FF-SAATH...wid u alwys[part29UPDATEDpg21]

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Posted: 17 years ago

#91

PART TWENTY

shabd and mahi had a moody morning... the got ready and took blessings from gayatri and suryaban and went on their way to the airport. both shabd and mahi took care not to talk to each other let alone look at each other. shabd couldnt stand her sight cuz he feared breaking down. and mahi couldnt because she felt angry at him. she dint know quite why....

they made their way to the khanna mansion in the same way without looking and talking. once they were in, mahi was taken along by aaliyah and kripa. shabd went upstairs and locked himself in his room and cried. then he sat up decidedly. he picked his fone and dialed...

"jeet...yaar....woh canada wale contract...is it still open??? yea it is...? ohhh that keen on having me huh??? okay then tell them i wil do it. kab jaana hoga??? 3 din me?? great...thanks jeet...see ya tomrw. goodnite..."

he crumpled on his bed and tried to sleep. a song in the background...
"sau dard" from janeman...

sau dard hain,sau rahatein
sab mila dilnashin
ek tuhi nahieeeeee

rukhi rukhi si yeh hawa
aur sukhe patte ki tarah
shehar ki,sadko pe main
lawaris, udta hua
sau raste
par teri rah nahi.eeee

sau dard hain,sau rahatein
sab mila dilnashin
ek tuhi nahieeeeee

behta hain paani, behne de
waqt ko yuhi, rehne de
dariya ne karwat li hai toh
saahilon ko sehne de
sau hasratein
par tera ghum nahi.eeeee

sau dard hain,sau rahatein
sab mila dilnashin
ek tuhi nahieeeeee

shabd thought, "mujse ye bardasht nahi hoga ki tum mere paas raho aur mujse khafa ho. main nahi jaanta mera kya kasoor hai mahi... par me tume dukhi nahi kar saktha...me tumse door chala jaaunga... shayad ye tujhe thoda sa sukoon de..."

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shabd left for his studio early next morning. mahi knew why but none of the others did. angad and kripa too left for their rehearsals because their next concert was in 5 days. mahi dint want to face shabd in such a situation. so she dint go for the shoot and just stayed home. naina thought she might me tired. nobody questioned her.

mahi spent her day alone in the garden and around the house cuz everyone was out of the house. shabd, kripa, angad and dilip were in the office. naina and aaliyah went to do some shopping. they had called mahi but she dint go with them under the pretext of being tired.

everybody came bak befor dinner. and shabd was late. evryone except for him had gotten up after eating, when he came bak looking dishevelled.

angad looked at him in surprise, "kya shabd...aaj kal bahut late aa raha hai???"

shabd smiled: kya karu bhai...work is important...

angad: i never thought i wud live to hear those words outa ur mouth...

everyone laughed. mahi was unusually silent throughout and she hadnt even looked up. and shabd was behaving as if he couldnt see her too. kripa and aaliyah sensed some tension between mahi and shabd. they glanced at each other. kripa knew it was better not to confront mahi first. so both aaliyah and kripa decided without speaking to ask shabd after his dinner.

shabd: waise...guys!!! tum logo ko yaad hai maine woh canada waale contract ke baare me bataaya dha...

everyone: haan...

shabd: well...those ppl are real crazy...wont take no for an answer!!!

naina narrowed her eyes: kya matlab??

shabd: mom...! matlab ye ke...muje jaan hoga...canada...ek saal ka contract...

naina: oh toh tumne decide kiya

shabd: yes... and i am getting paid 2 crores for this...howzzat???

angad: kewl brother...!!! i am proud of you

and angad goes around and hugs shabd. when they let go off each angad clapped shabd on the back and asked, "i hope this calls for a party??"

shabd: you bet!!!

angad: kab rakhna hai???

shabd: ummm....muje barso dopahar ko jaana hai... i would say tomorrow nite.

everybody was shellshocked. even mahi looked up in shock.

naina was tearful: beta...itni jaldi??

shabd: mom!!!!! they want me there as fast as possible... aur ye rona dhona bandh karo... its not the first time i am going...

dilip: hume pata hai beta...par...

