SS: Bewafa THE END pg62 - Page 47

Originally posted by: PrittB

I miss this SS. :(

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Hmm..read it thru buh as i mentione in my oder post infidelity just plain messes with my head and i can't bear love triangles as well..i knw da world isnt hunky dory n it does happen to ppl

The job of a writer is find something wrong in a near perfect scenario. If there is nothing wrong still, you MAKE something go wrong. That just comes with the territory😉

buh den again i might hav behaved like madhu in dis ff except i wudnt have sacrificed my dreams

manipulative mofos exist and can turn anyone.

then again, diving head first into a relationship like this takes another kind of person- a person like madhu😭

and i wud have instead asked him of what he thot of me asking him to quit..if u say i am ur equal its not just for say, whteva is da truth lay it on me.
I do unto thee, what i do unto me..

that is a good attitude to have. good on you

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

I move on to da whole of da story..awesome
I totally loved it especially the time transition

that was one of my finer inventions😳

and more dan anything bittuji..he was IT in dis ff..i lyk da guy onscreen da few tyms i watch da show and in dis story he had me tail wagging..

mhmmm
I love subservient ppl..most of us do..buh while one necesarily needs a backbone, wen to dissolve it and wen to stem one is upon us...i luvd it abt dis bittuji..

he knows just the right thing to say. we all need a friend like him
Malik - Scottie - beautifully incorporated

why thank you. family is important
As i said b4 ur stories have a flow and thats what keeps me hooked..

And RK thruout..bowled me..ol incan say is wow finally a sane, non exagerating, crossing da realms of reality infidelity story..apart from da ending (not everyone can finish a cold blooded murder thou many do scheme such, da ending remains fictional, much loved and greatly enjoyed

why thank you. I agree it was dramatic but, sometimes I just lose the luster at the end of the project and abandon it. didn't want to do that, this was the next best thing.

No excuses, I could have done better

*me discovered ur flair for dramatics,

there is a certain attraction in the beauty of mimicking- acting, theatrics, writing, all of it remain my loves

russian/jewish that is doll fetish strong word i knw

you know what a fetish is, right?

and where does the russian/doll come from?

as far as I can tell, I didn't repeat the russian streak or the jewish streak, for that matter, more than once.

really, I am amused more than anything

and an affinity for grey shades and quirks)
black and white is a myth, I like to dispel it every now and then.
And that one particular hes jus a man, hes my man - me lubz..

Originally posted by: PrittB

The first time I read it, I admit, my reaction was W*F.

The second time I read it, I actually enjoyed it. Though she suddenly turned creepy, I like what she did. I like how it's going to make RK suffer as well.

I enjoyed her revenge type thing.

She did something I never could...no, I'm not referring to her killing 'the other girl'. I'm referring to her standing up for herself and getting back at the man and woman who nearly broke her.

She didn't let it completely destroy her..

I actually really liked this FF and waited for updates. I'm sad it's over Jassu. But in my opinion, you ended it in a perfect manner and at the perfect time.

Love you. <3

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

Read it all in one go, I liked it, the ending was so shocking! keep up the great work! Did not expect her to stand up for herself like that, glad she did but didn't know she would be able to kill the other woman.