Rishabala OS : Best Friend's Sibling Duology 1 : Wings Of Love

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

wings of love,a v apt title lazy,loved da way she got the wings with help of rks love.thanx fr pm.welldone

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Rimjhim Ghosh

@Rimu_coldfire

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

lovely os..I just loved how the situations lead to Rishbala's marriage and how their love bloomed...good job...keep writing!! thnks for pm...😊

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Neera Ahamed

@drashtira

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

amazing ...
its a complete package of
friendship,romance,fun,
family sentiment moreover
happy ending..
just loved dis os.

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logambika

@.logs

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

wow... thats an awesome os yaar... outstanding...

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

read part 1...nice start, cute,fearful madhu n rk, the saviour...lol..i loved the stories when mukku is madhu's brother...found ballu character more resembling to original ballu character in the show...venomous, autocratic n tempered...found, rk lifting madhu on his back n she chanting hanuimanchalisa, very sweet...totally lmao at tailor-madhu-rk convo..somehow i imagined the designer guy as someone homosexual...no offence to any1..thanks to bollywood movie where this type of character is usually depicted as gay...omg, who is at the door..i hope not balllu..

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

sweet part 2...happy for madhu n her newfound freedom...rk n her family supporting her in every sense n their slow developing chemistry was nice too...sweet to see madhu reuniting wity mom, bro n finally good news...
i have seen in almost all stories of u that u introduce baby in rishbala's life n i liked that a lot...

only one thing i found in story, which i thought would had been nice if u had written it more, elaborately...that thing is pointed out by madhu too...that why rk married her, when he could hv just kept her safe...of course as readers, we understood the hidden meaning that RK was already in love with madhu...i just wished may be in climax if u had written in more abt rk's introspection...nonetheless, the story didn't lose its essence...