Every Breath I Take (II) : Epilogue on Page 8 (02/04)

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Laters.Baby

@Laters.Baby

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Oh God! The Episode Was Fabulous Lazy!

@First I Thought (lyk othrs😆) Ashik & Ashika Is RK-Madhu's Kids..bt u made me wrng!
Poor Thm! Had To W8 Long Tym Fr Thr Own Children! Dou Ashik N Ashika Loved Thm As Own Parents!
U Made Me HUGE Smile Wen U Said About Thr Triplets! 😆 It Was Damn Cute! 😳 All Thr Pains Washed Away & Got Happiness 3 In 1!

Thnx Fr Writing Ths Absolute Awesome Story!👏

Aab jaldi jaldi aur stories update karna start dedo yaar!

Its habit to read ur stories evryday! bt nw a days u update rarely & i read ur othr finished stories fr tym passin! 😆

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BikewithGirl

@MG_Love

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Oh boy..i love this story so much..i'll miss this story..beautiful ending..loved it..❤️

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Shriya kadge

@shriyakadge

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Oh boy !!! Awesome update...
I m gonna miss this ff...
The ending was just fabulous...at first i thought that ashika n ashik are rishbala's kids...
That triplet scene was damn cute...lol...rk fainted...that was cute...n as usual i m in love wid his inner thoughts...
😳

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Flawless, i have to search the dictionary for more words i guess lazy,as we all have told all the appropriate words for you, kidding.

Finally they are blessed with triplets, wow, and the brothers standing against those who get closer to their sisters, hahai, very nice family.

Loved the bonding between Ayesha and Madhu.

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Awesome end...superbb..
Loved it..
Will miss this ff..

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

The way it started, it made me feel that they had a complete family with Ashika and Ashik..it did look so serene, the way Madhu whacked RK for Ashik 😆😆 was totally hilarious and sweet hehe !! It was so shocking that they were infact neev and Ayesha's kids and when these two held each other to console each other for the void they felt for not having kids did twinge my heart !

The couple who planned to have a kid after each of their visit to a new country...this is heart-breaking, a sour play of fate !! But then when love is "RK + Okay RK" ka level then even fate will have to bend someday 😆 !!

OMG !! Triplets 😉😲 !! And it's not Madhu ...but okay RK fainted 🤣🤣 !! This is so expected of him 😆😆😆 !! Am shocked he didn't faint twice 😆😆 !!

The team boy-Kundra tackling bechara Veer for kissing Tammy and in between all this, RK's and okay RK's tiff to own the innocent kid of the three to put the other down was top notch hilarious...and the way RK declared Tammy taking after Madhu for kissing in first std had me in splits 😆😆..it's as though it was his "Eureka" moment..oh my thank God that he was not in the bath tub then 😆😆 else he would have barged in just like Archimedes 🤣 !!

It's always a treat to watch all J RK ..whether it could be even for silliest reason that his wife had kissed a boy in her first std lol...uff !! Haye he wanted to prove that he is still very Young and handsome huh !! Classic RK 🤣 !!

Wow family of 5 kids and 6 adults...am sure Kundra mansion is "Houseful" 😆😆

Lol..me not weak in maths okay hehe !!

This fic without Okay RK and Alright Madhu is simply incomplete 😆😆..so 6 adults altogether 😆😆 !

Thinking about it now...I dunno I somehow miss Bittuji now lol😆..rishbala without Bittuji is lil incomplete lol !! Ok lets assume that Bittuji will enter sometime later in the fic 😉😆...cool !!

Great epi Lazy !! Though it started on a sad note...thanks for making sure that they had handful of kids once when they were about to have hehe !! So if I may re-quote existing then...

From OSO :-

Kehte hai ki filmon ki tarah hamari zindagi mein bhi end tak sab theek hee ho jaata hai..happys endings...😳 !

Edited by aDarkAngel - 11 years ago