SS: Bewafa THE END pg62 - Page 13

Originally posted by: vmpy

just saw da new update and i rushed to read it.awesome.u r taking da story forward in a v amazing way.keep up da great job.thanx for da compliment.im glad dat i brought smile to someone life.i myself need them a lot.hahahaha.

Originally posted by: PrittB

Res.

The title scares me.

Not me. This is not something to brag about. Sorry😳

I love the transition you make from past to present, it flows so nicely that at times I don't notice it's the present or the past until I see the mood that's been set.

I put in the bar things but they didnt show up. I am glad you could still make the distinction. I shall give myself a pat on the back for coming up with that😆

LOL Bittuji having a thing for Madhu's school girl looks. That cracked me up.

that man is not as innocent as he looks I tell ya.

Madhu forcing a smile on her face. That's harder to do than it seems, speaking from experience.

This FF just makes me want to scream out my story ahah.

Learning experience over here as well...distant past though

Slit wrists...wanting death...It's actually kind of interesting to see this on the male's side of the FF rather than the females. But I'm glad you're showing Madhu out to be stronger than RK in a sense.

Strong is a relative word...I dont seem strong to myself, I might to others & vice versa. Now I am ust saying things for the sake of saying things😆

Originally posted by: -GhostOrchid-

Infidelity is something I hate with a passion..So this story was always bound to be raise intense emotions..
We share the sentiment, most of us I'd say.
I read both the versions..for me Madhu's version left more impact..as it was bound too..because it focused on the act itself whereas his was more of a build up..giving us a background..

RK is trying to move around the issue in circles, avoiding it of sorts.
she was the one going through it and I felt it..the words were hard hitting..made me live every emotion she was feeling..the disgust..the loss..the hurt..the bleakness..everything..
Oh how I am glad.
According to me the perpetrator never completely understands what the other person goes through..yes, he/she may realize the mistakes, be guilty but wont understand till they experience the same..
All he can do is try... I am strong believer in the power of mirror neurons. But, that is just me trying to find light at the end of a tunnel

Awesome work Jasleen 😊
Edit: didn't realize the second chapter was up..
will comment on it later
Thank you. Will wait for your comment patiently :) My treasures of patience are limited FYI😉

Originally posted by: ..Enigma..

nyc post yaar...👏