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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update safi...
i'm loving this story so much!!!
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awesome update loved it RK managed to wingle madhu to stay at his house now mmm wonder who need protecting more Rk or madhu 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm 4 pts 6 n 7! Read dem nw! Awesum fab updates! Madhu worried abt RK ! Y? Her colleagues talk abt her cahnge in behaviour n say tht she is der 4 RK! RK makes her laugh n comments on her beauty! Madhu has a past! Rk invites her 4 dinner! Well written! update soon
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muaah.safi
RK is in full flirting mood...ooo ooo la Lala
Loved it soo much.
RK ki flirting aur madhu ki akad ... Dekhne layakh hogi
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awesome update loved it yash tried to have him shot and madu will be staying to protect him loved the update thanks for the pm

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awesome
loved it a lot

love to read both MB and MG version...
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updating now.. ;)
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Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE


This is te real one but I converted to mannet to...

We're there any problem?
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oh...sorry...
well geet's name came instead of madhu in d hospital scene...

Edited by ashred12 - 12 years ago
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~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 8 ~


As the day traveled to the night... Time for them to leave..., it was time for RK to leave, be with Madhu... He starred at her weird ancient beauty, drinking with a feeling of warmth's, the feeling she provokes inside him when she is close, those beautiful lips and top of it the smell she posses, she was driving him crazy. When she was there, no girl exist for him, he forgets he was..., a playboy... His idea was girls are his personal position but here, the situation was different, the feeling is different... Was it love?

'RK...' Madhu jerked him little, to stop starring at her, which made the atmosphere in his private car awkward. Bittuji silently sat at the front, busy typing in RK's appointment and cancel any necessary one. Now and than his phone was buzzing and now and than he answered busy or call back later.

Madhu smiled, half hearted, rooted, she wanted to be with her family, missing each one of them. Talking over the phone wasn't enough, sometime she barely have enough time to call... She smiled sadly, remembering each one of them...

'what's wrong?' RK question, seeing her upsetting face.
'nothing, missing my family back home. I promised them that I will be home for two weeks but this came along...' she looked outside of the busy Mumbai street to avoid any eye contact with RK.

RK gave out a small sarcastic smile.

'you must be very lucky to live close to your family...' Madhu questioned. 'I always envy people who live close to there family! My life have been a rolacoster and when I realized I am moving faster than the time... Someone walks in where makes me impossible to stop...' madhu spoke sadly... Forgetting who she was sharing her feeling with... 'I.. Oh... S...' she weirdly looked at RK, wondering what she was doing... 'I am sorry... I ... '
RK observed her face, not whispering anything just listening, there was pain... Senseless pain, unconditional pain... & why can he feel them?

'anyway, who do you have in your family?' she quickly changed the topic...

RK smiled sadly, looking out through the dark black glasses, resting his face on his hand, hiding the sarcastic smile...
'we shall see...'

RK opens the long door of his flat what looked like a house... Madhu smiled and was about to step when Depali looked at the couple with big eyes...
RK ignored the presence and walked in however Madhu stopped with a smile.
'hi... I am Madhu...' she pulled her hand up for a handshake... Depali looked at her luggage and than looked confusingly at Madhu.

She didn't say anything, thinking its another girl of RK's... She smiled... 'new flavor..?.'

Madhu confusingly looked at her than at RK.

He ignored the whole incident and than called his servant 'nakul...'

'yes sir...'
'take mama's luggage in our gust room...'
Nakul nodes taking her luggage.

Madhu walked around statin atg the great hall and many painting and one side a wall full of winning trophies... 'very nice...'

'thanks...'

'now, hmm...'

Depali thought she is one of those girl who probably sleeping with RK to have her big break in to the film industry...

RK quickly left to change... & Depali walked towards Madhu.

'so you are the new flavor I see...' Madhu looked at her again in confusion...
'excuse me...?'

Madhu stood in the middle, seeing Depali circling her and judging her by simple cloths, a black genes with white t-shirt... And gun hiding underneath...

'I dot understand you people... I mean sleep with him for a big break, seriously?'

'what?' Madhu pulled a annoying face.

'yes, chi chi... I mean here? You girls can stoop so low, I can't believe this...'

Madhu understood what she was talking about than smiled. No wonder RK was like this, rude, batamiz, he may think every girl is like that. Then she observed Depali, very blunt and defiantly not nice.

