OS: Legend - 3 (p. 9)

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

the scene could only have been from rishabh's perspective D, just like in the show.. his nightmare.

Those eyes.. madhu may have been able to imagine the solid impact of that gaze accurately but she would never be daunted by it.

.and the legend , has to have a dark undertow .. who else but a brittle hollow man to sink, in that dimension. it doesn't enrich the waters,no, but feeds the tattle tales that haunt the surface.

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ornella_mg

@ornella_mg

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Thank you for updating so fast. Loved it. Will be waiting for more😊

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Rewinding all those scenes...

hmm it feels soo renewed to read ur parts...all together different feel..different perspective and different world!!! 😳

wowww..u changed the dream a bit...that was cherry on top!! aww..i soo wish it happened for real in show!!! 😆

i loved ...loved it. "i am here..."

"sultaaan.." the scream..why do i feel its out of anguish and pain...?? the fear which gripped her...if she wouldnt reach him..she will be lost...

the eyes..the Tiger eyes..which hypnotized not only her...but the other person.

eyes are the faithful interpreter of oneself!!! 😳

Sorry ...its too much to ask for...but what to do ..im compelled to ask u more and more updates!!!! Greedy 😛

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Luved it totallyyy.👍🏼...Madhu trying to free herself from the other guy...& taking SULTAN's name...😉...How I wish v get to c something like that in the show tooo......willbe waiting for your further UPDATES...😉

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

That was beautifully penned ... Thanks ...

This Sultan is an enigma ... has started haunting us too ... 😆

Love the visuals and the videos you have posted ...

Thanks D ... 🤗 that's a virtual hug for you and the Bun ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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Aparna Gopal

@aparnasvj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

It was fantastic update... Wow... RK in his insecurities... I luvd it...

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ginny_2

@ginny_2

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

beautiful 😃loved it absolutely,

rk's insecurity , very well portrayed,

tiger eyes,

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

I'm sure I have told you before, but if I haven't. I love the way you write different point of views. Each character has a distinct flavor and style, a different way of looking at life, and so many more nuances. *sigh* I truly missed your updates.

I hope you're doing well. :)