RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 13

Originally posted by: ..NadiaZ..

wow i love the prologue the story sounds very interesting i hope u will update soon

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

You know I am glad you and me are concentrating on this FF than the real show...this is helping me keep sane through the insane negativity spread by the CVs 🤢...

Originally posted by: Hiddlestoned

Eeek res! :D

I actually had read this right when I resd last night because I couldn't wait, but since it was like 4 in the morning, I figured I'd unres now.

Anyways, LOVE the concept! Madhu reborn as Maya (love the name choice) and the mysterious guy, obviously RK!

I loved the dream in the beginning. Omg...it was intense, especially with the way that you described it! Ah! Just wonderful!

I can't wait to read more! I want to see RK-Madhu approach each other. :) Oh sorry, I mean mystery guy and Maya. :D

Originally posted by: _Mojo.Jojo_

I read the first part. Oh My God, MAYA? You named Madhu as Maya? RishBala were supposed to keep their daughter's name also Maya na?😆

Lovely description of her introvert nature. I liked how you introduced RK😆 Waiting for the next one.

There is a funny story behind this...
I asked my Alpha what have u named her...she asked me to suggest...I said Maya or Raagini as my preferences.

She said omg...she too had thought of naming her as Maya...

i tell u...we both are linked psychics🤣

And by the way...are you so sure that guy is RK? 😆 or R...K ? 😆

Originally posted by: _Mojo.Jojo_

I read the first part. Oh My God, MAYA? You named Madhu as Maya? RishBala were supposed to keep their daughter's name also Maya na?😆

Lovely description of her introvert nature. I liked how you introduced RK😆 Waiting for the next one.

Second chappie is out 🥳

A job well done Alpha 👏
A very picturesque detailing that brings out Meera's nervousness and tension, Rudra's nonchalance and condescension, Maya's happiness and the unknown man's mystery.
Some questions answered, many more raised.
Might I add that I love this BBBing Rudra already 🤣🤣🤣

I loved it 😳...I mean I already did...but yes...I love it ...okay am babbling 🤣

So we are intoduced to a very concerned PA of Superstar RK...Meera Sharma...who seems to go abnormally out of her way for her boss.😆

And we also get to see RK's brother...a rich successful misogynistic jerk who reminds me of Severus Snape😎...Rudra Kapoor...love the name.
So the K stands for Kapoor.
Wonder what will be the R of the new Superstar RK? 😉
And so as Maya spends a happy day...our elusive R seems to be trailing her ...

he seems to know that he needs her...I wonder why🤔...or not. 😛...cuz I am the Beta😎...I already know 🤣

So stay tuned for next chapter to learn a little more about all these characters 😎

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

LOL! Saas bahu crap? Nivarans? 🤣

I think MEIEJ's back to back previous crappy tracks have taken a toll on you. 😆

I would never ever do that! I would sooner poke myself in the eye than write something like that.

Calm yourself, girl. This FF is going to be a long one. I hope you will enjoy it.

And it doesn't have Pabho, Deepali or Radhaji...

This is a reincarnation based FF on RishBala... an alternative continuation from the latest fire sequence.

I will updating real soon. So, stay here. 😳

P.S. No need to say sorry. I love reading and replying to long comments as you can see I am quite a blabbermouth. 😳😆

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Thank you so much. 😳

As I said in the note, the FF is based on reincarnation, the rest you will know as the story unfolds.