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Originally posted by: madhurish

nice update👍🏼

precap sounds too interesting!! i so wish to see d familiar voice to turn out be madhu, rk's love madhu😳 i cant see my rk leading a lonely life without is love!! will that diary reveal any mystery?? is that any important in further story??

thanks for d pm😃

p.s dear i have my exams for next two weeks so i ll be inactive in IF so i may not read ur story immediately but for sure i will read it later & comment my view on it!! 😊

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Chapter 8 -

Like the way RK wants to come closer Madhu. He really loves Madhu and thought to go ahead with this relation even despite Madhu is weird. But Madhu's words I love you but I hate you leaves us to think a lot. She loves him but hates him???? 😕 For sure she is not behaving normally. That shadow and anklet voice which RK keeps hearing and seeing is scary RK is surely daredevil to go through all this. So the servant came and in the end for RK it must be like shocker. What does she mean that she cannot see her. Something was always weird and now it is growing? Who is she and what she wants is a big question now?

Great update thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Chapter 10

RK tum apne hundred years purane pyaar ke liye jaan bhi nahin de sakte. 😛 😉 🤣

That was so scary we came from different world RK is scared.

Balraj uncle came from no where with all preparation is quite suspective.

👏 Man the supernatural part where Madhulika struggle to that powder and plead to let her go was written perfectly. 👏 You have nailed it out expressing her moving eyes, stubbornness and persona all well written. I can visualise it. 👏 Just lovely part.

So will RK marries ghost and she will leave away. I don't know why but I somewhere don't feel like RK should leave from there. There is someone that girl who was matured with RK is still present somewhere and her life is in danger I think. RK should stay back and not leave that is what I am thinking let see what will happen next.

Great part thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Chapter 12

Mind blowing update so finally RK married Madhu. Don't know it is for real or play but Madhu's pain was showing something else. Like there is more from Madhu's side to say to RK and that is why she was not going so easily. She want to say something but couldn't she do not want to leave him but has to.

RK's decision to not make movie on it was so good it shows whatever happened there in the mansion only changed him from inside. Madhu is very much and will be very much his part always.

Well written I think there is more to show and say. Let see keep it up and thanks a lot. Mystery continues. 🤗

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Seson 2 - Congrats for season 2. 🥳

Chapter 13

Wow RK's pain is unbearable. The start was like shocking I though what is Madhulika's ghost stay with him. 😲 But it was just his shooting. 😆 😉 So he hadn't given this special place of Madhu to none even after so many days. It shows he is all for Madhu only then whoever she may be. He was always in pain and whatever happened recently only added his pain and lend him alone in this crowded place. Now he is dead from inside with no much to do in life. Even his aunt left him. Well it is normal tendency of humans when something never comes in your favour often and always than that person stop craving or dreaming for that thing. Same is the case of RK now he do not want anyone to come close to him and leave him once again. The dream he saw was scary I thought she came in real and blaming him. 😲 Somewhere it is his thought he thinks that he is so backstabber lives the life still even after she left somewhere in pain. That mere thoughts let him come back to live any further and he stops himself to live. Rightly said he convince himself he is only breathing and not leaving. Finally whatever he lost in past still he used to live but now he lost himself. 😭 Diary is playing like a soothing balm to his bleeding hurt heart. But I feel diary too will end up hurting him in end. His small smile reading about his parents was incredible I can imagine VD there. VD and darkness is great combination on screen.

So Precap- who is she Madhu?????? After doing so much?????? 😲 If it is Madhu then how will RK is going to react. Just lovable. Keep it up and thanks a lot dear. 🤗

Do not get dishearten though I can understand you even I write updates and most do not turn out but when I am little late for any reason they come on even for update update??? but do not bother to comment and it is hurting. But it always happens over here many less people is there here who appreciate talent and whoever they are they all nice. Many good readers and friends left the place getting pissed off with the forum but some like us still come here. Do not get dishearten dear. 🤗 Sooner or later I think readers will come back atleast I am keeping a hope.