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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Poluk

Its really good. That man must be the male lead.

We're glad u like it Shruti...😳
Wow...are you absolutely sure of that? Lock kar diya jaaye? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: kg15

WOW... AMAZING UPDATE DEAR...

SO, MADHUBALA IS MAYA NOW.. SHE MIGHT HAVE A DREADFUL PAST OF SHE WANTS TO GET RID OFF... AND SHE HAS STARTED MOVING ON TOO..

WHO'S THAT MAN..? IS HE THE MALE LEAD..? WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR MY ANSWERS..

Thank you for liking the story dear...😳
As the Beta here...all I will say is hold your imaginary horses and dont let them run too wild...😆
This is just the beginning of a long journey 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Eeek res! :D
I actually had read this right when I resd last night because I couldn't wait, but since it was like 4 in the morning, I figured I'd unres now.

Anyways, LOVE the concept! Madhu reborn as Maya (love the name choice) and the mysterious guy, obviously RK!

I loved the dream in the beginning. Omg...it was intense, especially with the way that you described it! Ah! Just wonderful!

I can't wait to read more! I want to see RK-Madhu approach each other. :) Oh sorry, I mean mystery guy and Maya. :D
Edited by Hiddlestoned - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
great update😳 so maya is our female protagonist...i love this kind of independent modern woman, who aspires for her own dream without much reluctance😃 hmm...so the guy in the pub is probably the male lead..hmm..interesting..i loved the symbolism of sun and darkness😃 very contrasting and yet brilliant😊 update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

yay...first chapter is finally out 🥳
Let us mutually pat each other on our backs, Alpha
😎

So the female protagonist we are introduced to, goes by the name of Maya.
Something probably happened in her past, but now she is trying to start a fresh page of her life...

But it looks like her first attempt at trying to reinvent her life is going to end up altering her entire existence.😆
So will it be good ? will it be bad ? or will be very very bad ? 😈
And who exactly is this man and what exactly is his connection to Maya?

Stay tuned for the next chapter...😎


LOL! Thanks for your advertisement. 😆
Thank you so much Anki for being my Beta. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Terrific update, Maria.😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
sowieee am late !!!😳

BM it 😳...will give my comments after i finish reading😳 !!!


Congo Maria for ur First FF !!! 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
maria mind blowing update
so maya is the new madhu ?
and the man at the pub is rk ?
so this is their new birth ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
awesome update!thanks alot to both of u for sending me friend requests!& i've accepted them!pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Great Maria 👏 I really like it !

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