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Clara20

@Clara20

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

superb update dear...

u puts madhu side infront of us...she is totally broken..her decision about her child...nw rishab is there and she is going away frm him...wants to see their confrontation soon...

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

I LOVED MADHU'S THOUGHTS

BUT SHE DOESNT KNOW WHAT IS THE RIGHT THING TO DO

THE BABY IS HER ONLY OPE TO LIVE AND SHE IS SCARED OF RISHAB'S REACTION

BUT I FEEL THAT RISHAB SHOULD BE TOLD THAT HE IS GOING TO BECOME A DAD

FOR HER SELFISH FEELINGS SHE CANT DEPRIVE RISHAB FROM THIS TRUTH

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

the update was super as usual dear

i could see madhu was fighting against herself as she is not much sure whether she was doing right by separating a father frm his child and viceversa

we r dying to know what happens next

when i read ur note,as much as i can understand is that- u r writing this story inspired frm real life incidents that u may hav seen...and ofcourse must hav added some imaginations also which was wonderful too...now as u said the 'meeting again' in this 37th chap didn't occured in real life, u r in a dilemma...bcoz i think ...(only my random thoughts) u wanna write this story in a real life manner...u may hav started writing this story promising to ur self to write as more realistic so when a situation arised like this-thats a meeting which didn't occured-u r unable to write as u feel u r betraying us by giving ur imagination only after this chap...maybe thats why u r feeling lose of words and loss of interest...i feel bcoz somewhere i hav felt it when i was thinking of writing many OS...

i don't know whether this was ur problem,i wanna say we r waiting for ur updates and we love ur updates

I have a plot line to end the story on what I think would probably happen and should probably happen, but that is clearly not good enough. ...plz dear don't think like that... if we can love ur story upto this part,we will love it in future too,evn u think its not a good one

take care...😊

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SreeRK

@SreeRK

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Update was too good..

I don't want a sad ending..pls pls

hope something happens and they unite forever..

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Short yet beautiful chapter. I cant' stop the tears in my eyes. My heart just broke for Madhu. This poor soul, all she ever wanted in life was to be loved and feel like she belonged and in a moment's notice it was all snatched from her. Her feelings, her insecurities are all justified and no doubt she should walk away from Rishabh to protect what's left of herself and her child. BUT she needs to talk to him else this will kill all 3 of them. Beautiful update!

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rdave1

@rdave1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

It's not a crappy chapter, it was great. Sometimes as authors we have a vision in our head that we can't get out on paper so that's what you are doing. Trust your readers what you have written is anything but crap. And the words will come, sometimes it just takes some time. :)

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bria

@bria

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

firstly it was a awesome update...i waited 4 them to come face to face...and want them to reunite as i think RK went through a lot of pain...plz its a request 4rm ur reader donot discontinue...i really want to know their story furture