'I am sorry, but you are mistaking...'

'how could I?'

'and why weren't you in hospital? RK was hurt...' Madhu informed her.

'so... He is hurt every day thats not mean we will pay visit every day!'

Madhu looked at her shockingly... RK could have been dead... Now she was sure why RK was like that... If a so called house is like that than obviously he will wonder outside for love.

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~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 9 ~




'bhabi ji...' RK spoke from top of the stair... 'Madhu... Bhabi ji have this false ego who she think everyone should provide her importance... Now now bhabi ji... Are you jealous with all my fans well wish...'

Madhu observed there tinting fight and surly didn't fancy falling in-between them...

'come Madhu, I will show you around my house...'

Depali fumed with anger, seeing RK taking personal interests... Something she have never observed before... Madhu flowed RK, traveling around his house and than eventually in her room...

Madhu smiled back... She took a phone out from her pockets, it was no ordinary phone, but special. 'when ever you require help, just press a number 3 times and it will connect to me instantly...'

'I let you rest now... See you later...'" RK smiled

RK walked out with a smirk, he never behave like this normally, ever, and now behaving completely different with a girl he knew less about. He looked back once again before disappearing along the long corridors...

...

RK woke up in middle of the night with a strange noise. He took his phone to observe the strange time... 1 am... He wondered what was the noise.

RK walked out of his room, only to see at the far end, Madhu's room light was still on. He rubbed his eyes, than walked up to see her door was wide open to...

He knocked softly... While yoning. He leaned against the door, observing Madhu doing some work on her laptop.

'very late... Don't you get tied?'
Madhu looked up with a smile, 'you could never get tired by talking to your family... Its evening back home...'

RK looked at her in awe... She was wearing a silk nightdress that came up to her knee, her white fluffy sleeping shoe. The open curly hair gave her an amazing sweet looks while her pink lips were inviting him in...

He was dreading the moment as each passing second was making him week, tremble on his knee...

'gosh you are so beautiful...' Madhu again in surprise looked up, than looked at her cloths which was giving out wrong impression...

She smiled uncomfortable and than took a pillow and rested one her lap, hiding anything that would attract any opposite sex...

'I mean..' RK looked here and there in embarrassment... Was he embarrassed? RK was surprised with him self, this was something new a new feeling he just recently discovered... 'so...' RK decided to change the subject. 'talking to family!'

Madhu smiled back in a comfortable manner, she didn't want to bring any topic up that relates to the family, it seems like he belongs to a broken family...

'do you know what...' Madhu looked at him for few fraction of second, 'my perception about you have changed. I don't mind your irritating and nonsense flirts... Maybe you never have met a good girl!' she smiled.

'you seriously not considering your self as a good person!' he mocked. 'because I know you surly aren't... You pointed a pistols at me compare to all those girl who would easily sleep with me!' RK quickly finished his sentence realizing what he was saying... You are seriously stupid RK! RK spoke to him self... 'no I meant.. kiss.'

Madhu couldn't control her laughter and successfully managed to attract RK all over again. 'I have to give you this complement, you look amazing when you laugh...'

'do you know what...' Madhu stood up... 'you remind me someone very special to me... Actually very close... Only person...' she smiled than faced the wide windows, looking down at the Mumbai city.

RK curiously observed her every movements... 'is it that's why you were worried about me? Stayed up the whole night, beside my bed...' he flowed, walking little close to Madhu...

Madhu in surprise spines around, looked at him with a shocking face and little embarrassed...

'isn't that truth Madhu...' he smiled, still taking one by one step close to her...
'you knew?' she widens her eyes... Looking here and there... Then at his handsome face again...
'why were you worried Madhu? You barely know me... I barely know you...'

Madhu wasn't sure how she should put her worry forward, how should she explain in depth of her story... How she should answer his question...

'I want to know Madhu... Because...' he stopped just in front of her, few inches apart, even Madhu didn't realize how close he was to her... 'a different feeling provokes inside me when I see you... A...'

Before RK could continue, Depali knocks on the door... 'Your mum, she just hard the news about you... And calling me to diatribe my sleep... Where is your phone? Why you are not answering it?'

Depali sure wasn't happy with what she was seeing... 1 am... And here RK is with Madhu...

next- whats next?

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