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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG..IT'S dhamaka..555 boMb yaar..
but 1 q.. as Rudra is RK...then how come rishaan has face of RK???😕😕
nd rishaan having nightmare of that fire accident?? not rudra???
it's getting more nd more mysterious day by day...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Chapter Eighth: And the World Stood Still...

Montreal, Canada.

She wouldn't allow him to take over her life that easily. There was more to her than what met the eye. She was going to keep him on his toes. -this is the quality am loving about maya !!😳

She looked him in the eye and said, "Mr. RK, I think I have every right to know what I am not getting out of. I want to see the contract and I won't work until you show me what I have signed up for. You can take me to any court you want for asking that from you." -Now that's Perfect !!⭐️

He walked towards her and came so close that his breath brushed her skin. She did not back away. She just kept looking at him blankly. --this must be totally shocking for him ..for the superstar who killed many with his charm n looks 😆


"Tell me what will you do? Kill yourself?"

, "Not before I kill you." She replied in a calm and steady voice. 👏 ⭐️ ...Wonderful !!!

It would be a long time before Rishaan Kapoor would realize that he got owned by the girl who was supposed to be his puppet, and even longer before he realized that the girl was never meant to be his puppet to begin with... ⭐️ ⭐️

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One month later...

Mumbai, India.

'Torture', she thought, 'it was sheer torture of fate! Nothing else!!' --is this Meera ?? 😆

She was stuck in his home, with his brother while she did work for him for the whole day!!--poor thing she is !!!

Rudra stepped into the elevator of his office. It was morning and it was after days that he was going to his office. He had a black suit on and a Bluetooth device on his ear. --i can totally picture him ..now can u tell me on whose image u are developing his character ?😃 any actor's face ?

"What about your face?" Rishaan asked frowning, still not convinced.

"More gorgeous than ever!" Rudra said --both the brothers love themselves more..way too much 😆 ..btw i loved his answer !!

Montreal, Canada.

Like the gentleman that he was, Maya slept on couch whereas he slept on the huge bed in his bedroom. --nice !!!😉

Maya did not sleep that night as fear gripped her senses. She knew the dawn of this night might never come. She was going to the place she had run away from her entire life. --am very much looking forward to see Maya back in India ..i hope the Rudra doesn't fall for Maya😉 😳

Maya was looking out the window. So, they were finally there. She saw the buildings from above... the place which she had never seen before seemed quite uncannily familiar. She felt a weird feeling spread through her heart as they came closer to her home, the home she had never been to... --my heart beat is just increasing just like Maya's ⭐️

Mumbai, India.

Meera stood outside the apartment of RK's Madhubala. She was getting restless as it was already the last place she wanted to be. Okay... the second last place... last being any place alone with Rudra Kapoor. 😆 sweet girl ...

The door opened just when she was about to ring the bell the third time. There stood a stunning girl with radiant beauty in white shirt and trousers. --i can see here ..i mean visualize

i loved Maya-Meera's lil convo !!!😳

He was not going to launch Maya today. He was just going to make her his arm candy for the night. He wanted to tease the media; he wanted to be in the news with his Madhubala even before her launch. He knew the game well and he was in no hurry to make any mistakes. --this is soo Rishaan ishhh act !!!😆

Maya smirked back and said, "I am not your Madhubala because you are not RK. You are just an impostor. A person with no identity of his own. It's not just me... even you don't belong here. hahah that was one awesome line from maya !!!⭐️

She opened her eyes slowly and she saw she was held by a pair of arms... She was in arms of Rishaan... She felt safe... not just from the fall... but from life itself...

Rudra stood rooted to the ground as he held a girl in his arms. She seemed someone so familiar yet he could bet anything he had never seen her. --who is she ??? Maya?? 😕


He felt his breathing getting heavier as his heart banged against his chest. Her eyes... her eyes looked so familiar... as if he had seen them a million times before... her touch seemed so intoxicating that he did not want to leave her... in that moment he felt the world stood still... OMG😲 Rudra holding Maya ?? what a twist in the kahaani !

Just like the legendary couple of old, once again, the world did stand still for RK and Madhubala... until someone tapped Rudra's shoulder and said, "That's my girl and my pose, Brother."



i dont know why ...but am loving it rather than getting disappointed😳 ...the world did stand still for me😳 ...ur words took me in !! awesome !!! Awesome !!!

Great going Alpha n beta !!! lovely Ankita n Maria !!! ⭐️

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update loved it 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohh... My... Gawwdd...

Rudra & Rishaan!!
Superb twist. Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...I love every character in this story...plz pm me from now onwards...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was unbelievable.trust me this thought did not even cross my mind.loved it.i think rishan will be a great problem between maya & rudra.but i just loved it how you described that maya did not flinch when rishan's breath touched her..loved the name of the chapter.it's outstanding.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I was quite confused to see so easy way to find RK his MB, specially from my two twisted friends writing 🤔

I knew something is cooking under the sleeves, and now the cat came out 😆.

Honestly the story is going to begin now...

Good to see the disclaimer 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
completely dhamaakedaar update...so Rudra is the real reincarnated RK...interesting twist dear...I loved it...but why meera did not look at rudra while speaking ?😕...& if rudra is real rk then hw rishan looks like rishabh kundra????😕and hw rudra looks like???😕...if rudra is real rk ,why rishan sees n8tmares just like maya sees madhubala😕...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Bravo Maria...this is the most astounding storyline I have read so far in this forum...feel like blowing kisses to you girl...(I am straight...so don't worry )...I dont know why Rudra was stealing the show from the begining and trust me I have no regret imagining Maya in his arms...you have attained an all together different dimension in this forum of Rishbala 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW! Just wow! I did not see that coming and I love it. As it is I was I was falling for Rudra more and it had struck me was an RK too, but never imagined him to be a an identical twin. I was thinking of who would be a good actor to imagine in place of Rudra instead. So this has made me very very happy. Next update please.

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