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Posted: 10 years ago
I feel bad for madhu !! Y i think always think that he will marry madhubala not madhuri !! I want rk to marry mb only ! Akashhh new entry ! So will he create any turning point ?? Letss see !! The update too good but lil emotional !! Thanks for pm !! Merry christmas to u n to ur family !!
Edited by shruthi14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
kick out akash ASAP ...update soon ..want RM together
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update akka. Love it.
yes i can understand why u broight akash into the picture. He is just a foreign maapillai lol.. Like in tamil movies..who never get d heroine lol.
okay malik is worried for madhu & Cant see her in pain & Asking her to tell everything to madhuri & Madhuri will never choose rk over madhu & By this both d daughters wll be left heart broken right? For that better one can be in pain than both...but i can understand why he persuade her so that he can ask her to marry someone else & He half succeeded too but sad thing poor akash is in love with someone & Saved madhu from her tough situation & Now she can ask for some time may be higher studies & Mean while rk & Madhuri can get married & Before dying she could have come to know abt madhus love for rk & She may get some promise to rk to let madhu to raise their baby mayu...
hmm...okay i ll wait. I waited for this long & I can wait for few more chapters for u to reveal d actual story.
thanks for d pm dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Naw...What an update...🤣 Sorry but I somehow find these kind of updates funny...😆 I don't know how...😆 I stopped asking myself that a long time ago...😆 Everything in this except for the last part was expected...I didn't expect for that guy reject Madhu...Well her Dreams came trough he rejected her...🤣 So he loves someone else...Now the question is who will call of the wedding or run out of the mandap...Madhu or him...🤣 Who has the guts to be the next Milkha Singh...🤣
And as I expect RK won't feel sorry for her...😆 He will think she had it coming...😆 Can't wait for when we return to the present...Lets see if they do get married and he finds out the whole truth...😆 Or will they die separtely...😆
Thanks Uma di for the update and for the PM...Sorry for my comment being short...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyc update, akka
feeling bad for mb
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guys,
Finally the wait is over, posting final part of the story now, u all have so much questions about why madhu suffering this much, my view is, this is a story of 2 girls, who were born and grown up in same atmosphere, have different life ahead in future, both having different set of difficulties

Part 15


MB was standing on the wedding hall, how much ever she had made her mind, to not let her go weak, she fails, her heart gets heavy, she had instructed her heart to look at him as her sister husband, but she can't do that whole heartedly, while she was fighting with her tears, she felt a hand on her shoulder, she quickly turned around and found Malik standing there, he raised his eyebrow and asked "Are u sure, u wil be fine" MB gave a convincing smile to her father and they proceeded with the marriage, Madhuri got married to her love of life and they started a happy life, MB stayed away from their life and she soon went to continue her studies, as her parents were not able to make her agree for marriage and Malik let her live in her way for some more time, as he thought she was not out of the hurt caused by Akash,for her one-sided love.But poor him, what he doesn't know was that his daughter was also a part of the plan, since she didn't want her parents to get hurt, she made a plan to come out of it this way.Months passed by, Madhuri and RK were living happily, though at times, RK felt guilty when he saw Madhuri missing MB,and from hearing about MB from Madhuri, he was in dilemma,whether he had blamed MB unnecessarily, and he could see some unknonwn fierceness in Malik eyes, but he can't figure it til now.

Madhuri over precautinary habit started to show its effect, she had some complications with her pregnancy from the beginning stages, and the medicines have no effect on her, as she had swallowed so much medicine that her body was like a medicine pouch, which stores variety of tablets, Rk took her to so many specialist, MB also spoke to Madhuri on phone and told about all specialist she have searched about in Internet.But everything seems to go out of control, as none of them were ready to
offer a fake promise, and finally as per MB recommendation, they went to a new specialist named Bittu Sharma, and seeing all reports, he suggested for some more test and scan, and asked them to come back after a couple of days.

Madhuri was so depressed, though she got all happiness in her life, she is not able to live through it, she knew that her end was near, but her baby, she want to save it, and thats the reason why she accepted to meet all this doctors and do all these test, she turned to look at RK, he looked so tired,
for past few months, he was always by her side, he didn't go to work, he manages everything over phone with help of his partner Mukkund Bhatia. She felt so sad for him, she wondered if she has not entered his life, he would have been happy, she thought, what if RK and MB had loved each other, then they would be happy now and there wil be peace in their life, she slept in those thoughts.

Same day night, when RK was pampering her to sleep, Madhuri took his hand in hers and said " RK, I want u to marry MB" RK was stunned, his anger had no heights, he just left her hand, came out of bed, paced here and there with serious thoughts and finally shouted "Don't ur sister have any shame, she came directly to u and asked this, and u.. how can u madhu, how can u think i could marry another girl, even if she look like u, and pls understand, i wil not let u leave me, my love has that
power to hold u.." and he stopped with Madhuri reaction "What happen Madhu, are u fine?" she simply nodded, and asked "Did MB approached u and asked to marry her?"

RK explained what all happened between them and Madhuri was all sweating hearing this, she could clearly see the truth that MB was nowhere at fault, its that she also fell in love with him, and her
thoughts became true, if she has not come between, RK and MB would have confessed and lived happily, she felt a pain below her tummy, she gasped, RK ran close to her, "Relax Madhu, Relax, i shouldn't have told u all these, MB, i won't spare her, its all because of her" Madhuri was not able to speak anything, she started crying in pain, So RK took her to hospital in car, he sat beside her, when Madhuri hold his cheek with her palm and kissed him and said "RK u trust me na?" He glared at her knowing very well, where this topic would lead to, But madhuri continued to speak through her pain "MB would never do such thing, i guessed she loved someone, but never thought it was u, she could have spoke to u thinking u called for her, and u knew very well, i love to call her as Madhu, thats where the problem started. Pls RK, for my sake, i knew very well, however u try, u can't save me,forget me, forgive me, lead a happy life with MB"

RK didn't replied anything, by this time they have reached the hospital, and he had called Dr. Bittu and informed about this, so he also reached there, and they took her inside emergency ward, and the Maliks also reached there, MB was with them, but she was just standing in the corner, just not to come in front of RK, for a moment, he thought what if Madhuri told was true, so he had hurt her very badly, and he had no right to apologize, but he came back to reality, he told himself, "I could solve
this problem later,now all i have to worry about is my biwi, my madhu."