shabd: par war kuch nahi... aur me aaunga na... muje jab chahe chutti mil sakti hai.

aaliyah, tears flowing from her eyes: watever happens bhai... do mahine me meri shaadi hai... 10 din pehle aana...nahi toh tumari khabar loongi me...

shabd smiled and walked over to aaliyah who had completely broken down. he wiped her tears and hugged her.
"aali...tum jab chahogi bhula lena...me aajaunga...aur ye rona chodo... meri ladli behen ke aankho me aasu mujse saha nahi jayega..."

aaliyah looked up and smiled. when she did, she saw tears in shabd's eyes too. the others dint want to make the situation more emotional. so they just said gudnite and went to their own rooms. soon it was just shabd, kripa and aaliyah.
mahi sneaked upstairs in all the emotions without anyone noticing.

she knew why shabd was going like this. he was doing this to make her happy. she was trying to believe that he is betraying her but she knew that shabd would never do such a thing. but she dint want him to be someone stalking her. she loved him as a friend. when the description of his love changed, it was hell for her. and now he is going away to make her happy. and it defntly dint make her happy..."muje khud pata nahi me shabd se kyoun khafa hoon...me kya karoon kya kahoon muje kuch samajh me nahi aa rahi...woh mujse pyaar karta hai...kyoun me usse is baat ke liye roothi hoon??? haan...mere dil me abhi bhi preet ki liye thoda bahut feeings hai par utna nahi jitna pehle dha...muje ab pata bhi nahi ki me preet se pyaar karti hoon...nahi...me preet se pyaar nahi karti hoon... par shabd..???"..she breaks down crying...

song in background..."jag soona soona" from om shanti om..

main taaj ya naamara, haay ve dasu main ki kara
dil jude bina hi tut gaye, hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
khel khale kismat ne
baar baar rod ankhiya tainu jo na vek sakhiya, ??? kudarat ne

chhan se jo tute koi sapna, (jag soona soona laage - 2)
koi rahe na jab apna, jag soona soona laage
jag soona soona hai toh yeh kyun hota hai
jab yeh dil rota hai, roye sisak sisak ke hawaayein, jag soona laage
chhan se jo tute koi sapna, (jag soona soona laage - 2)
koi rahe na jab apna, (jag soona soona laage - 2) re
soona laage re

roothi roothi saari raatein, phike phike saare din
viraani si viraani hai, tanhaayi si tanhaayi hai
aur ik hum pyaar ke bin har pal
chhan se jo tute koi sapna, (jag soona soona laage - 2)
koi rahe na jab apna, (jag soona soona laage - 2) re

....to b contd...SOOOOOON!!!!!!!
next part cming up...

Edited by giggling gurl - 17 years ago

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swati gud

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Posted: 17 years ago

#92

I hope mahi realizes how much she loves shabd and insists on going to canada with him(after marraige). please hurry ..waiting thanks

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giggling gurl

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Posted: 17 years ago

#93

hav put in the download links for the audio version of the kyph songs of part 11 and 12... if anyone wants the link to hear or download any other song i have given in this fanfic dont hesitate to ask 😃

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giggling gurl

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Posted: 17 years ago

#94

PART TWENTY ONE

after everyone had gone upto bed, aaliyah and kripa stayed back with
shabd while he was having his dinner. they needed an explaination.

kripa: shabd...tumare aur mahi ke beech kuch problem hai kya???

shabd choked on his food. he looked up unable to figure out wat to say.

aaliyah: ab jhoot mat bolna...hum jaante hai kuch na kuch toh tension hai tum dono ke beech. tabse notice kar rahi hoon, jabse tum dono wapas aaye hai. aur tumara aachanak decision lena...its not like the normal you, shabd

shabd took a deep breath and sighed.
"tum dono theek soch rahe ho."

kripa: tumne mahi se kaha??? ki tum usse pyaar karte ho???

aaliyah: sachchi bhai??? tum mahi se pyaar karte ho??? thats great!!!

shabd: haan...maine usse kaha..

kripa: aur...???

she was fearing the reply.

shabd: woh mujse pyaar nahi karti...kripa...she hates me now... woh mujse baat bhi nahi kar rahi...

