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KittuPratzz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Take a bow Lady!!! u equally mesmerize people with ur words...

i visualized each emotion..the feel u poring in this ...the magic of eyes..

the fear ..madhu have..whether she could do this task?
the faith aaryan holds on...nothing will happen to his baba...

the determination to save the life ...each action..oh my.
the way he caught hold of her hand...the way a small smile crept on her lips after accomplishing the task.

the pain and fury which will haunt her now..as she had witnessed his eyes...

awesome Lady!!!! 👏👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ninand

its among my favorite scenes between them. and you made me recall every shot in it, now with everything that wasn't spelled in the shot.. This isn't a very healthy way to begin the day though;)


😆. my fav tooo...it was soo intense..and even in her story..there is lot of tension between the Strong and Determined Sultan and Madhu 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Phew ... I didn't realise I was holding my breath all this while ... 😊

👏 👏 👏 👏

Fabulous ...my dear ... just what I've come to expect from you !

You hold your readers in a spell ... and take us along an engrossing journey !

In the serial the CVs had him grab her wrist ... you had them interlink fingers ...and the effect is electrifying ... ... and that is why your readers love you ! 👍🏼

Loved your creations 👍🏼

Take care & God bless ! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
and i love your pictures dammit.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Brilliant!
Would love read more of your works...do keep writing.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

"Hold on... hold on..." she heard her voice whispering to him.

She glanced up to his face just then and saw his eyes snap open, pain and fury combined there in a terrifying mix that should have made her drop the knife.

Instead, she heard herself say once again, "Hold on... Hold onto me..."

His eyes held her for a moment more before she looked down and tilted the edge of the knife, making the bullet pop out.

The air whooshed out of her lungs in relief, releasing the breath that she had not realized that she had been holding in...

A small smile widened her lips as she looked up at his face again.

His eyes were still trained on hers, their expression now inscrutable.

She swallowed hard as she felt it again... what she had felt that first time when she had felt his eyes on hers... and every time since then...

Her smile disappeared slowly as she felt her heart speed up again, this time not from fear...

She felt a second wave of relief then when his hand fell from hers as he lost consciousness.



these lines...oh my ..i cant tell how much i fell in love only with these mere few lines!!!

sorry..not mere...awesome lines😳

"hold on..hold onto me..." oh my...wat an intensity here...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Waooo superbbb hope we see sulbala marriage soon n dere romance...awsum writing...
ALL DA BEST 4 UR DELIVERY...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Absolutely WOWOWOWOWOWO!!!!

Please continue...do not ever stop!!!!

Lovely just lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
It's so good to hear from you ... have yet to read ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
D... each time I get so lost in your writings that I cant seem to have enough... please don't stop 'cause its a priceless you have. Good luck and hope you come back soon 👍🏼

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