Bittu came out tensed, RK rushed to his side,and Bittu told " There is no chances for normal delivery, but if we opt for c-section, chances of Mrs. Kundra survival is very less, u all know about the complications better, we can't wait any more, as it could affect the baby, we need to decide, we have chances to save any one of them Mr.Kundra. RK wiped off his tears and said "I want my baby,.." everyone looked shocked, "Please doctor, I want my baby, my biwi, my madhu, she is all I want, i don't want any other baby, i want my madhu back, she means the world to me...pls.."

Bittu smiled and said "Relax Mr. Kundra, we wil see whats destined for u" and before he could enter the labor ward, a nurse came running saying "Madhuri BP shoot up,and she calling RK.." RK rushed to her side, and she was semi conscious, and she was murmuring "Pls... sa.ve my.. baby R..K" Soon they c-section started, and bittu tried to save both the baby and the mother, but both Madhuri heart and body didn't help him to save her.

An hour later, Dr. Bittu came out and said "Congratulations Mr. Kundra, you are a father of a beautiful girl, and ur wife is waiting for u.. she has very lil left out.." and he went out to hsi room, RK rushed inside to see Madhuri holding their daughter, she kissed him and handed her over to him and said "Maya.. I want to name her Maya.. I want to you to give all happiness in her life, i want u to be with her in all her stages, i want all your love to be showered on her.. and.." she breathed hard and said "I
want her to have her Madhu ma in her life.." RK nodded his head in No, he hugged her and kissed her, but there was no response, and he found her eyes closed.

Later he learned that Madhuri had told Dr.Bittu that she want him to save her baby first, and she knew very well what RK would have told, but she was so sure, even if she was saved now, she can't sustain so long, so she want to save her baby. RK smiled amidst his tears holding his little maya, who was now 3 months old.


Present

Slowly RK realised what Madhuri told was true and he felt sorry for MB, he let her to be close with Maya, as he wanted to give Maya, her Madhu Ma, but he was irked at times, hearing Maya calling her Madhu ma, as it reminds what he has done to her, how badly he had avoided her,insulting her true love, and he remembered how Malik asked him to marry MB, but before he could resist, it was MB who rejected that idea saying, She wil never take up the space of her sister in everyone's heart" and this made her respect to be increased within RK heart.

Slowly he found how she became close with Maya, spending sleepless night and maya also yearned for her motherly love, so RK had no issues with them getting close. All his and her family members were waiting for them to get together soon, for which Maya was also convincing, but what they all doesn't know were, these two were two stubborn heads, and they will never change a bit from their decision, they both wil be each other to support each other til the end directly or indirectly, but not as a beautiful couple, but as dutiful Parents.

Now don't question me, is this is a happy ending, yup it is, as i have planned to kill RK in the beginning, but as u all asked for happy ending, i changed into this way. Now my part is over, your part is pending, so start to press like and give ur valuable comments.
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hoo hoo!! Hey hey!! Haa haa!!🥳 First to comment in d final part!!🥳 Let me dance!!

Awesome ending akka!!👏
loved the ending akka!!⭐️
u made me cry, yes, khushi ki aanoo or aanandha kanneer or happy tears...😭😆
finally my confused guess came right.😆 Madhuri was rk's teddy bear hugging wife!!😉
i m so so glad that u didnt get rk & Mb marry after 20 Yrs as per maya's wish!!😛 What they will do at this age?? No bed rocking Lol.😆 My gutter, u just pls stay away from me i wanna give an heart felt comment..😡🤣
at one place i got little disappointed. Yes, when he asked to save his baby i was flying so high in joy hearing a different answer for d 1st time bcos usually hubby will ask to save his beloved wife but hear he asked...but nah! He meant madhuri as baby. *pouts*😆 Oh gosh! This dumbo will never realise all this started with naming differently. If he had called her madhuri then right from d beginning mb wont be heart broken & Here too if he didnt call her baby & Straight away told my wife then my heart wouldnt have broken lol...🥺😆
awe..madhu is such a gem. 😳Her love was so pure for her sister thats why she never ever tried to snatch her place, she also showered her motherly love to maya & Raised her to beautiful baby girl, & She even never stepped her limit or never hurt Rk though he behaved rudely with her in d past.😳 She forgave him & Supported him like a true friend.👏
yes, its not necessary they need to get married but still they can be together with their love, respect & Feel contended forever & Ever!!😛
beautiful!! Just beautiful ending for this twisted story Lol!!😆
i really enjoyed a lot reading this story.😃
this story will be in my mind "Forever & Even"😛

p.s i m sure kavya di would have loved this ending bcos u gave a twisted ending. Lol!!😆 In a way its negative ending bcos rishbala didnt get married😆 & In a way its a happy ending bcos they lived happily...😉
thanks for d pm akka.😳
Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res
Unres
Emotional update
Different ending
Thanks for the pm uma
Btw I came 2nd 🥳
Edited by anish17 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part!
RK comes to know the truth of Madhu! Now he feel guilty for his misunderstanding! Both became support system of each other, But just like opposite poles, who didn't come together! Maya got her careful parents! Nice ending!


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Posted: 10 years ago
It was beautiful story di

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