aaliyah and kripa were in shock. they dint know wat to say. kripa went and caressed his hair.

kripa: woh khudh nahi jaanti woh kya kar rahi hai... she wil understand... muje pata hai woh tumse pyaar karti hai...bas use woh ehsaas hone do shabd...usse thoda waqt do...

shabd: isiliye hi toh me jaa raha hoon...jab me uske saath hoon toh woh mujse aur nafrat karega...

aaliyah: i support ur decision bhai... dont be sad dude... she is yours... woh tume mil jayegi... bas thodi si waqt ki zaroorat hai... uparwale aapko ye chalenge de rahe hai...

shabd looked up and smiled in spite of himself. this was a challenge... to prove his love to mahi...it was a challenge God had given him to win his love.

shabd: kal ke party me surprise hai...

aaliyah: shabd ke party me surprises hona koi surprise nahi hai...

kripa: kya hai surprise???

shabd: woh bas kal hi dekhna...

and all three of them went to bed. shabd felt lots better after talking to aaliyah and kripa. he knew wat he had to do now...its all so clear wat he has to do and there is no chance that mahi is gona escape this.
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next morning, everyone was busy with their own work out of the house. naina and aaliyah were gettin stuff for the party and it was just shabd and mahi in the house. shabd was packing in his room alone.

all his dresses were neatly packed and so were his photographic equipments... then he remembered something suddenly. he went over to his cupboard and took out a framed picture... he kept on looking at it.

the pictures he had taken of mahi at her first shoot. he was so engrossed in her smile that he dint see the real mahi come over to him.
she saw wat was in shabd's hand. she was just shocked.
she had come to say something. she dint even know wat to say. but she wanted to talk to him. but she dint know wat to say. she turned to leave wen shabd suddenly caught her hand

mahi was startled...: shabd...chodo mera haath

shabd: nahi chodunga... tum kuch bataane aaiy dhi... bataake jao.

mahi: muje tumse kuch nahi kehna...

shabd: ye toh jhoot hai... but i wont force you... par mere baat khan kolke sun lo... muje pata hai tum muje nahi apna sakogi... but i wil do as my heart wishes. me aaj sabke saamne apne pyaar ka izhar karunga..

and he leaves her hand. mahi is shocked out of her wits.

mahi: shabd...ye...tum....

shabd puts up his hand as to tell her to stop talking and he goes out of the room.

mahi thinks..."ab me kya karoon???"

but then suddenly naina called mahi from downstairs.
"mahi beta...neeche aao zara.."

mahi: jee mummyjee abhi aayi...

and she goes downstairs... naina and aaliyah had just come back from their shopping. there were loads of shopping bags. wen mahi reached both of them, naina took out a bag and gave to mahi.

mahi confused: mummyjee ye kya hai???

naina: aaj ke party ke liye dress... tume ye pehenna hai...

mahi: iski kya zaroorat dhi mummyjee?? mere paas bahut sare dresses hai...

naina: toh kya hua??? me apni beti ke liye nayi dress nahi khareed sakte kya???

mahi smiled: aisi koi baat nahi mummyjee....naraaz math huiye...!!

and she hugs naina and goes to her room. after she is gone aaliyah talks to naina...

"thanx mausi...apne bataaya nahi ki ye dress shabd ki pasand ki hai..."

naina: par muje ab bhi samaj me nahi aa rahi ki tum is baat ko kyu chupana chahti ho

aaliyah: aapko sab kuch aaj raat ke party me pata chal jayega...

to b contd.... shabd's farewl party cms next... and the party is important....and it revolves around a song...so wait and do comment

Edited by giggling gurl - 17 years ago

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swati gud

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Posted: 17 years ago

#95

this was really nice I wonder what Shabd will at the party and how Kripa will react..I hope he doesnt go to canada..or atleast takes Mahi with him...please update soon...wiatign thanks

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taran13

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Posted: 17 years ago

#96

This was a really good part. Continue soon. Can't wait to see what's going to happen at the party! Update soon!

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Saba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#97

really gud update! cant wait for the party update! plz continue soon!!

