RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 40

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Congrats to us for the 7th chappie 🥳
Congrats!! Sorry for late reply... 😳

A job well done sistar ! You made me so proud with this update 🤗. Simply Marvellous! 👏⭐️
Oh my!! You really did love this update, didn't you? I keep reading your comment again and again! I feel so happy! 😳😆

I loved the title...a very picturesque way to describe the chapter 👏
Thank you, Anki. 😳

The dream sequence was really scary...

I know.. I had fun writing it... 😲😆

So Rishaan had it all planned out...drug her, scare her by questioning her reputation and distract her enough so that she doesnt think properly while signing the papers...probably bribed the landlord earlier...a devious and frankly quite cruel mind at work.

That's Rishaan for you. 😆
There is a stark contrast between this contract scene and the one the old RK had created.

This I found really interesting. The contrast you mentioned. 😳👏
The old RK was motivated by a strong unparalleled sense of vengeance after facing humiliation at the hands of an ordinary girl.
This RK is motivated by nothing but a mere selfish desire to fulfill his ambitions, be that at the cost of an innocent girl's life.

Hmmm... 😛
It takes no guesses exactly how incomparable this fallen Rishaan is to that legend of old.

Don't be quick in judging any of the characters. 😉

I loved Maya today. She has decided to stand her ground and face all challenges head on. Loved the winter imagery and metaphor used in reference there. She refused to flinch at the problems heaped up on her so suddenly...makes me think she has faced much bigger crisis in her life already...

Bingo Anki!!! 👏 That's why I love your analysis!!

An extremely strong and resilient woman in the making...that is what Maya is.

😳

The last lines were awesome. Keeps the suspense rolling 😆😉
Thanks Heer! 😆
So stay tuned for the next chapter folks...oh and do be prepared for it...you will be blown off you feet in the next update 😎

I just love your mini advertisements at the end of your comments! 😆🤗

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

absolutely brilliant...read the last three chapters at one go...aab aayega maza😉 maya and rishaan as madhubala and rk..i love this rk...he is a charming rogue😉 and wait...what did he say?? maya has to be his madhubala till he gives their story a tragic ending😲 whoa😕 what does this man want? but maya being maya, would not let rishaan get away so easily...the power play between them was superb, where rk tried to gain an upper hand at maya and maya kept her cool😊 and Wuthering Heights 😳 i love this book..even wrote a paper on it in one of my internal assessments😆😉 are you hinting at some metaphor? the undaunted and destructive passion between Heathcliff and Catherine the senior which also led to a fatal ending..they could not be with anyone else, nor they could be with each other..their love story by far is one of the best i have ever read...having said all that, i would not like a tragic ending of your ff😆😆😳 update soon...waiting😃

Originally posted by: flowing_river

what are you??

you are such a splendid story teller with amazing ideas and what not...

and i just loved the plot..it's unique something unusual yet wonderful...

pls PM me for next update and add me as your buddy..

waiting for next update...😊

Originally posted by: blacklambo

Late to the party but managed to catch up with all the chapters at one go. The plot and premise is very engrossing and intriguing...👍🏼. Thanx for the pm and will definitely be on the lookout for updates as they are posted. Eagerly awaiting the start of Rudra's story to draw similarities or differences with RK.

Maria, hope you are feeling better too.

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

A Big Congratulations to us for the 8th

Congrats!!! 😃

Dhamaakedaar update 😎
Thank you!! 😳
Aw ! Maria! My Sistar! My Zara! My Alpha! 🤗🤗
Love you 😳
Love you too, Heer!! 🤗

Thank you for this...but dont ever underestimate yourself! I am just a good judge of good things...and you are not just good...you are awesome ⭐️👏
If you say so... 😳

I might have nudged you in the right direction...but the credit for this awesome story goes to you 👏...Its a pleasure being a Beta to your Alpha 🤗

Thank you for being as twisted as me 🤗
The pleasure is all mine.. 😳😆
Now coming to the 8th chapter ...
A wonderful fantastic update 😃
It has everything in it...⭐️
Was aiming for just that... 😳

I am loving this Maya😳
Me too.. 😆

So Rishaan is constantly flummoxed by Maya's refusal to bow to his will...boy is he in for some major disappointment 😆
True... 😆
And whats this? A dark past for Rishaan as well? 😲
Very dark indeed... 😛
Poor Meera...unrequited love...aur uske upar inferiority complex...
Lol... yeah... 😛😆
But the biggest surprise...Rudra is the elder of a batch of twins. YES! Oh God how am I gonna concentrate on reading when I have TWO VDs to imagine in the same frame 🤣
That was the was main idea na... to give you drooling girls a tough time... 😆

The only physical difference between Rishaan and Rudra is their eye colour...Rishaan's is blue and Rudra's is honey brown (another hint to who is the real RK😉)
Yeahh...😳
So Rudra is the real incarnation of Rishabh Kundra...like Maya is of Madhubala.😳
And the two souls who have been joined by the crimson threads of love and destiny have finally met each other in this lifetime...
Yes... finally... after almost eight long updates! 😆
And what a beautiful meeting it was ☺️...loved your description there 😳
Wasn't it in typical RK style? 😉
Until Imposter RK opened his mouth! 😳🤣
Lol. 😆
So what is the story of this imposter imitating to be Superstar RK? Will Rudra and Maya remember the past in time? Will Rishaan be an obstacle to their love? Or will the problem be something else? 😉

Stay tuned for the next update 😎
😆 ... yeah stay tuned guys!!

