RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 39

Loved it! I have to admit, this "twist" spiced up the story.

Noticed that you threw several ambiguous hints our way re: Rudra and Meera right until the point when Maya falls into Rudra's arms. BTW - those blue eyes (Rishaan) vs. brown eyes (Rudra) ...have to say, it reminded me for a fleeting moment of the other 'brother' duo - brought back (bad) memories of the (debatably) blue-eyed 🤡.

And then the

"until someone tapped Rudra's shoulder and said, "That's my girl and my pose, Brother.""

Looks like there going to be some kind of a battle royal between the two brothers. No need to ask who I'm rooting for...And I wonder how long it will take for Rishaan to realize that the girl was never meant to be his puppet to begin with...

Next update in a day or so? 😉

Originally posted by: river123

This is getting dark, the intrigue deepens. I'm loving it - the peeling of the layers of the onion, only to reveal more and more. I can't wait till the next update, and the one after, and the one after! Some random thoughts and questions...

It is only going to get darker Meenu.. 😳 I am glad you're liking it... so glad!! 😳

• Maya's nightmare evoked shades of RK's nightmare. When she opened the door, what would she find? Something horrific akin to what RK had seen all those years ago, with his father?
• You can say that but it's much worse than that...
• And the beating? What's going on over there? Some kind of abuse - who was the perpetrator? Made me wonder whether these were suppressed memories that somehow made their way into her subconsciousness, or whether it was a kind of hallucinogenic effect of the drug that Aditya/Rishaan had given her. (That was nasty nasty by the way - can't condone that)
• Yes... these were suppressed memories of the long gone past... But they are still very much etched in her subconscious. She tries hard to get away but they always hunt her down. I understand I do not condone Rishaan's act 😆... but he is the antihero of the story.
• A shirtless Aditya? Whoa! How did that come to be? I digress...
• It was just to make Maya doubt harder on what happened between them...
• Well, looks like he has all sorts of diabolical schemes up his sleeve. What's going on in his mind, and driving his actions? Yes, his soul is restless, and after finding his Madhu - Maya he is energized. So he wants to tie her to him, to act in his film. Will that relieve the darkness that seems to shroud his soul? And what's the story with the tragic end? Is that a red herring that you guys have thrown out there?
• His soul is restless, there is no doubt about that. And yes with Maya, he has found a new hope, he has convinced himself that he would go to any lengths to achieve his goal, which is yet to be revealed... And about the tragic end dialogue... You gotta wait and see. 😛
• And Maya - am waiting to see how she moves forward. She seems insightful, and spunky.
• I am happy you're liking Maya, she is the wisest character in the FF. Yes, wise, not intelligent.
• And waiting for Rudra-Meera story to unfold. Is there going to be one? As I said before, I'm totally intrigued by Rudra.
• I don't have to answer this anymore... 😆 Sorry for the late reply. But I loved your comment... loved your analysis, so thought it's better late than never! 😳

Originally posted by: Poluk

Its really nice Maria. I am loving it. 😊

Why don't you upload it on some sites which host online novels. You will get good recognition for the work there😊

You have it in you to be a professional novelist.😊