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giggling gurl

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Posted: 17 years ago

#98

i wil try to put in the next part soon...the next part is really important and i hav to do it carefully....its mostly a song....so takes time to work on it....wil try to put in sooooooooooooooooon

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giggling gurl

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Posted: 17 years ago

#99

PART TWENTY TWO

the party was a grand affair....angad had personally done the full decoration and stuff. he even took kripa's help though reluctantly.

evryone was eagerly waiting for shabd's surprise...and mahi was very nervous. she wasnt scared like she was wen she first heard him say that he is gona confess his love...she was just anxious about how she would be reacting.

kripa and angad made their entry gracefully. they were even hand in hand, due to aaliyah's insistance. this was a great feat owing to the fact that they rarely used to speak to each other.... angad because kripa spent mor time wid prem and kripa because angad spent more time wid mishty. somehow she had lost the will to win angad back over, to woo him after mishty had come into their lives. she just was living the role of his wife now...

kripa was in a black sari with silver works and angad in his black suit. so was shabd. prem and mishty were present in the party too. the very second she had come, mishty had swarmed over angad not allowing him to turn on his spot either... kripa was throwing furious glances at the pair and angad was looking elsewhere all flustered.

prem was smiling at kripa's possessiveness.

soon mahi made her entrance. she was in a lite blue choli...her hair let open like always shabd insisted her to. there were "ooohs" and "aaahs" and both kripa and naina took her nazar. she was wearing big silver earrings... mahi dint know that this was shabd's fave dress...

shabd meanwhile was busy staring at her. he remembered this dress. this was the one he had loved and had always dreamed mahi to be in. he had seen this dress while he went shopping with aaliyah the day befor and he had unconsiously let out his feelings....aaliyah had pretended not to hear...

he turned around and gaped at his sister. aaliyah jus winked as if to say..."ur wish is my command!"

shabd smiled at her and mouth, "u r my princess!!!"

after a couple of hours, kripa and aaliyah started throwing anxious looks at shabd. he still hadnt shown the surprise. shabd got the hint. he walked to the centre of the dancing stage and gestured the DJ.

suddenly all the lights went off and dimmed ones appeared in the middle. and a spotlight came on shabd. he took the mike and made an announcement..

"aap log jaante hai aap yaha kyu aaye hai... aur aaj me aap sabse kuch kehna chahte hai... aur kuch karna chahte hai... hey wait a second! i wil make it a song... all u couples out there... its a dance"

and he started singing..."kaas ek din" from showbiz.

mishty dragged angad to dance and prem graciously asked kripa to dance. she took some time to register wat prem was trying to do cuz she had been very angry with angad.

shabd walked over to mahi and held out his hand. she dint know wat to do buh involuntarily accepted shabd's proposal to dance. she was looking at shabd's eyes. something made her do that. she was thinking why and what that she dint notice shabd place his hands on her hip and swirl her around as he sang...

[AUTHOR'S NOTE: kripa sings in between...shabd's part is in blue, kripa's in red. the actions and wat ppl are doing during the song is in black.]

the three couples along with aaliyah and shabbir were slow dancing.

kaash ek din aisa bhi aaye, waqt ka pal pal tham jaaye
saamne bas tum hi raho aur umarr gujar jaae
o o o o o o...............{mahi looks at shabd surprised. this wasnt wat she expcted....he is not really trying to give her a hard time. he is expressing his feelings...she wanted to smile...but she dared not let shabd's hopes up befor she was sure of her feelings.} kaash ek din aisa bhi aaye, waqt ka pal pal tham jaaye
pyaar ruk na paaye chaahe saansein theher jaaye {everyone looked at kripa and kripa was looking at angad. angad and kripa's eyes met....angad was surprised to see the feelings in her eyes... he dint know wat to do or wat to say. he just looked at her}
o o o o o o...............

kripa let go of prem and started towards angad and mishty. angad let go of mishty and went towards the bar sorta thing and had a drink. kripa walked upto him and held out her hand. he looked at her for a full minute in awe and then accepted. both danced while shabd sang at mahi. mahi dint take her eyes off shabd.

