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ashred12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...rk's plan on his face !!

pls recheck ur updates wen u convert maaneet ff to rishbala ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm...lallallala...lallalal.
RK toh fida on Madhu . uff yeh pyar karbaitha.
oh god from where did this real enimies n bullets came
Bittuji bittuji where r U?
am loving it sooo much!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE




lol hehe
yep madhu is very storng and as the story unfoldes.. i hope you will be amazed with her story and background..
i am trying to explain in much detail as pose.. bcs all this part will be a sweet guilty pain once the twist hits the screen.. well i hope so.. there allot of clues at the moment but i bet you lot not even thinking what i am thinking lol..
so hoepefully the twiste effect will be nice ;)


lol😆 i will always b amused wid ur story nd the char darling 😉. nd the characterization u talking abt...well the general human mentality nd thinking wont evn cum near ur thinking!!! u tho topu eheee😆 nd cumng to the background ...err...i dnt evn guess...bcoz its waste of tym on thinking wat will b ur next plot...u r same as tht superstar RK!!!!!😉. as usual unpredictable. yea i cn c tht u r explaining in detail...compared to many other ff. i guess this char is bugging u!!!!😳sweet guilty pain???????😲 ailaaa..maata ji plzzz daya karo hum par...dnt put sooo much of turmoil in dis ff ...ur guilty pain is equal to buckets of water!!!!😭😭 y do u bet darling...u win, i loose!!!!😆 c hw damn happy im, evn wyl loosing.😊 twist effect ?? wen dat part will cum darling..i hav 2 b careful...plzzz do tell me b4 on fb...i hav 2 b chrged!!!!!!😛 wish u luck!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
The attack was real !!! wow !
Madhu stayed with RK and did not leave him all night 😉
awesome
nahtani88 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
RaDMG25 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving it especially the questioning of feelings by RK and madhu is just ignorant of it all but stayed with him the whole night 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashred12

nice...rk's plan on his face !!

pls recheck ur updates wen u convert maaneet ff to rishbala ff...


This is te real one but I converted to mannet to...

We're there any problem?
:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

~Ajeeb Dasta~

~PART - 7 ~

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''I am worried...' madhu slowly sat up while sitting up with her phone, taking to someone. 'why do I feel responsible?' she picked a pillow from the side than gently putting between her back and the bed frame. She causally hugged the duvet with an uncomfortable smile.
'don't... It's not your fault!' the person on the other line replied, madhu smiled comfortably and hanged up before saying a goodbye!

She sat on her bed for while, staring at the big grand clock that was hanging on the wall in front of her. 3 pm. The tiardness on her eyes disappeared, she seemed glad. Her thought was indeed occupied with Rishab's- no... RK's incident.

'it's time to get ready madhu, back to duty!'

...

RK slowly sits up, waking with discomfort, but only to witness madhu, looking at him worriedly! 'good morning...' he smiled with half open eyes.
Madhu smiled back in return, sitting beside him on a stool... 'how are you feeling now?'
'how are you feeling?' RK questioned back at madhu. He knew well, she was here through out the night for him, protecting him.
'RK, answer when I question. It's important for me to know about your health!'

He smiled, while shifting on the soft white bed. 'dam good after seeing you!'
Madhu rolled her eyes with his reply. 'do you ever stop flirting?' she questioned with little humor.

'I can flirt with you forever...'

Madhu nodes her head in disbelieve, 'you give me the feeling that I am working with some kids and not a 30 years old man!'
'ouch!' RK smiled with announce tone!
'what happen?' madhu nearly stood up with worried expression.
'I am 29! How could you!' he complained.

Madhu couldn't control her laughter as she instantly exploded. Rishab couldn't control him self as he just gazed at the beauty.

Outside madhus team member gazed through a small oval shape window, surprised to here, there boss laughing.

'gosh we never saw her like this before!'
'oh yes, she is completely different person out of this job... And seems like she came to see him more than duty!'
Both team member laughed...

...

'Owo, did anyone ever told you this?' RK opened his eyes fully, smiling yet lost in her.

'tell me what?'

