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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys, back with a SS, i know, i know u all want to ask abt my pending stories, don't worry will continue with it soon and for now, here is a SS for u all.

Ya time for dedication, would love to dedicate this to julie (snigdhamazumder), as she was constantly reminding me that i need to update something, and here its for u dear, and as always to kavya and to my akku and to all my sisters over here

Forever and ever

RK was resting on his bed, his eyes were closed yet he was not sleeping, though he wanted to sleep forever, he can't before he settle down his daughter, and the dream day was nearing, he wondered how his little Maya was a small kid whom he held in his hand and she caressed his cheeks with her tiny little hands and that moment he realised he need to live for her and he promised the two angels of his life, that he would never think of his end any soon.

And here he was still alive after 22 years, yes his baby doll was 22 years old and she is getting married next week, which was a big dream for everyone in their family, his alarm buzzed and he made his mind to get up as he already heard her sound screaming down at everyone for not completing the decorations, he smiled and got up from the bed and went to fresh up. He entered into his baby doll room and find her sleeping hugging her fav teddy, he smiled saying "Like the mom, like the daughter" and he remembered how madhu use to keep a teddy along with her on the bed even after her marriage and half the time she use to hug the teddy and sleep saying, this teddy was with her even before his entry in life, he smiled remembering it and he kissed her on forehead and wished her saying "Happy B'day my baby doll" and she smiled with her eyes closed and murmured "Thank u papa" and she went to her sleeping mode again, he didn't want to disturb her again, so she left her to her beauty sleep and went down to cool down the shouting girl and he stood watching how she manage to order everyone with a work and everyone does it without a word either it may his parents or her parents or the servants at home, nobody dares to raise a word against her, as they all know handling angry

madhu is not an easy one.

She wished him a good morning and started to shoot out her question about the works given to him yesterday, he stood without any reply and she smiled wickedly and asked "So u didn't get any gift for Maya" and he nodded his head defeated, she clapped her hands and raised her eyebrows and asked "So?", he made a puppy face and told, "Don't tel her that i forgot" he paused a little and said "I don't want her to get upset, that too today" his tone became more sad, and she cheered him up by saying " Oh no, how can i make my darling daughter upset, instead, u can take us all for a trip" He nodded his head thoughtfully.

And then when all arrangements were going on, and madhu was busy with checking all those , and Maya got ready and came down and was thanking everyone for all the arrangements, and on not finding RK, she turned her head towards the room which was between her and papa's room,she went

upstairs and found it open and she knew who would be there,and she went inside and found her papa standing before a big portrait of her mother with candles lit before it,she had instant tears in her eyes, as she realised how she and her dad missed her at this time and she side-hugged him, he wiped his tears immediately and said "Mayu, what are u doing he..." and he stopped speaking seeing his daughter in tears, he scolded himself for making mayu feeling sad, he took her out instantly and he dialed a number and said "I made her cry, will u come here pls" and he disconnected the call and he waited for her to come and on seeing her, maya jumped over to her and hugged her crying "Madhu ma".

RK gave a glare to her or calling her madhu ma, but she turned her face aside saying "She is MY madhu ma" stressing a little on the word MY and let her tears flow freely, to wipe of the thoughts of missing her mom, mayu was the only daughter of the house and she was pampered a lot by everyone so that she wil not have the feel of missing her mom. Madhu caressed her head and consoled maya and cheered her up, while RK gave

the space for the duo, he doesn't like the idea of mayu calling her Madhu ma, how can mayu give her mom place to her, but he didn't speak out as it may hurt little mayu.

Thats all for this part, next part would be probably posted tomorrow, so time for ur likes and comments. Waiting for ur views.

