|| SS: 40 Lakhs Later || Part 11A Pg 53 - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update..why is RK behaving that way?... Really felt sad for Madhu though
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Posted: 12 years ago
where oh where is chapter 9?????

I started reading your story - love it by the way - and then no chapter 9???????????

😭

can we get it back??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautifullyy written story! Its stories like dis...wich keep us all going wen d show is going through a CRAP phase! Three cheers for ya! Please do update soon! 😊 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey just went through your SS.It's nice,so simple and clear.Like RK overr here, and I am really curious to know as to why he left her.Waiting for the story to unfold as well as the next chapter:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 11A
"The Price is Right"
I swiftly headed for the door hoping to make it out before the broken pieces of my heart were crushed any further.
I was beginning to think life just hated me enough to make this harder than it already was because through the door screaming,
"MOM! MOM! MOM! MOM! MOM! MO'" he ran grabbing my hand too.
"I forgot to show you this yesterday! I guess I was tired cause of the long ride home," he looked up at me with an accusing glare, "'anyways look!" He ecstatically pointed to his grades.
"All A's! Even in art this time!" He admired the paper.
He was growing up faster than he had to, but his innocence hasn't been robbed. This made my heart feel a little lighter before leaving.
His eyes lifted themselves off of the paper to glance up as his mom, "Wait, mom? Are you crying? Mom!!! What is it this time!"
She didn't even bother to give me an accusing glare before answering, "Nothing I'm just really happy about your grades. All A's! Even in art!"
Now that was the Madhu I knew. She'd get through this, I suppressed my proud smile.
"No, stop crying right now mamma!" He said as he was about to rip the report card up.
"Krish! What are you doing!" Madhu snatched it out of his hands.
"Aisi khushi ka kya faida jo kissiko rulata hai?"
***
It was late afternoon. He must have been far from here now. She patted a peaceful Krish in her lap.
The truth was she needed him more than he'd need her.
Bringing his strong hands together to her face, she didn't even have to search for comfort.
Mera bacha.
Stroking his soft face, she looked out the window. The white snow was blinding.
Carefully she got up, and began to draw the curtains until she noticed a grey coat on the bench outside.
Alone.
It seemed like it had been sitting there for hours, watching her from afar while the owner sat with his back to the house.
***
A/N: Ok I think in the last chapter the "hifasaat se putting the dupatta back on Madhu" was clear enough to say that no they did not do it, and nor did he want to. And a lot of you are stating the comments that "you can't wait to find out why RK is doing this" when the reason has been mentioned in the past chapters but I don't blame you if you forgot because of the infrequent updates. Also as a side-note WATCH AASHIQUI 2. Take my word for it. Both Shraddha Kapoor and Aditya Roy Kapoor's acting was phenomenal and this is coming from someone who extremely dislikes Bhatt movies.
AND this FF is to end in the next few parts (by 13).
-Shweta
Edited by -ForeverYours- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres
I am just going to say it. I forgot the story. I got to read it again now. I still remember the characters and the first few chapters but the reasons are confusing me. I ... yup have to read it again.
Edited by DonnaHarvey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unres.

I am just super confused.

I'll read it again later to see if I understand what's happening.
I got the first part but the second part confused me. Ah!
I'm with Jassu on that one, I've been forgetting this FF as well, I probably should go back to read it again too.
Edited by PrittB - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am good.
Believe that.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey

unres

I am just going to say it. I forgot the story. I got to read it again now. I still remember the characters and the first few chapters but the reasons are confusing me. I ... yup have to read it again.

I don't blame you 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
A short and cute update, love Madhu's relationship with her kid:)

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