RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 12

Originally posted by: VildanaROSID

Great Maria 👏 I really like it !

Originally posted by: luv_rk

Awesome update maria

Originally posted by: dvs_smiRK

Maria this is such a terrific commencement to the story; exciting, gripping, thought provoking. The way you powerfully opened it with Maya's nightmare represented by fear, your description of her tear stained cheek gave feel she had just been hit by a desert storm. I jut absolutely loved the level of detail you went into painting the atmosphere and Maya's character nuances in this opening chapter, creating a notion of visualise as I read feel; mind blowing specifics you portrayed. The way you established her aspirations and how these made to be halted by pains of the past, yet her determination to strive and dream. Loved the use of dance as an escapism for her. The way you wonderfully described how she becomes one in this art; going from being detached to attached. The scene at the club was so vividly expressed, breathtaking descriptors and how he sees the glow in her juxtaposition with dark dim of Pub and within him...WOW. What really blew me away too was how you wrote about the sunlight, hitting her on the balcony and she feels the hope contrasting this with how he then sees the sun in her as the sign of prosper..Genius Maria. I cant wait for your next update.

Originally posted by: maria090

awesome update 😳

Originally posted by: punam2712

MAYA HAS NIGHTMARES - IS IT ABOUT HER PAST OR JUST UNRELATED

SHE IS LOOKING FOR A NEW DAWN - WILL SHE FIND IT

Originally posted by: _Mojo.Jojo_

OMG Maria. You actually started your FF?😲😳😆

OK OK OK, I have just read the prologue till now, so will comment on that because it was enough to give me goosebumps😆

I knew it was an incarnation wali story.

These particular parts just made me love this FF already and gave goosebumps to me. Oh God it looked like an epic prologue of a freaking awesome book. Uff, how am I gonna wait?

"I'll be waiting, Rishabh," she replied, eyes all watery and smile all wobbly.

It was a promise, made by two hearts as they faced the end of their life together.

Rishabh Kundra and Madhubala Rishabh Kundra died in a tragic fire in Sitara Studio on the very night that saw their first, and last, movie break all records at the Indian Box Office. Their names were forever etched on the pages of Bollywood as a most cherished couple who remained entwined in death, just as they had been in life.

Time has moved on since then and so have the people. Yet...if one visits the charred remains of what was once a celebrated movie studio, one can still feel the tingles of a loving promise hanging in the air.

Death is after all, just the beginning...

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Congratulations dear Maria on your first chapter, I saw it in the morning but I couldn't read it as I had to go to work, I read it few minutes ago, very gripping👏, you already presented two tormented souls!!! interesting, keep it up girl 😊

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

lovely update! 👏 👏 👏

i like how u started off with the dream 👍🏼

so madhu's name is maya 😎

i'm waiting to read what u have named Rk

like the sun and darkness bit

update soon...i'm waiting 😳 🤗