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Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 11 years ago

haha...hehe...hoho... i'm first to comment on uma's story after a long time!! great!!🥳

interesting start uma dear!!👏 i loved it!!😳

first i'll tell u how all u confused me...😕

starting i thought madhu was dead😆 & Rk was raising their daughter alone but nah.. madhu was there shouting at everyone LOL!!😆 then when he told like the mom like the daughter... i thought he was talking abt madhu but no... i was telling myself "after marriage she would have replaced u in place of her teddy , rk" but nah... even after marriage the teddy took place like pillow wall lol!!😆

then came the protrait😲 & there it hit me that someone was dead in place of madhu lol...😆 Rk's 1st wife may be trishna not sure yet but dare u make dipali as his wife😡😆, she never deserve this much love from Rk🤢😆. Okay, mayu accepted madhu as her ma😛 but not this dumbo Rk wasted 22 yrs😡😆... then what "forever & ever" he will be like devdas😆 & madhu will be the supervisor of his house😆 & mayu will get married happily & say ta ta, bye bye huh?😕😆 just kidding!! i really enjoyed reading this beautiful piece!!👏 now eager to know what will happen next!! will he accept her & give the place of a wife in his heart? will they live forever & ever happily? to know more wait for next update patiently!!😳 thanks for the pm which i dint recieve yet but i'm sure u'll send me!!😆

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noiseygirl

@noiseygirl

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

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unres
yipeee a new story😆
so suspence and mystry 😲
he is married to madhu but dont like that maya calling madhu ma
m eager to know the truth
m came b4 ur pm 😛 and took position 2nd😳
super di👏👏
and thanks 4 deducation as m considering my self as ur sis

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Uma

@uma88

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhurish
haha...hehe...hoho... i'm first to comment on uma's story after a long time!! great!!🥳Congrats my baby stalker
interesting start uma dear!!👏 i loved it!!😳Thank u very much 😳
first i'll tell u how all u confused me...😕 u confused, ha then thats the start of my victory, actually i want to confuse u guys, everytime, u ppl guess the upcoming part,so i planned everything properly this time to confuse everyone, so that u all can't predict my story.
starting i thought madhu was dead😆 Ahaan & Rk was raising their daughter alone but nah..Ummm madhu was there shouting at everyone LOL!!😆 then when he told like the mom like the daughter... i thought he was talking abt madhu but no...Are u sure i was telling myself "after marriage she would have replaced u in place of her teddy , rk" but nah... even after marriage the teddy took place like pillow wall lol!!😆 Not actually pillow wall, like one side teddy and other side RK😆
then came the protrait😲 & there it hit me that someone was dead in place of madhu lol...😆 Rk's 1st wife may be trishna not sure yet but dare u make dipali as his wife😡😆,Nope, deepali don't deserve that place, i accept i have given deepali a good image in most of my stories, but not here she never deserve this much love from Rk🤢😆 U r right. Okay, mayu accepted madhu as her ma😛 but not this dumbo Rk wasted 22 yrs😡😆 He will not be anymore... then what "forever & ever" he will be like devdas😆 & madhu will be the supervisor of his house😆 & mayu will get married happily & say ta ta, bye bye huh?😕😆 This idea seems good, we'll write a story like this na, then how wil everyone's reaction wil be just kidding!! i know i really enjoyed reading this beautiful piece!!👏 now eager to know what will happen next!! will he accept her & give the place of a wife in his heart? will they live forever & ever happily? to know more wait for next update patiently!!😳 thanks for the pm which i dint recieve yet but i'm sure u'll send me!!😆 Wil start sending pm soon, but before that my washing machine is calling me

U know what sudha, u got something right, but will not tel what that something is, 😆😆😆

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: noiseygirl
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yipeee a new story😆 Yup
so suspence and mystry 😲 Oh really, dinka chika, am dancing that u all found it mystery
he is married to madhu but dont like that maya calling madhu ma U wil know why in next update
m eager to know the truth Wil reveal in next update
m came b4 ur pm 😛 and took position 2nd😳 Congo shongo shuv
super di👏👏
and thanks 4 deducation as m considering my self as ur sis Yes, ofcourse u r one of my darling sis over here

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Rksuperstar

@Rksuperstar

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

🥳WooHOO . Omg omg omg Uma dear🤗 u made my day heaven. What to do I need doctor. I am senseless🤢 ,l read ur store .It's amazing start. I thought madhu is dead. But she's alive . Dips is rk's wife omg😡😆 one thing my wish is full feel .Thanks Uma dear u story update. 😃😃😃

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Boo Bear

@-Babydoll_Pooh-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome part 1 di and thanks for the dedication and u know na I'm ur small sis and ur my big sis .

