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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys....i wont b able to update for a while...maybe 2 to 3 days...afta that wil give u ur fruit of waiting....3 chapters together at least...shabd mahi sequences...everythn u wish for...buh meanwile...bear wid my absence and do comment...those who havnt comented yet!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 update, will wait for ur next updates!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART SIXTEEN


kripa gets up in the morning, all smiling. it was her marriage yestrday. the first morning after she became kripa khanna... but she sees that angad is not in the room. her happy face falls. then she decides her mind that she wil win back angad and goes to bath.
she went over to the bathroom and tried opening the door. but she couldnt. somebody was already inside.

kripa called through the door: kaun hai andar???

it was angad who was inside...

angad: bikhari hoon...

kripa: heyyy.... angad....rockstar se bikhari kaise ban gaye...

angad: very funny... and stop banging on the door.

kripa: wen r u planning to come out?

angad: later... if u want use the next room...

kripa: no thank you. i wil wait...

angad: your wish...

and he took another half an hour. kripa was lying on the bed wen at last he came out. she sat up saying , "kitna der lagate ho? anybody wil think u are a girl.

then she noticed how angad was at that moment. all he was wearing was a long towel around his waist and his strong muscular body was beaded with water drops. she was looking at his Greek God like body in awe that she dint notice that angad was looking at her in confusion.

he came and snapped his fingers at her face,
"kya dekh rahi ho?"

kripa startled: woh me... dekh rahi dhi ki tum kitne hot lag rahe ho...

angad: tume sharm nahi aati aisi baatein karte hue?

kripa pouted: kyoun??? me apni pati ke baare me nahi toh padosi ke baare me kahu???

angad: achcha achcha...chalo...jaldi aa jao...thodi der me jaana hai hume... waise...mahi aa rahi hai humare saath???

kripa: nahi....woh do theen din ke baad hi aayegi... mama papa ko uski zaroorat hai...

and kripa went to take a bath. she thought it was defenitley a start. angad was coming back to his usual friendly self. he was loads beter than yesterday nite. she was happy now... she hummed during her shower. meanwile angad was feeling aweful. he wanted to be normal with kripa but the flashes of kripa holding prem's hands and both of them talking come to his mind and he gets more angry with himself that he is trying to get back to her...

wen kripa came out, angad wasnt there in the room. she happily dressed in an orange salwar suit and she smiled wen she put her sindoor. she came downstairs where evryone were sitting around the dining table, waiting for her.

shabd looked up and called in glee: aa gayi bhabhi jaan... shaadi ke baad sab log aise hi late ho jaate ho kya? hume jaldi jaana hai...

kripa: aa rahi hoo na...

shabd: watever

they all had breakfast. suryaban and gayatri and mahi came over to see them off.

shabd caught mahi by the arm and pulled her away from everyone..."suna ki tum nahi aa rahi ho..."

mahi: haan...nahi aa rahi hoon. mama papa ko meri zaroorat hai...

shabd: kitne din ke baad aa rahi ho?

mahi: pata nahi shabd...shayad me aa bhi na jaau...

shabd: mahi..tum aisa nahi kar sakti... kya muje tumhari zaroorat nahi hai...???{he had tears in his eyes..}

mahi was stunned: shabd!

shabd blinking his tears: are...tum meri model ho na... me tumhare bina kaise shoot karunga...???

mahi smiled: shabd tum bhi na??? bas apne faayde ke sochte ho...

shabd: woh toh hai...selfish hoon...but not for my model..

mahi doubtful: then???

shabd: for my best friend...come back soon...wil miss you....

mahi: tume kya muje miss karne ke fursat milenge??? tumhare laakho girlfriends ke chakkar me muje bhool hi jaaoge...

shabd: aha!!! tume aise lagte hai??? if i am not wrong...is someone jealous here???

mahi: haha...very funny... ab jaao!

shabd: theek hai...tum jaldi wapas nahi aayi toh me aaunga tumhe lene... dus din... aur intezaar nahi hoga mujse... samjhi???

mahi: dekhoongi...

shabd: watever!!! i dont change my word... in 10 days u r not there, i wil be here...

mahi: theek hai baba... wil miss you...

shabd: me too...!!!

mahi smiled and both hugged lightly...

there was a tearful bye-tellings and they were going. throughout the flight, angad was giving kripa the silent treatment. he dint want himself to go to her at any cost.

