RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 86

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: rima4ever

fascinating update

Originally posted by: drashtifan1

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

continue soon

Originally posted by: -StephinesS-

I know I know ! I am finally Editing my comment :P
but you know how much I ove you right?????????????? :D 🤗

dude, honestly.. what can I say .. I loved the update so much.. and I CAN-NOTwait for the next update and you better update soon -.- you can't keep us waiting -.-
I know you have heard me say this a thousand times :P but whatever cause I will never get tired of telling you this.. more than the story, it's your writing that makes the readers come back for more !!! #FACT
You should keep writing.. cause this is what your meant to do.. and I know how much it makes you happy :D 🤗

I love you.. and I am really sorry for editing this late Mar :( please forgive me :P
UPDATE SOON... ❤️ ILY.. ❤️


Steph ❤️

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Originally posted by: ..Ananya..

This chapter answered so many question and raised so many more.
You are such a powerful writer. There is so much emotion in your updates. I didn't even realise when I started crying. And it's all because you expressed her agony so brilliantly. Kudos!
With this chapter my respect for Madhu err.. Maya raised so much higher. The girl has been through so much yet she lives with so much dignity. It's definitely not easy. So I really respect her for that.
It's to see how Rishaan and Rudra react to this confession of hers. Especially Rudra.
When Rishaan did not say anything, she continued, "This name... Madhubala... it has cursed my life... my very existence. It has never let me live my life as who I am..." she scowled and then spoke with determination and anger, "...but I will be damned if I ever stop trying and fighting. I will do anything to protect my identity, to live my life because I am not a quitter, I am not like my mother and I am sure as hell, not anyone's Madhubala, I am my own person... I am no one else other than Maya Talwaar!"
this gave me goosebumps. I can't wait to see how will she finally come to terms with her past identity of being Madhubala. And moreover how will Rudra react to this.
Continue soon.

Originally posted by: philantus01

started reading it recently...amazing one...she had a very dreadful past...

y i have a feelin dat shez fallin for rishaan rather than rudr?????

still some secrets are hid behind abt mrs.roy,riahaan n rudr

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

What to say?? I am speechless...Its one of the best update of this story...the pain , the helplessness & the frustration of Maya & her mother was described beautifully...👏...Really she suffered a lot...I can't believe how she endured everything??...😲...I loved Rishaan particularly in this update...He really cares for Maya...I am just wondering the relation between both RKs & Mrs Roy...First I thought she is the mother of both RKs & then...well I am very curious to know their relation...But I am sure Rishaan suffered a lot & before knowing his past I can feel his pain...So waiting for 2 things - Rishaan's past & Rudra's reaction to Maya's confession...I hope he doesn't do something to make Rishaan & Maya upset...& moreover make Maya upset over Rishaan...

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

amazing update maria! 🤗

Thank you so much, Hiyu! 🤗

loved the rudra - mrs roy scene! i think its the best scene in the whole story till dat...i dunno y...maybe coz it felt helpless...

Really? I am glad you liked it that much!

i have a request... can u pair maya and rishaan and leave rudra for bittuji ? 😉 puraani tamanna hai madhu aur RK ki 😆

Hiyu ki bachi! I know why you said it! 😆 You want me virtually dead, don't you? 😆

i'm waiting to see how rudra feels about maya's declaration abt madhu!

Even me.😆

waiting to see if from here on the brothers fight each other for their love or support each other and surrender to what destiny commands.

That's a very nice way to put it! 😉

if mrs roy is a hypnotist she can do past life hypnotisation too? cud maya remember all that way? 😲

You are thinking wayyy ahead, Hiyu! 😆

update soon! tab tak ke liye 'Sayonara baby' 😉

Originally posted by: aan-rish

This was a painful update

Maya's past is really dark. It was horrible I am in tears. Poor girl was abused by that horrendous monster for so long. A person like him does not deserve to live. I request you to give him an apt punishment. I really loved that part where an enthusiastic Maya give an audition for the documentary. I could see her innocence and confidence in front of my eyes. I cant believe that bast**d did this to her..

Rudra.. my poor Rudra. Maria I have a request to make.. Let him do anything and everything you wants, he can even kill that creep Shaurya but pls pls make sure he eat something. I am not liking the fact that he is wandering around skipping his meals. That's unfair it hurts me.. After overhearing Rishaan's conversation with Mrs. Roy he left with out having food. Next time pls make him eat before he leave his house.

Mrs.Roy is definitely related to the Kapoor siblings. Is she there mother?? Rudra have a problem with Mrs. Roy just like the way Rk had with Radhaji..

Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next update..