'that you are beautiful and I feel like... This time should freeze here...' he spoke in his most sensuous voice however his line took madhus smile way as she starred at him in confusion manner, but there was little frightening eyes in those shocking expression... She parts her red lips to say something, however backed way, controlling her mind.

'didn't my line amaze you, pretty surprised with my line I amaze the whole nation and here it is, madhu... Who barely shows care... ' he smiled as he tried to sit up.

Madhu still sat there frozen, surprised shocked... It took her few fraction of second to relocate her self. 'no... Nothing...' she smiled sadly.

'I am getting discharged today...' RK informed madhu, 'can I ask my savior out for a dinner...'

Madhu hasetitated for few minutes...

'don't say no, I don't like hearing no... You already said no once now, I want to here a yes!...' RK observed madhus expression and he couldn't let this chance escape so easily... 'think as a special thank you from me!... I promise I won't be rude!' he smiled, indicating at his broken hand...

Madhu smiled, excepting the Invitation...

'now... Do you know who shot me?' RK changed there intense topic and coming back to work..

'umm... Yes, it was yash's worker!' she quietly replied.

'do you mean the yash, owner and founder of the KBC!' he shockingly questioned.
'yes...'
'but why on earth he wants to shote me?' both looked at another confusingly, did madhu know the reason or it was a wild guess? Can she put his life in risk for sake of her? No... She surly couldn't and neither she knows him enough to explain her life history... 'I really don't know why, wish I knew & the detective work is not up to me, I am only here for your safety but soon as I know something I will surly tell you what's happening...' madhu smiled.

'does that mean you are here for me until you are sure that I am safe!'

'seems like it...'

'that's an amazing news...'

'I have to ask you something...' madhu smiled at RK... 'it's ok if you don't want this top level of security however it's necessary for one of the member of our team to stay at home with you!'

'if its you it's fine & if it's someone other, than I am refusing...'

Madhu looked worriedly at RK, however his safety was necessary... 'does that include you will behave and no rude attitude...'

RK brought out his hand, crossing his heart, 'I am a good person in heart!'

Madhu smiled while thinking something deeply. It was correct for her to put him under 24 hours observation & long as yash is here, in India she couldn't leave RK at all.
'I have to thank yash personally now' RK smiled...

Madhu starred at RK confusingly... 'what?'
'shot= you in my house...' he laughed...

Madhu stood up and walked out of the room angrily, however RK starred at the mysterious girl. She obviously had the ideas why the shot was fallen place however she was refusing to disclose anything, but amongst this, he was having his life time oputuarniety to have her... Was he really falling for this girl?

RK was confused, her action confused him however he never felt this about anyone, did he ever met any girl who refused to be with him, it seemed all to predictable he thought, she really had no feeling in him or his wealth but why she was protecting him, it's her duty was another thing, but like her team member suggested it was something beyond that level...

As madhu left, rk looked at his watch... "now where is bittuji?"...

next- madhu in rks house OO
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Posted: 12 years ago
So mystery deepens...
Madhubala...ahaan...has a past...a past which is entwining with RK's safety somewhere and Yash is the connection
my my...now you have me hooked line and sinker...i can never run away from a mystery which includes sizzling passion...after all bad boy RK may be good at heart but he is still a superstar and Madhubala may be a ice queen but her heart is already molten wax for Rishab...oh no I mean RK😉
Your subtle hints are marvelous and absolutelly enthralling episode...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

So mystery deepens...

Madhubala...ahaan...has a past...a past which is entwining with RK's safety somewhere and Yash is the connection
my my...now you have me hooked line and sinker...i can never run away from a mystery which includes sizzling passion...after all bad boy RK may be good at heart but he is still a superstar and Madhubala may be a ice queen but her heart is already molten wax for Rishab...oh no I mean RK😉
Your subtle hints are marvelous and absolutelly enthralling episode...



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I AM GLAD YOU ENJOYING THIS..
hehe... i was worried .. but hopefully as the story progressing you will see the basic and me get my readers back lol...
i am so glad after all this months i still have 50odd of you reading
it means alot

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