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for days it was the same...angad dint bother to spent time with kripa. he used to go to for his recordings early in the morning and come back late. kripa was losing hope now. she wanted to go for the recordings and reheasals but naina dint allow her to because she was newly married. nobody felt anythng about angad keeping distance with kripa because they were busy in their own life. prem paid regular visits to kripa and he had become just like a family to the khannas.

meanwhile, the next concert was nearing....and the 10 days limit shabd had given mahi was finishing too... he was busy managing the work that he couldnt call up mahi...but he missed her like hell. he thought he would propose to her wen she comes back...he even bought an expensive diamond ring. he was planning this surprise and he thought he would not call her and make a very big surprise by going to get her.

mahi was distraught shabd dint call her. wen he was around, she could forget preet and wat he said that day. but these days shabd doesnt even call her and she was getting back all those thoughts she dearly wanted to forget and it made her more n more depressed. she couldnt feel like talking to anyone. he dint want to go back either. she dint even know the date shabd had given for her to go back was reaching nearer...





....to b contd....

i knw i promised u guys at least 3 updates...but m rather very busy with my admissions...so i wil not b able to fulfill that rite now...but wil put up the next part as soon as possible...do bear wid me and do comment guys... u ppl r very miserly with comments...!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this was a nice part..I think Mahi will soon realize that she has feelings for Shabd as well. I hope mahi accepts Shabd's proposal. Please update soon...waiting..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sl032597

this was a nice part..I think Mahi will soon realize that she has feelings for Shabd as well. I hope mahi accepts Shabd's proposal. Please update soon...waiting..


i hope u rembr the intro i gave abt mahi....abt her being confused....that part wil come up soon than her dress selection n stuff...😭 buh buh u jus wait....😃
Edited by giggling gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
I hope she's not confused about Shabd's proposal. That would be sooo sad. Well honestly I hope he doesnt propose at all..I mean she(Mahi) just got dumped by Preet.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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next part cming up sooon... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART SEVENTEEN

one the eve of the 10th day shabd had
given to mahi, he came home late that night. he even missed his dinner. the others were starting to get up wen he reached. aaliyah grinned, "kyoun bhai jaan...aaj kal bahut kaam kar rahe ho??? late aana bhi shuru kar diya..."

shabd fell onto the couch and sighed, "kal se chutti hai aali...aaj thoda work complete karna tha..."

kripa: kal se chutti???

naina: kis khushi me beta??

shabd: you see.. maine kal apni model ko wapas le aane ka waada kiya tha... agar us waada maine nahi nibhaya toh mahi shayad muje zindagi bhar ko sue kar sakthi hai...

kripa: toh ye baat hai....achcha hua!!!

shabd: aur bhi ek achchi khabar hai...

naina: kya???

shabd: muje ek saal ka contract mila hai canada me... usse meri work poore world me famous ho jaaunga... not that i am not famous already...

naina: shut up!!! ye toh achchi baat hai... par beta 1 year??? its a bit too much...

shabd: i know...but i could come in leave in between... m thinking about it... i could be famous by another way though...i might not take up this offer...

naina sighed: u r better at taking decisions son...we leave it to you...

everyone smiled and went with their work... kripa stayed back...

kripa: shabd...haath mooh dhoke aao...tumhare liye dinner rakh deti hoon...

shabd grinned: jee bhabhi...

kripa's eyes were flaring: aur ek baar bhabhi bulaya toh tume dinner nahi doongi...

shabd: okay sister in law!!!

and he quickly ran from ther. kripa jus shook her head and smiled... in a few minutes, shabd and kripa were seated across the dining table. shabd was eating ferociously. he seemed to be very hungry...

kripa: shabd...tumse ek baat poochu?

shabd: mmm....

kripa: uska kya matlab hua???

shabd: kuch bhi nahi....bas soch raha tha ki tumhe mujse kuch kehne ya poochne ke liye, permission lene ki zaroorat kabse padi...me angad ka taange thod doonga...

kripa: woh kyoun bhala???

shabd: usne tume change kar diya... dekho kaise sawal pooch rahe hai...ye sab formalities uski aadat hai

kripa: shut up shabd!

shabd: whatever!!!

kripa: dekho...formalities ke liye sorry... muje tumse poochna tha ki....tumhe mahi se kuch hai kya???

shabd gulped: uh...??? ummm....y???

kripa: bas jawab do

shabd: kripa....i cant lie... but i duno... muje nahi patha....but i think i do love her...."

