan-rish

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

I feel sorry for RK. I think they were not meant to be together. They both wanted different things from life. I have a feeling that Madhu is going to be a history like Kalpana Chawla. Its a really sad story. I am crying for Rishab..

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Awesome and emotional update Vinu dear.👏I loved it,the way you explain firstly Madhu's POV and than Rk's POV was excellent.⭐️I feel bad for both,as of now both need to understand each other and the suspense is still on so can't say who's wrong and who's right?and 😕 Defo if Madhu is not understanding than Rk is also not ready to show her or talk about his feelings,he need to talk with her patiently to tell her what he want. 😳And in all this kids are also suffering.
Now i don't know what's in store but i don't want Madhu to die during mission,hope they both learn a lesson from their mistakes and reunite again.😛Its really is a w'ful piece of writing and Madhu's and Rk's feelings are described well,waiting for next part,update soon.😃

Edited by RM14 - 10 years ago

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Azra Zaidi

@AzraZaidi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Awww... i feel bad for rk and kids

but as u said waiting for th suapense to open

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candle_light

@candle_light

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

lovely update
rk's pov is total opposite from madhu's
waiting for last part
plz cont soon vinu 😊

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sanju1205

@sanju1205

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#86

now i undrstand...why rk is so rude.
feel very bad for rk.
madhu should understand her respnsibilties...
superb update

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Awsome update !! Felt bad for both of them !! Both of then are right from pov ! I think she will not return back she will die in space only !! Thanks for pm !! Too much of scientific terms being a commerce student was difficult to understand !! Thanks for pm

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Amazing update

u r unexpected

in the first part i felt really bad for madhu

i thought madhu is bechari and rk is ruthless

but in second part you changed everything

now i am feeling bad for rk

madhu always ignored her family

for her, her dreams were more important than her family

madhu going to space

eagerly waiting for nxt part

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Anish

@anish17

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#89

superb update vinu 😊

u r confusing us to whom v should feel bad 🤣

if u kill madhu then i ll kill u doctor 🤣

thanks for the pm dear 😳

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Wonderful update! Loved reading RK's POV of their relationship. It's heart breaking to see when people who loved each other so much drift apart by lack of communication. I'm afraid of what will happen in the final part. I have a feeling the tragedy of Columbia may be repeating itself, I sure hope not but it hints that way. Great job!

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