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Chapter 9-

So Madhu is ghost and man she is obsessive, crazy and mad ghost. She killed that servant?? It shows she will not let anyone come between her and her RK. Ghost revelation was like a picture like I am seeing some movie. Brushing hair and reflection not to be seen RK coming down and she is standing there. She wants to take RK with him in her world to complete her love. He is her love. Mind blowing update and well written dear. 👏
Keep it up and thanks a lot. 🤗

Chapter 10

RK tum apne hundred years purane pyaar ke liye jaan bhi nahin de sakte. 😛 😉 🤣

That was so scary we came from different world RK is scared.

Balraj uncle came from no where with all preparation is quite suspective.

👏 Man the supernatural part where Madhulika struggle to that powder and plead to let her go was written perfectly. 👏 You have nailed it out expressing her moving eyes, stubbornness and persona all well written. I can visualise it. 👏 Just lovely part.

So will RK marries ghost and she will leave away. I don't know why but I somewhere don't feel like RK should leave from there. There is someone that girl who was matured with RK is still present somewhere and her life is in danger I think. RK should stay back and not leave that is what I am thinking let see what will happen next.

Great part thanks a lot and keep it up. 🤗

The voice must be of Madhu

Chapter 11

RK's restlessness and realisation was beautifully written. Finally he understands the pain Madhulika went through and he is right somewhere she needs to be free with this dark world with the satisfaction of getting her love back. What if RK don't remember his past but presently he also loves her and his love is pure which shows by this.

So Balraj uncle look main culprit. Is everything planned for that property then how they knew he is coming there to Jaipur???? Let see if it is planned so did Madhu is also one of their actress playing her part. If she is not ghost then is she really loves him or it is only play.

Getting ready in the end by Madhu was so seductive and passionate. Her rejoice can be seen when she started singing but is this all a play or real. Let see.

Mystery continued. Keep it up and thanks a lot. 🤗

Chapter 12

Mind blowing update so finally RK married Madhu. Don't know it is for real or play but Madhu's pain was showing something else. Like there is more from Madhu's side to say to RK and that is why she was not going so easily. She want to say something but couldn't she do not want to leave him but has to.

RK's decision to not make movie on it was so good it shows whatever happened there in the mansion only changed him from inside. Madhu is very much and will be very much his part always.

Well written I think there is more to show and say. Let see keep it up and thanks a lot. Mystery continues. 🤗

Seson 2 - Congrats for season 2. 🥳

Chapter 13

Wow RK's pain is unbearable. The start was like shocking I though what is Madhulika's ghost stay with him. 😲 But it was just his shooting. 😆 😉 So he hadn't given this special place of Madhu to none even after so many days. It shows he is all for Madhu only then whoever she may be. He was always in pain and whatever happened recently only added his pain and lend him alone in this crowded place. Now he is dead from inside with no much to do in life. Even his aunt left him. Well it is normal tendency of humans when something never comes in your favour often and always than that person stop craving or dreaming for that thing. Same is the case of RK now he do not want anyone to come close to him and leave him once again. The dream he saw was scary I thought she came in real and blaming him. 😲 Somewhere it is his thought he thinks that he is so backstabber lives the life still even after she left somewhere in pain. That mere thoughts let him come back to live any further and he stops himself to live. Rightly said he convince himself he is only breathing and not leaving. Finally whatever he lost in past still he used to live but now he lost himself. 😭 Diary is playing like a soothing balm to his bleeding hurt heart. But I feel diary too will end up hurting him in end. His small smile reading about his parents was incredible I can imagine VD there. VD and darkness is great combination on screen.

So Precap- who is she Madhu?????? After doing so much?????? 😲 If it is Madhu then how will RK is going to react. Just lovable. Keep it up and thanks a lot dear. 🤗

Do not get dishearten though I can understand you even I write updates and most do not turn out but when I am little late for any reason they come on even for update update??? but do not bother to comment and it is hurting. But it always happens over here many less people is there here who appreciate talent and whoever they are they all nice. Many good readers and friends left the place getting pissed off with the forum but some like us still come here. Do not get dishearten dear. 🤗 Sooner or later I think readers will come back atleast I am keeping a hope.

that familiar voice would be madhu...
plz continue soon

Omg omg you stil managed to maintain the suspense, i guess there was some more thing to be revealed both to rk and to your readers which radha tried to say in last chap, there is something mysterious with balraj and i hope this diary might solve it. . Can't see rk in pain.. Let that voice in precap be madhu but it should not be a dream this time

so so interesting...

Originally posted by: beautiful_heart

Part 7 - OMG she is so hell bend to scare poor guy. 🤣 She blackmailed RK indirectly seedha terrace pe chad gayi. What Payal elope????? RK jaise rishte ko chodke bhaag gayi. 😲 🤣 Sab ke sab poor RK ke peeche pad gaye hai. RK truly worries for Madhu and he confessed his love for her. More his love is so pure that all he wants is her and do not even want to know about her past. Well said RK. 👏 The part was simple, serene and like a silent death that is coming near seems like.

Great update thanks a lot and keep updating. 🤗