tujhe dekhkar tujhe sochkar maine jo pal jiya tha
use dil ke hi kisi kone mein, bas kaid kar liya tha
kuchh aur lamhe tumse mile toh, duniya sawar jaaye
o o o o o o...............

mere dil ko tum churaake sanam nazarein nahi churaana{suddenly angad let go of kripa and went to drink. mahi let go of shabd and went and stood at an end.}
kisi baat par kisi mod par, mujhse na rooth jaana
aisa na ho ke dil mera tute aur bikhar jaaye{she held out her hands as if to beckon angad...but he dint look at her. he consumed a lot of alcohol..}
o o o o o o...............
kaash ek din aisa bhi aaye, waqt ka pal pal tham jaaye
pyaar ruk na paaye chaahe saansein theher jaaye

o o o o o o..............{shabd and kripa together...}

[COLOR=BLUE]both kripa and shabd got loads of applause. shabd bowed and made his way towards mahi who was standing looking down. he dint say anything. he took her hands and put his other hand in his pocket and took out a diamond ring. mahi was startled at wat was going to happen. but she dint dare pull her hand away. and in the next second, shabd had done wat he had wanted to.

in front of everyone, without even asking her permission, shabd put the ring on her left hand ring finger... in other words...
HE ENGAGED HER!!!!

the next second, without even leaving mahi a chance to speak out her anger and frustration, everyone swarmed around to them to congratulate. shabd was taken away by angad and his friends to celebrate. mahi was stunned to speak anything. he did everything and she dint know...but she dint feel very angry now.

in a smtime the party ended in high spirits... by that time...angad had consumed bottles of alcohol...he was gettin into the passion now...he wanted kripa...he couldnt bear anymore differences and distances. he wanted to end it now...

everyone had gone upstairs. it was just angad who was downstairs and he made his way upstairs. he was very drunken. he opened the door to his room. the lights were off and the moonlight was showering in the room. kripa wiped off her tears as she heard angad come in. she turned around to leave, when he suddenly caught her hand...
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mahi walked into shabd's room. he was there, keeping his photos in his bag. she walked upto him. shabd looked at her.

mahi: ye kya hai??? ye kya zabardasti hai??? tumne mujse pooche bina...mere raazi ke bagair mujse sagaai ki???

shabd: haan ki...

mahi: par kyun???? kya haq hai tumara???

shabd: pyar ka haq hota hai.

mahi: shabd...tum...

shabd held his hands up to make her stop talking.

shabd: main jaanta hoon tum confused ho. tumne mujse kaha ki tum preet se pyaar karti ho. ye bhi kaha ki me kai ladkiyo ke saath batakte rehta hoon. par tum abhi tak mujse ye nahi keh paayi ki tum mujse pyaar nahi karti ho. sur iska matlab jaanti ho tum??? is ka matlab ye hua ki tum mujse pyaar karti ho. bas tume abhi tak ehsaas nahi hui hai. agar ye baat sach dhi ki tum preet se pyaar karti hai, toh tum yaha aise aati toh zaroor par woh ring mere mooh par fenkne... mahi...me tume tumse zyaada janta hoon...aur me tume samaj sakta hoon. me tume waqt de raha hoon. haan....ye mat sochna ki me woh filmi heroes ke tarah ye kahunga ki me tume decision lene ke liye me apni puri zindgi ka waqt doonga...wagera wagera... me tume 2 mahine ke waqt deta hoon. jab me aali ke shaadi ke liye wapas aaunga tab me tumara faisla sunoonga. tab tum jo bhi faisla logi, me tume force nahi karunga.... aur ab mujse kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi..."

mahi jus gaped at him. how clearly and rightly he spoke. she thought it was better to leave him at it and listen to his decision.

she nodded her head, "theek hai shabd"

...to be contd....
okayyy...wats gna happen afta shabd is gone and wat is angad gona do????
any guesses ppl????

Edited by giggling gurl - 17 years ago

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swati gud

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Posted: 17 years ago

#100

that was amazing!! I wonder what happens b/w angad and Krip and I hope so badly that Mahi accepts shabd..I cant wait to see what happens next please continue soon , i just cant wait. This part was really nice and your writing has improved immensly. thanks

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