Originally posted by: rima4ever

completely mind boggling shattering unexpected dhamakedaar twistwala update

Thank you so much, Dia. 😳

i really could never imagine or dream about this twist coming at all

I was hoping for that... 😳

i mean this was really out of the box out of the world unique thinking

Thank you. I am glad you think of it this way... I was afraid people might not like the twist...

i guess i did not read between the lines in that case i read all superficially

There were plenty of hints in all the updates... In fact I was afraid that I made it too easy for you guys to guess... but I am glad it worked out well.. 😆

so in this story rudra maya are the actual reincarnated epic couple

Yeah!! 😳

and rishaan and meera will be the other supporting but important couple

Only time will tell.. 😛

i get that much now wow i really appreciate it this is very different

Thank you again!! 😳

well i would like to know whose idea was it to confuse us a bit

i mean i want to know if it was ankita or was it maria who thought of this

whoever thought to introduce 2 RK s in the story hats off to her

Thank you, Dia. 😆 .. Well this was the main concept I had that I shared with Anki she urged me to write it down. Then everything, characterization, story, subplots and conflicts rooted from there when I actually thought of writing it. I had decided even before posting the FF that they will meet on the eighth update only... that's why I never wrote any physical description for Rudra... 😉

i feel no one could have imagined or thought of this at all

I was counting on that... though there were plenty of hints that I gave... so it won't look like it came out of nowhere... 😆

and rudra is self destructive too we already saw it in rk in the show

Yes... just a notch above than that... 😆

thats why madhu felt something strange seeing the wedding picture of RM

but rishaan felt nothing at all as he was not one of the pair at all

Yeah!

and his role was majorly bringing maya to bollywood for a film

so that maya can meet her real soulmate who is rudra

Yes... he has a major role to play. He is just as important as RishBala in this story.. you will see...

i really do not have enough words to appreciate this twist and turn

Thank you so much, Dia. I am so happy to read your comment!

so now i feel later rishaan will have to be with meera

I wouldn't count on that... 😉

as he already knows meera drools over him and may be even loves him

Hmmm.. 😛

but why meera did not look at rudra while speaking ?

and why meera used to see rudra the same way she saw rishaans photos ?

Because he has the same face... she was trying to move on from Rishaan but Rudra always reminded her of him..

i did not understand that part only

id it because rudra reminded her of rishaan and she wanted to forget him ?

and what was with the blue eyes of rishaan here too ?

well that bring back some horrendous reminders of the meeraji track

meeraji was the mother to a blue eyed boy then and here also blue eyes ?

please continue at the earliest

😳 ... Did you forget that I have an alter ego named Bharia? 😳

@ ankita i had reserved space after seeing your reserved and bookmarked space 😆

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

fantastic update!OMG i never thought it could be like this!rudr is the real rk!!!but i liked rudr-meera jodi & rishaan-maya jodi!but then when u said rudr is the real rk!i don't have a big problem!coz i can easily imagine him like the real rk!*tongue*afterall he has got that attitude babes!so now what about rishaan-meera???i mean meera loves him but rishaan???what if he has already fallen in love with maya???don't wan't rishaan to fall for maya during the shooting!coz now i know who the real rk is!i hope rishaan falls for meera!so that rudr-maya's relation is secure!coz i hate triangles!that too between brothers would make it worse!pls continue soon!

Originally posted by: rekha.366

amazing and wonderful👏 ,so iam the one actually loved rishaan and meera 😳😳,when i read rishaan meera scenes ,i was like there some thing between them ,and i like their jodi😊😊 ,when i dont feel any special about rishaan and maya 😆😆,but girl you surprised me naa shocked me ,i love love the twist ,so rudra ,is the real rk 👏👏 i loved that ,coz actually i loved rishaan meera , main sad feel kar rahi thi ,rishaan tho maya ki hoga , now iam so happy ,rudra is the real rk 🥳,i really feel sad for meera,poor girl ,she is so love with this imposter rk , hope rishaan also feels for her coz maya tho rudra ki hogina 😳😳😳,and hume tho eki rk handle nahi hotha ,yaha dho dho rk ,i love sexy and hot ,RR brothers ,hope rishaan dont fall for maya ,i cant see ,brothers eki ladki peeche bhaagna eagerly waiting for next update 😊

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

what the hell was that Rudra was the real RK 😡 🤣 u made popat of us all 😆 ok he did had RK's traits like being suicidal and self destructive which was RK's traits and was not present in our supposed RK Rishaan Kapoor 🤣

Originally posted by: rishablover

amazing update

dint expect this major twist...and two rk's😉 luvd them both...

i have a question"why do this rishaan kapoor have nightmares?

luvd ur writing...