Coming to the the story awesome akka but I'm a little confused who is mayas mom and why is rk feEling angry when mayas calling madhu as madhu ma . I think trishna is mayas mom , sorry if I'm wrong and I know u will solve the mystery in the next part.

Tfs for pm akka.

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry for the late unresing and this very short comment.

I have ten more stories to unres my posts on.😆

Busy, busy, busy Choti Ni. 😆 Or what Sudha calls me youme. 🤣

First. Great first part.👏👏

And like Sudha said you had me confused there a bit.😆 What and why you shall soon find out.😆

Honestly sleeping with a teddybear.🤣

Well everyone should still have their inner child intact, even though I didn't see that one coming.😆

And that to after marriage.🤣 Now I hope that RK's late wife didn't also act like a child. But then again we all act like children at some point.😆

Now over to the confusion.😆 You made me believe that Madhu was his wife and that she was dead, cause afterall this is a Rishbala story. But then when RK went down the stairs and saw how Madhu ordered her and his family around, cause who want to handle one angry Madhu?😆 What secret power does she have? Don't tell me she have borrrowed some magic from any of the students from Hogwarts.😆 Anyway, this little belief of mine somehow got stronger. I thought RK visualized Madhu, remembering one old memory. Even during their conversation I still thought it was one of his memories. That he hallucinates Madhu time to time, because that is how much he miss his beloved Biwi. And that he haven't told about his hallucinations because he doesn't want to end up being all buddy buddy with a looney in an asylum, like Jack Nicholson in One flew over the Cuckoo's Nest. 😆 And this belief continued when RK looked at his late wife's portrait and his daughter Maya came to him, and cried along with him. But you crushed, which by the way made me happy 😆, my little assumption. Cause I thought this means this wouldn't be one sad TS. But yet again I changed my mind as quickly as Schumacher drove his car. 🤣 Sorry, Schumacher was a Forumla 1 driver. Actually one of my favorites, when I watched him drive his car in those contests. 😆 I will come back to me changing my mind later. Anyway I agree with Sudha on this one, do not make Deepali his wife. She doesn't deserve that much love from our RK. Cause she left him afterall to raise his daughter all alone. And when RK called someone, I began wondering if Madhu really was alive or not. Cause there is no way he has a direct connection, meaning just a simple phonecall away, to his late wife. So when Maya cried Madhu ma, my little bubble burst and a whole lot of fireworks exploded.🤣 Unluckily they got extinguished pretty fast when RK gave a glare to Maya for calling Madhu, Madhu ma and that selfthought of his.

Now writing about my second confusion. You haven't actually written anywhere that RK's first wife was actually dead. We all assumed that she was dead. Maybe she just left him. Because him making that promise to his two angels and that portrait just made us all assume she was dead. He might just loved her that much that even though she betrayed him he kept on loving her, staying there by her portrait, not allowing Maya to call Madhu Madhu ma. Cause Maya might have not cried because she misses her late mother. But because she misses the love from a mother, the love she gets from Madhu and because her father still lingers on in his memories from a woman that betrayed him.

Now I do wonder is this is a 2S or 3S. And how RK will accept Madhu, that is if he does. And that is if she is actually alive. I hope you remember my little mindchanging from above. About this being a sad TS. Because this is called forever and ever. You might think that, like Sudha wrote that after his angel gets married he becomes all alone and then because of the sorrow and he no longer has to be there for Maya like before. He dies and gets his forever and ever in heaven with Madhu. That is if Madhu really is his first wife and is dead. Thus concluding this to be one sad TS.

Hm, I was wrong. 😆 I did give you one long comment. 😆 Well, it isn't as much fun as I usually write them. This one is full of analyses.😆

Well enjoy reading it and I hope you don't get tired after that.

Sorry for the late unresing.

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Rksuperstar

@Rksuperstar

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

🤗Thanks for dedicated this story to me. I come to himalaya, and time to party . 🥳 And don't dare to make Dips rk first wife ,I don't like Dips, WooHOO WooHOO I am very very very very happy.

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

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it a really nic concept pls cont..

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