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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Desire6
Oh lovely dona nd d last line 'til infedility do us part' caught my heart...
I hope you are not on RK's side but, I also kinda hope you are. As a writer, I want you to like him but not like him. I am confused😕😆
U pennd it very well jasu...b it d 1st part of proposin or der 1st meetn or d heart wrenchn present.. Superb FF. 🤗
Thank you. 🤗
Hey again u changd d photo.. I opend d link n mobile nd was scroln down thnkn d other photo in mind🤣
😆 That is my business these days...shipping hard & if you dont know what shipping is, run and never look back😉 bad drug😆

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

NOTE:

Okay, I have finally thought this through and made some plans for the future i.e. the direction of this FF. There will be a Madhu version of the story. A fair warning, this version will make you HATE RK through and through. So, if you wish to maintain your likability of Rishabh, do not read that version. That version will be up in a few minutes and only limited to a few updates (say four tentatively). Only when I feel you will not get the whole picture from RK's version alone. This particular update will focus on what Madhu thought about the night.

I will make a separate thread just so those of you who do wish to read it, can avoid doing so.😊

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Here is the link to Madhu's version

Chapter 1

[Click Here]

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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

fantastically fantastic and amazingly amzing.im just loving ur writing style.madhu is leaving rk now.and da flashbacks were great.thanx for pm and continue soon

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Rufia

@..Enigma..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

really jasleen i love it d prologue...amazng yaar...

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Rufia

@..Enigma..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

rk is really sad...see hw he say's...She hears me. Just for a moment, her brows pucker. I have seen no response from her even since the wooed day I betrayed my Madhubala.madhu didnt evn response her...but really nyc yaar...honestly i love ur ff's...😊amazng writer...👏

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840216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Ok all writers are on way to make rk bad just kidding after 4 updates u will give rk worthy updates or note. Then i can decide

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Aakriti

@CrazyCryztal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Nice yaar !!!! 😊

"dancing skills that could put (only) Dharminder's to shame." nice one 🤣

and i must admit it is hard to imagine a bold madhu, bolder than RK !!!!!!

But still i loved reading it.

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shravanikrishna

@vaani21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Good Start Dona.!!😃

Plz, No more tragics '.Enough of this Bewafa track in the real show.🤢

But still, i admire ur writing skills.can't miss.

Edited by vaani21 - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: deepak148
Ok all writers are on way to make rk bad just kidding after 4 updates u will give rk worthy updates or note. Then i can decide

ermm I have no intentions of revealing the end good or bad, all I can tell you is, this half of the story is a redemption track. Madhu's version will be raw. If you cannot read that version for whatever reason, I completely understand hence the need for another thread. This thread is the male perspective on things. I am not saying he makes excuses but he sure as hell tries to get her back. Hope you like it :)

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