Rishbala OS: Chalte chalte..Last Part updt Pg9 - Page 5

It was a lovely update...[BR]I thought you ended it in the previous update..[BR][BR]It was quite imaginable from your writing, how Madhu would have been feeling when Rishab was disclosing the secrets and their dance in the dim street light, that was so romantic...
I actually want this to happen in the show..[BR][BR]Now, waiting for Madhu's reaction..[BR]Please continue it and give it a classy ending..[BR][BR]Thanks for the PM.

so beautiful and dreamy just loved it❤️

superb update mimi 👏 thanks alot for the pm 😊 sorry for the late reply but exams have started so one week tak per day i will only get one hour to come online 😭 can u please continue it with one more part?please?pretty please!please grant this wish of ur reader no.1...if u continue this it will be a stress buster for me coz i'm very busy because of the exams & hell tired*dead*...now i guess my one hour is over so bye 😊 take care...& please wish me all the best for my exams...

wow i love your story . please pm me when ever you write

Originally posted by: -Evil-Rules-

Just 1 wrd. Superb😊 wrte mre

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: war_is_peace

awesome!

pls write more 😳

Thanks dear...yes definitely I will write more for such lovely readers like you 😊

Originally posted by: Prarthna.B

This is superb , no words to explain , please continue soon :)

Thanks a lot 😊... I'll definitely try to continue this story, provided I get an apt musical muse..😉

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved it

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: Clara20

fabulus !!!! loved it😊

Thank you so very much 😳

Originally posted by: nshahtalati

Wow loved it very much. So romantic and nice. U are indeed good writer. Always like it.

And I love avid readers like u 🤗

Originally posted by: baisakh45

it was too good really.

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

awesome

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Oh its so magical as in fairy tales.do write more.

Our Rishbala are the biggest love magicians...they turn our imaginations so beautiful..😳

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

awww!!!!!! What a sweet guy - sneaky but sweet.

I loved Madhu's first question!

😆 That was Madhu's belief and that's why she never even doubted him once in the first part 😉

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

Awww ..that was so sweet ...

Loved the update ..it was awesome :)

And I'm telling u again that I am a huge fan of ur writings ;)

Thanx for the pm :)

And I am a huge huge admirer of readers like you...thanks for motivating me with your comments 😊

Originally posted by: lazy_writer

hehehehe * no idea why i am giggling* loving it! pls update soon

😆 Even I am very glad to be able to amuse you with this story..

Originally posted by: pooja1210

Awesome update

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: bonhishikha

Nice update and thanks for the PM

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: memad

superb ..awesome...initially i thought first part was enough to end this OS..but this second part was a pleasant surprise for me...when i saw it,i read like a devoured...lovely continuation of the story...loved madhu's puzzled questionnaires n rishabh's patient answer session...

now after this second part,i feel..u should continue it more as everyone has suggested...i would love to see madhu's response on rishabh's feelings..then only it would feel like a concluding part

It's my pleasure to be able to make you happy with my stories...even I did not have any plan for this update before last evening...but as I have said before also, songs are my biggest inspiration...so if I get an apt song for the concluding part, I won't waste a moment in penning it down 😳😆

Originally posted by: kg15

It was a lovely update...
I thought you ended it in the previous update..

It was quite imaginable from your writing, how Madhu would have been feeling when Rishab was disclosing the secrets and their dance in the dim street light, that was so romantic...
I actually want this to happen in the show..

Now, waiting for Madhu's reaction..
Please continue it and give it a classy ending..

Thanks for the PM.

Yes, I would swoon if they show a sequence like that in MEIEJ 😳😉

I will try my best to give an appropriate ending to this story...just waiting for the right muse...the right song 😳

Originally posted by: anvikaatti7799

so beautiful and dreamy just loved it❤️

Thank you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

superb update mimi 👏 thanks alot for the pm 😊 sorry for the late reply but exams have started so one week tak per day i will only get one hour to come online 😭 can u please continue it with one more part?please?pretty please!please grant this wish of ur reader no.1...if u continue this it will be a stress buster for me coz i'm very busy because of the exams & hell tired*dead*...now i guess my one hour is over so bye 😊 take care...& please wish me all the best for my exams...

Arrey my reader no. 1...anything for you darling 🤗...wish you all the best for your exams...

Originally posted by: revti21

Awsome dear...

Thanks dear 😳

Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366

wow i love your story . please pm me when ever you write

Thanks dear..I've sent u a buddy request...from now onwards u will get pm for all my updates 😳

Originally posted by: cool_sri

Lovely update

Thanks dear 😳