'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 37

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Posted: 17 years ago
Superb darling.
Dono k dono poore nautanki hai sab ko pareshaan kar rahe hai accha natak kar lete hai dono. 😆
Raj se ab control nahi ho raha hai bechara kya kya kar raha hai Naina k pyaar me. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
thoda drama aur thoda romance ....it was perfect......

very nice
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Posted: 17 years ago
@sweta
thnxx!!

@varsha
thnx!

@aarthi
thnx a lot!!

@rituka
thnxx

@rani
nautanki toh hain!!.......dinning table scene pasand aya na..timepass!!......mmmm.......ohh sho shweett meri delay kanrey walli aadat ko tumne meri speciality bana di aur tumhe pasand bhi hain!!...thnxx!!....lol!! hindi tohzyada hi ho gayi!!

@shaina
thnxx!!....nautankiii wid a captial N
ryt chup chup ke!...lol!!..

@mahak
thnxx!!.....

@lipi
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Posted: 17 years ago

2day i m nt updtin now!...i will updt in the nyt!!.

Edited by cool~~gal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
eagery waiting for tonight.... 😛
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PART-32
Next Day morning.....

Navin has a discussion with Naina..

Navin-Dekh Naina jo tu kar rahi hain woh galat hain..

Nainaa-Main Aalekh ke yahan jaa rahi hoon raat ko lautongi!..

AS though she dint hear him!!...

Naina was leaving and Raj entered..

Naina saw him

Naina-Phir aa gaye!!..

Raj-Jus shut up....main Navin se milne ayya tha...lekin dekho subah subah tumhara hi chehra mila!!..

Naina-Youuu arghhhh

Naina leaves!!..

Naina jati hain Aalekh ke ghar!

Ting Tong!!

Naina--Kyunn 2 din se nahi mile hoon....bahut zyada busy hoo gaya hon kya??

Aalekh-Nain tum itna gussa kyun hoon??

Naina-Alright toh abb tumhe bhi baat nahi karni..

Just then Aalekh's fone rings!..

Aalekh--Helloo

Aalekh--What??

Aalekh-Thekhe main sambhalta hoon..

Aalekh-Hmmm..

Aalekhh-Haannn....ok bye!

He keeps the fone!

Aalekh-So jhagda hua ?

Naina-Bhai ka fone tha?

Aalekh--Hmmm

Naina and Aalekh have a chat!!...

Aalekh-Naina pagal mat ban...woh uski be

Naina-Chod yaar!...socha tu samjhe ga .......chalti hoon...

Naina leaves!!

Neelu comes from beddd

Yawnss

Neelu--Kya huaa kaun tha?? subah subah

Aalekh-O meri maharani 10 baj gayye

Neelu--Gussa kyun ho rahe hoon??

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Naina jaati hain ghar!..

Naina-Pata nahi iss baar maza hi nahi aa raha...aa raha hainn but pehle jaise nahi...kahin mein buddhi toh nahi ho rahi hoon..nahi nahi....well i am jus so used to it all....shayad is liye thrill nahi mehsoos ho raha...

She picked p the phone and called Raj..

Naina--Bore lag rahha hain...is baar samjho mazaa hi nahi aa raha!...

Raj-Naina???

Naina--Mmmmm

Raj--Uffooo yeh tumhe kya ho gaya...tum aur bore??

Naina-Sach Raj iss barrr bilkul woh thrill mehsoos hi nahi ho raha....humne itni baar yeh sab kiya hain...thrill hi finish ho gaya hain!!...

Raj-Mmmm

Naina smiled..

Naina-Aur kitney waqt tak yeh sab karna hain??

Raj-I dunnoo....head criminal toh tum ho..

Naina--Bas bahut ho gaya...its been 2 days...ab akhri jhatka and then prank over!...aur aj ke baad no more pranks!..

Raj-Oh i cant believe yeh tum keh rahi hoon..

Naina-CMon raj gradutaion karte hain...mba karte hain...us ke baad kuch aur kartey hain...in the end there is a fullstop na....bas same here!!...

Raj-Okkk abb akhri jhatkey ke bareey mein socha hain??

Naina-Mmm....kamal ka idea ayya hain! ...mujhe aaj raat shiv mandir ke bahar milna!...bhagwan ka aashirwad leke humare prank pura karengey!!...lets rock it!!

Raj-Ok jaan..ab kaam hain...rakhta hoon...byye!

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Next day evening!...

Raj entered with another girl....raj was dressed in a smart suit and the girl wore a salwar suit...

Aakash spotted themm

Aakash-Hey Rajjj kaisa hain?? aur yeh tere saath kaun hain!!..

Raj-Well meet Mrs.Sheila Singh SHekhawat!

Aakash ki duniya ghum gayi!!..

Raj--Main Naina ko bhula chuka hoon!...jo ladki muh par barosa nahi karti mein uss se pyar nahi karta!!..

Navin aur Naina ne yeh sab suna!!...

Navin-Kya tu pagal ho gaya hainn??

Raj-Yeh meri zindagi hain...main jis se chahoonn pyar karoo jiss se chahoon shadi karo!!

Naina-Congraxx Mr.Rajveer!...aur tum sheila...tumhe congrax kehne ka fayda nahi hain....tumne apni zindagi gharab kar di...shook manao...khuhs mat hoo....yeh insaan nahi janvaar hain janvaar!!........

Raj-Jus shut up you!!..

Naina-Waiseey Nisha ka kya hua?...tumne dump kiya toh nahi hoga...usne kar diya hoga...poor you!!

Raj-Just shut up you bi..

Navin interupted and caught Raj's shoulder!

Navin-If you complete that....then this girl will become a widow today!!..... 😡 😡

Oops this was getting dirtyyyyyyyy

Aky-Raj yeh kya hoon raha hain...

Navin-Nikal jao yahan se....jus get out of here...jisse pehle i kill you...

Naina--BHaiyaaaaaaaa stop right there!! 😡

A big big big grin on Navins face!!

Navin-Aakash i won the bet!!

Aakash smiled..

Aky-Bingo!....we knew naina rajke khilaf kuch nahi sunegi!...guys tumhara mission fail!....we caught you this time!!

Naina and Raj look at each other!..

Raj-You spoilt it!! 😡

Naina--Sorry!!

Suddenly they hear a scream!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
someonle pls post this part on orkut for meee...sme prob wid orkut for me!!..

plsssssssssss
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Posted: 17 years ago
excelent n wonderful
but jaldi sabko sach batha dho yaar, 😃 😆 poor Naveen n otherz, 😃 😆


but realy excelent,

hatz of 2 u for dialogues, 👏 ,

All the best 4 the next part, 😳




Aarthi
Edited by aarsow - 17 years ago
rituka7 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
too good iss baar prankster hi jaal mein phas gaye
awesome update soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
😆 YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....DONO PAKRE GAYE...HIHIHIHI....NAVIN IS SO INTELLIGENT...LOVE HIM...HE KNEW THAT NAINA COULDN'T LISTEN ANYTHING AGAINST RAJ....TOOOOO GOOD...RN R BACK BUT NOT AS INTELLIGENT AS THIS ANOTHER RN...POOR AKASH...BECAUSE OF THEM..HE WAS FEELING GUILTY...NICE REVENGE...AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING UPDATE...THANKU SOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THIS SUPER-DUPER REAL ENTERTAINING PART.... 👏

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