kripa was happy she got up and went around to shabd and hugged him...."ohhh....u two would make a great pair....and i know she loves you too..."...

shabd just smiled painfully...kripa went to the kitchen... shabd said in his mind..."tumhe nahi patha kripa....kitna bhi me usse pyaar karu...woh toh preet se pyaar karti hai..."
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kripa was so happy wen she made her way back to her room that her sister was coming back to her and she is being loved with full heart by shabd... nothing could possibly go wrong with mahi now.... she would never be in a state as her....she opened and closed the door to their room... she was singing wholeheartedly... she dint even notice angad frowning at her from their bed...he appeared asleep to her...

song is "ye ishq haaye" from jab we met.

haan hai koi to wajah, to jeene ka maza yuun aane laga
yeh hawaaon mein hai kya, thoda sa jo naasha yuun chhaane laga
puchho na pucha mujhe kya hua hai, teri raahon mein aakar
puchho na pucha mujhe kya milega, teri baahon mein aakar
yeh ishq haaye baithe bithaaye, jannat dikhaaye haan
o raama, yeh ishq haaye baithe bithaaye, jannat dikhaaye haan

tode maine saare hi bandhan zamaane tere, todungi na main waada
aadha hissa mere to dil ki kahani ka tu piya mein baaki aadha
dekho na dekho mujhe hua hai, teri yaadhon mein kho kar
puchho na puchho mujhe kya, milega teri baaton mein jeekar
yeh ishq haaye baithe bithaaye, jannat dikhaaye haan
o raama, yeh ishq haaye baithe bithaaye, jannat dikhaaye haan

mere jaise laakho mile honge tujhko piya, mujhe to mila tu hi
tu hi mere hoton ki khilti huyi si hasi, gila bhi piya tu hi
dekho na dekho mujhe kya hua hai, tujhe sapno mein laakar
puchho na puchho mujhe kya, hua hai teri baaton mein aakar
yeh ishq haaye baithe bithaaye, jannat dikhaaye haan
o raama, yeh ishq haaye baithe bithaaye, jannat dikhaaye haan
haan hai koi to wajah, to jeene ka maza yuun aane laga
yeh hawaaon mein hai kya, thoda sa jo naasha yuun chhaane laga
puchho na pucha mujhe kya hua hai, teri raahon mein aakar
puchho na pucha mujhe kya milega, teri baahon mein aakar



angad who was frowning at her wen she entered and started singing...was now smiling quite amused at her singing in such funkiness... he really felt like taking her in his arms and swirling her around...but he exercised caution... finally kripa got onto the other end of the bed, still humming...

she seemed to be intoxicated by her happiness... unintentionally...kripa hugged the sleeping {sleeping to her} angad tightly. angad was startled by this behaviour. he expected her to let go soon but dint speak or move. but slowly, against his brain's wishes, he started liking the feeling of the hug.

kripa had fallen asleep and angad too, in the course of sleeping, hugged kripa and held her close that her head was lying on his chest. both were in that embrace till morning.

it was angad who woke up first. he was stunned to see both of them in such a position. he was even more shocked to see that it was himself who was hugging kripa closer. he wanted to lean over and kiss her forhead, but caught his senses in time. he was losing himself. he had to stay away from her...

he let go of kripa and got up...during his shower he was wondering how much at peace he felt in her embrace. he tried to get a grip. she loves prem... i cant do this... he dressed up and had breakfast and went out telling naina that he had some urgent work.

instead of driving to the office, he drove towards the sea. he had a house there. the house that faced the sea and had its own private beach where nobdy would come for miles near them. he had bought this without anybody else's knowledge, not even his parents or shabd. he had bought it as a gift for kripa for their wedding. he wanted to bring her there on the night of their marriage and spent their first night there. what all he had expected. and wat had happened.

he drove there because he wanted some time befor he had to face her again. it was painfull, knowing that your love had been so closer the last night and he couldnt love her because she loved someone else....he cried a lot.... and then went back to office wen he had made up his mind to do everything to stay away from her and make her stay away from him too. he thought of a way.... he knew wat would keep her away..




...to b contd...wil put up nxt part tomrw...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww this part was soo cute. Shabd's going to go see Mahi..cant wait to see what happens...please update soon. thanks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am sooo sorry...i dont think i wil b able to do the next update today...unexpctd stuff...wil update as soon as possible...a good long one....sowwwiii

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