RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 14

Thanks for OM.

brilliant rocking wonderful update maria

it is very beautiful update👏 ,and i liked it very much

too good..so rudra kapoor is rk's brother..self destructive..hmm...sounds interesting😉...you have given a very vivid detail of meera's nervousness and her encounter with rudra kapoor...loved the second bit as well..so rk is going after maya in his newly purchased car...great...wondering how their encounter gonna be😃 super excited...update soon😊

Very nice dear, I loved that Chapter too, it seems you are giving us a lot of hints but you are confusing us too😆 So let me tell you what I understood, we have here two RKs😆 one is a business tycoon Rudra Kappor (mysogynistic) and the other one is a superstar R kappor, we are yet to know his first name

I know the superstar is the one behind Maya, but why do I feel that the Business tycoon in India is the one with whom she might have an unspeakable connection, anyway I'll wait to see the next updates, I'm just speculating and I know you will surprise me😆, By the way Maya brought her sleeping pills from an all-night Pharmacy I guess, since it must be late when she got back home😆 you see we are very attentive to details😆

Keep it up girl, you are doing a great job👏

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Very nice dear, I loved that Chapter too, it seems you are giving us a lot of hints but you are confusing us too😆 So let me tell you what I understood, we have here to RKs😆 one is a business tycoon Rudra Kappor (mysogynistic) and the other one is a superstar R kappor, we are yet to know his first name

I know the superstar is the one behind Maya, but why do I feel that the Business tycoon in India is the one with whom she might have an unspeakable connection, anyway I'll wait to see the next updates, I'm just speculating and I know you will surprise me😆, By the way Maya brought her sleeping pills from an all-night Pharmacy I guess, since it must be late when she got back home😆 you see we are very attentive to details😆

Keep it up girl, you are doing a great job👏

I edited it. 😳

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Second chappie is out 🥳

A job well done Alpha 👏
A very picturesque detailing that brings out Meera's nervousness and tension, Rudra's nonchalance and condescension, Maya's happiness and the unknown man's mystery.
Some questions answered, many more raised.
Might I add that I love this BBBing Rudra already 🤣🤣🤣

I loved it 😳...I mean I already did...but yes...I love it ...okay am babbling 🤣

So we are intoduced to a very concerned PA of Superstar RK...Meera Sharma...who seems to go abnormally out of her way for her boss.😆

And we also get to see RK's brother...a rich successful misogynistic jerk who reminds me of Severus Snape😎...Rudra Kapoor...love the name.
So the K stands for Kapoor.
Wonder what will be the R of the new Superstar RK? 😉
And so as Maya spends a happy day...our elusive R seems to be trailing her ...

he seems to know that he needs her...I wonder why🤔...or not. 😛...cuz I am the Beta😎...I already know 🤣

So stay tuned for next chapter to learn a little more about all these characters 😎

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Firstly, thanks for proofreading my updates. 😳

Secondly, thanks for such an awesome comment. 😊

I love your take on my characters. Keep 'em coming!!

And finally, thanks for the mini advertisement... 😆

Love you Anki!! 🤗

You dont have to keep thanking me for something I am doing out of my own enjoyment 😛...but you are most welcome 🤗...Ab Dobara Mat Bolna 😳

I know I am awesome 😎🤣
Aur FF ki publicity is my job as a Beta 😎.

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Haha Najat! Thanks... I won't say anything at all... Will just talk through my updates.. 😛😆

Thank you so much. 🤗

And yes, in Canada we do have 24-hours pharmacy in certain locations in the cities...I didn't realize I should have added that. Sorry about that. 😳

I edited it. 😳

😆 In Morocco too, we have them dear😆 I guess all countries have them, and even the ordinary pharmacies in Morocco ensure what we call the permanency sometimes (means they work at night too sometimes), the order of pharmacists organise that in turns amongsts them.

So I thought the pharmacy in charge of ensuring the permanency might not be on Maya's way, she should drive to some other location😊
By the way I didn't know you live in Canada😊 in which city? Montreal?

Originally posted by: arshisfan

😆 In Morocco too, we have them dear😆 I guess all countries have them, and even the ordinary pharmacies in Morocco ensure what we call the permanency sometimes (means they work at night too sometimes), the order of pharmacists organise that in turns amongsts them.

So I thought the pharmacy in charge of ensuring the permanency might not be on Maya's way, she should drive to some other location😊
By the way I didn't know you live in Canada😊 in which city? Montreal?