Untitled Love - Final Part updated in pg 22

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Originally posted by: anish17
Superb and different concept vinu 👏
Spinal cord,sensory neurons 🤣 doctor 😆
I love the title very much 😆🤣
Thanks for the pm vinu doctor 😃

Glad you liked it Anish 😉😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Vinu-
Thanks a lot Titli di 😃 glad you liked the first chapter! 😆 I am planning for a different end! 😉 let's see if I succeed 😆

surely you will be..waiting for the second part..😳

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Originally posted by: shalu1786
nice

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: momi78
Welcome back and wow! What a powerful message through such a beautiful story. Very apt for today's times. Please keep it up and update soon (and pm me).

Glad you liked it 😃 Thanks!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: parimaniya
1st of all welcome back...awesome start 👏👏 love it so much,

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Originally posted by: madhurish
Well, its an interesting start dear...
But i wont judge rk's character so soon...
Its so clear he holds high attitude...he is arrogant...but still he didnt restrict madhu in doing anything...he was not a barrier to her career...
Its just a misunderstanding... He thought she aborted d baby for her dreams but in real it was a miscarriage...so when he learns d truth he will come around... But he should not seed venom on his kids mind & turn them against their mother...thats wrong & also manhandling a woman that too when she was recently had a miscarriage... He shld behave like a human not a monster... Still i like this rk...he is complex...
I just hope they mend their issues & live happily with their kids...if they really love each other then they will forgive & love & support each other...
Liked d title...its kinda different...
Will be waiting for d next update...try to make it a two shot so that we wont have d need to wait another week for d final part Lol...

Thanks a lot Sudha di! 😳 Glad you liked it! Just wait for the next update 😉😆 & I'm not sure it would be the final part 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Great start.
Reading first few lines i thought Madhu is writing them, but was shocked.
How can a person fall out of love so easily. There has to be back story for RK's behaviour.Hope he correct himself.
will be waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi
superb start

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: twinklev20

Lovely and intense story...👏...u have very beautifully and correctly explained the feelings of a married working woman with kids...👏...EXCELLENT...👏...LOVED IT...👏

plsss continue sooon...

Thanks a lot 😳 Keep reading 😆