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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

MAYA HAS NIGHTMARES - IS IT ABOUT HER PAST OR JUST UNRELATED

SHE IS LOOKING FOR A NEW DAWN - WILL SHE FIND IT

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ShinSegi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

OMG Maria. You actually started your FF?😲😳😆

OK OK OK, I have just read the prologue till now, so will comment on that because it was enough to give me goosebumps😆

I knew it was an incarnation wali story.

These particular parts just made me love this FF already and gave goosebumps to me. Oh God it looked like an epic prologue of a freaking awesome book. Uff, how am I gonna wait?

"I'll be waiting, Rishabh," she replied, eyes all watery and smile all wobbly.

It was a promise, made by two hearts as they faced the end of their life together.

Rishabh Kundra and Madhubala Rishabh Kundra died in a tragic fire in Sitara Studio on the very night that saw their first, and last, movie break all records at the Indian Box Office. Their names were forever etched on the pages of Bollywood as a most cherished couple who remained entwined in death, just as they had been in life.

Time has moved on since then and so have the people. Yet...if one visits the charred remains of what was once a celebrated movie studio, one can still feel the tingles of a loving promise hanging in the air.

Death is after all, just the beginning...

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ShinSegi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Will read your first chapter tonight

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Survival

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Congratulations dear Maria on your first chapter, I saw it in the morning but I couldn't read it as I had to go to work, I read it few minutes ago, very gripping👏, you already presented two tormented souls!!! interesting, keep it up girl 😊

Edited by arshisfan - 11 years ago

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MarathiMulgi

@MarathiMulgi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

An intriguing start with the first chapter. 👏👏

Very good with the details about Maya's state of mind.

You know, reading about that man fighting the darkness somehow reminded me of "strider" from Lord Of the Rings movie. Weird. I dunno why..😆