Rishbala OS: Chalte chalte..Last Part updt Pg9

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

wow wonderful ending mimi . thanks for the pm

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Nandini Swarna

@nandinidavid96

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Wow...such a beautiful and lovely ending...totally unexpected update...!!!!

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Oh mimi it was so magical.the whole balcony thing reminded me of romeo-juliet.jst a classic ending to a simple story loved it.i must say you have a gift to turn simple words into magical.you were right it dint have any oomph factor yet it stood out.sometimes simplicity outshines every thing.thanks for the pm and sory for replying late.

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Lovely ending!!

First I thought Madhu was going to break RK's heart but she pulled a good one!

Very nice story - I wish it did not have to end! Could we get ... 'The Next day at the Office' or something??

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Ridhi

@tinkerred10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Awww...that was so sweet :)

That a lovely end to a super awesome story !! :)

For a sec toh even I thought that Madhu is serious and is rejecting Rishu but ladki toh shaitaan nikali.. .lol

Keep up the good work :)

Thank you for the pm :)

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Ridhi

@tinkerred10

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
Very nice story - I wish it did not have to end! Could we get ... 'The Next day at the Office' or something??[/DIV]

Haan !! Please continue this story ..even I don't want it to end here .

Pleaseee!!!!

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Beautiful Ending 😳

And Congrats on being Senior Member 🥳

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

very very romantic n beautifully written...lovely to see madhu playing pranks...very well concluded part..

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

awesome update mimi 😳 thanks for continuing & pming me 😊

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: mimibm

You killed me with your comment dost 🤣🤣

Ha ha...I hope you do not hum in your sleep...else you will be definitely in big problem...

u know what i'm humming rang deeni since morning 🤣

'tujhe pehnu odhu bichaaoon main,

tujhe bhar ke saason mein gaaon main' 😆

'teri raah ab nahi chodni...'

'piya ke rang rang deeni...'