Rishabala OS : Best Friend's Sibling Duology 1 : Wings Of Love

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ManyaRathore

@ManyaRathore

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

superb yaar. Please write more ff's

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ferii

@ferii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

awesome fantastic story I just loved it dii

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Mind Blowing activate javascript

Continue Soon

Thanks 4 The PM

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keya

@krazy4kash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

wowowowowowoow

tht was amazing...the story was brilliant

madhu was soo innocent and sweet

and d changes rk bring about in her

a duology so update d other soon too

cant wait

luv

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kg15

@kg15

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Superb Shot it was! Loved it!

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Amazing OS!!!

Loved it n thanks for the PM!!!

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

what should i say dear???...u had me frm the moment u mentioned my name...i think i said that i was grinning frm the second i saw my name 😃😃😃...even now too 😃😃😃...poor me,can't control so much happiness altogether 😃😃😃

the OS was a longgg one 😊😊😊...just like the gentle rogue...and a very very lovely hug for that...we all love ur OS

u already know i love that theme 😊😊😊...i love that theme so much that,i always search for stories like that...so again a big hug for the duology...oh god,can't wait to read 2nd one 😊😊😊

first i thought madhu was rk's sister's best frnd...anyway i'm happy to read them eloping

i liked when rk mentioned "our kids can't marry now"...and madhu blushing,hey hey i can't blame her,can i?? 😆😆😆

and i liked a particular line,...madhu waking up frm sleep in train,combing her hair,tieing it and asking what time is it???...i liked it bcoz,i kept on thinking that if i write that line it would be,"madhu waked up sleep and asked what time is it?"...but u described it and it felt so natural to read...we all do it,combing our hair by fingers after a long sleep in vehicles...so i just liked it 😊😊😊

oh lazyyy...waht was that???????? 😲😲😲taking body measurements?...under bust,nipple to nipple,seriously?? 😆😆😆...oh god i was confused b/w whether to blush 😳😳😳or laugh 😆😆😆and ending up by slient laughing ...thats one of best cute romance scene...some hoottt too

hey hey i liked the tittle...i was wondering hw it suited this OS,then found u describing it

and the banner was too nice...but i liked the banner of "drums,beats and dances more"...don't get me wrong,i really liked both,okay?

and i liked the way they u said the preg news "cngratlations mamu" 😊😊😊

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moumita.madhu

@moumita.madhu

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Its outstanding Lazy.!!!!! Lovely! I really didn't know that this NIPPLE TO NIPPLE measurement is also needed for DISIGNER CLOTHS!!!!! The measurement part was way to naughty!!!! N the story was sooo beautifu!!!!!!thanks for the PM!

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Momi

@momi78

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Lovely story! You made RK so perfect that I had tears in my eyes when he rescued Madhu. So many young girls in our country are just accepting their fate and are living the life of a dead in this male-dominated society. LMAO with the measurement scene 😃

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

That an amazing story Lazy, loved it. RK was such a good character here. a real good man any woman would dream of who doesnt treat woman like showpiece. A man worthy of love, commitment and honor. Madhu was really helpless, damsel in distress here. You made the character fit into each other perfectly. the story really bears a good message. wonderful 👏

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