Rishbala OS: Chalte chalte..Last Part updt Pg9 - Page 8

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Lovely ending!!

First I thought Madhu was going to break RK's heart but she pulled a good one!

Very nice story - I wish it did not have to end! Could we get ... 'The Next day at the Office' or something??

Nice ending. Even madhu can b naughty at times and play tricks.

Originally posted by: kg15

AWWW... Awsome update mimi !!

Everything was just PUURRFECT !!

When Madhu said, "There is no future of this relationship..", my heart sinked. Before reading Rishab's lines, even I whispered, "Don't mix your personal and professional life Madhu !"
Silly me.. lolz

I loved the ending..
It was too good !
Good job mimi !

❤️ Loads of love for liking the ending buddy 😳

Now Madhu cannot always be at the receiving end, hai na?😉

Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366

wow wonderful ending mimi . thanks for the pm

Thanks dear 😳...and sending pm is no problem at all...u'll always get it whenever I write something 😊

Originally posted by: Clara20

nice update mimi...loved it

Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: nandininandu

Wow...such a beautiful and lovely ending...totally unexpected update...!!!!

Thanks buddy, even I had not planned about it for long, it just happened with the song 😆

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Oh mimi it was so magical.the whole balcony thing reminded me of romeo-juliet.jst a classic ending to a simple story loved it.i must say you have a gift to turn simple words into magical.you were right it dint have any oomph factor yet it stood out.sometimes simplicity outshines every thing.thanks for the pm and sory for replying late.

First of all u were not late in replying, so I will not accept your sorry.😉...and then love u buddy for considering my simple writing as something special...it is all because of such darling readers like u ❤️😳

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

amazing loved it

Thank u 😳

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

Lovely ending!!

First I thought Madhu was going to break RK's heart but she pulled a good one!

Very nice story - I wish it did not have to end! Could we get ... 'The Next day at the Office' or something??

Hahhaha...I will definitely not promise...because i know my limitations...if there is not much strong material for the story, stretching it further will only make it boring and uneventful...but definitely if I again come across any song that captures the mood of Rishbala in C2 I will write an OS on it..😳

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

Awww...that was so sweet :)

That a lovely end to a super awesome story !! :)

For a sec toh even I thought that Madhu is serious and is rejecting Rishu but ladki toh shaitaan nikali.. .lol

Keep up the good work :)

Thank you for the pm :)

Thanks a ton dear 🤗

Now Madhu has to imbibe some of the naughtiness from Rishabh, isn't it? That's what makes them 'made for each other' 😉😳