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Chapter 1 Above

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Final Chapter - Page 22

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Shriya kadge

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Posted: 10 years ago

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And I am first...AGAIN!!! Thanks to you. 🤣

I now realize why you said that I will get nightmares 🤣 This was seriously...you know 😆

At first, I thought that it was Madhu writing that in the first para. But I got a shock when I understood tht it was Rishbala's kid speaking that bout Rishabh! :/ I have never imagined Rk in such an avtar. Its kinda difficult you knw 😆 Uh...I dont know the reason behind such a change in him...but watever it might be, he has absolutely no right to hit Madhu. She is his wife! ANd wife or not...he has no right to abuse someone. i really didnt like him here :( Poor Madhu. I am on her side this time 😆 How can Rk poison his kids against Madhu? This is so not nice -.-

DADDY IS STRONG thingy broke my heart (Help me put those pieces back!) 🤣 I am so waiting for the next part. I dont know whether they will get along in the end or not, but I have this feeling tht u will give a happy ending. Coz u told me that u dont know whether this has a tragic end. Lol 🤣 But to be real honest, I dont want Madhu to forgive him. HE HIT HER!! -.- I mean seriously, how can he hit her when he loved her? He cant just hit her because he THINKS that she aborted the child or something. Who the hell gave him that right? -.- I seriously DONT like him! -.-

Finally, I am trying to keep my anger for Rk to myself coz this is a fiction 😆 (But this is a case in many real lives too) So wont speak much about it, coz after all, its RK 😆

Ps. How dare you spoil my character? Dont you remember, I am Rk? 🤣

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Welcome back in forum Vinu. 😳 missed your stories so much. This one is so stiff..depicting a different angle of a man & woman's relationship. After going through the first few lines, where the little kid's scribble were described I got all confused and taken aback. how Rishabh was so blind not to see he's ruining the little family! So much distaste against the person you love for just having a miscarriage?? 😕 no. There has to be a long story, may be this filth was deeply buried inside him through 8 yrs. Might be ego problem or jealousy as they are working in same ground or third party issue that is actually annoying him. You, dear, reminded me of the ruthless RK seen after Madhu's miscarriage in real show. After which the heroine track ended terrifically. 😭 I hope this RK will understand his mistake before its too late and will save himself from losing a beautiful family. Continue soon please. 😊

Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago