Every Breath I Take (II) : Epilogue on Page 8 (02/04)

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riyakhanna728

@riyakhanna728

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

superb end lazy. Loved it...

I felt sad when I realize Ashik and Ashika are not RM's children but then miracle happened 😛😃

triplets omg ... OKAY! must be super happy. I m so gonna miss him as well as this story 😳😃

And ur reply was so funny ... I can so imagine fainting of Okay! 🤣🤣🤣

Thanks for this awesome story ⭐️👏

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

sweet part 22...totally dedicated to neev n ayesha...loved the slow realization of love ayesha felt for neev...poor sweet rk..madhu pouring water on his romantic dreams..but he got his night for love...nice

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

very sweet n cute epilogue...cute, mushy-mushy story took a completely different turn, a serious one in epilogue..m happy over bonding of all 4..neev,ayesha being with madhu n rk in tough time...rk never losing hope on her...n the end couldn't hv been better...felt like m reading a completely different OS...but all good things coming in the end together...loved their 14 yrs of married life n the blissful journey..

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sani9226

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Wonderful epilogue, at start felt bad rk and madhu could not become parents, but was happy when they had 3 children, liked how madhu teased rk that she liked VD, awesome ending

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Loved the Epilogue 😳

RK fainted knowing about the triplets 😆😆😆

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Dark_Chocolate

@Dark_Chocolate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Awesome ending

M gonna miss my okay RK😆

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priyachand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

loved it so much!

their 'oh boy' n 'oh gir'. feel bad now that is over! bt loved it

thank u lazy

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BIKESH SINGH

@bikeshsngh03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

oh girl the update was oh boy!!!!!!😳

there were many things which was like after every 3 three lines.😆

Special mention for "love"☺️ and madhu's crush "vivian dsena"☺️

the part were triplets were mentioned by doctor and rk fainted 🤣& where kundra boys had a brawl and their parents worried for their aging.🤣the wallet hiding😆 ...the list goes on...😆

So a big thank u for this story.😳

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Richa

@sarcastic_teen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Hey dear
once again it ws awesome story
read it frm the beginning!

I had really liked their conversation on phone n tht Oh boy n Oh Girl thing! 😆
Neev's character was so nyc
Epilogue was so nyc n lil funny too 😆
In the beginning lyk any other reader I also thought they r Rishbala's kids but then came the twist.
Madhu's 1st kiss in 1st standard 🤣 n RK getting jealous!
Keep writing!!

Edited by sarcastic_teen - 11 years ago