FF: Ankahee | Completed - Page 16

Originally posted by: teekay

That has actually been the hardest thing for me to narrate here...the gradual role reversal of Madhu and RK in this story...of changing their characters and their way of reacting to a situation, without making it abrupt or unjustifiable. The characters have had to evolve witht he story while staying consistent, and I think I got it about 50% right in this story. Still, thanks for saying that :)

Originally posted by: teekay

So I am going to finish this story the best I can and as quickly as I can. The chapters may be shorter because I can't seem to write a lot, but I am going to not take a break because if I do I may not be able to finish this at all.

I do have a FAVOR to ask all of you though. I need to submit a writing sample, and I am thinking of picking an extract from this story. Could you please tell me your favorite part of the story so far (I doubt the remaining story would have a favorite anyway 😛). So from all the chapters until now, whatever you liked (if you liked) - a chapter, a part of a chapter, a paragraph or even a line - whatever you remember. It could be for the story, the plot line, the way the story was conveyed or just for the choice of words/writing style. Please tell me in comments/PMs, if it's not a lot of bother. Would be a huge favor. Thank you.

PS You can also tell me the parts you hated, as always.