'A strange feeling '.THE END!(Note-Pg 84) - Page 38

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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!!

Kya natak kar rahe hai dono!!!! 😆

Aur Aalekh ke saath bhi!!!Neelu dus baje uthi 😆 !!!

Inka toh pura drama set hai!!!!Raj ek ladki ko lekar aa gaya!!!!Aur usse apni patni bataya!!!! 😆

Par Naina bhi naa................sab gadbad ho gaya!!!! 😡

Kuch karo!!!Raj aur Naina the great pranksters haar nahi sakte!!!! 😭 😭 😭

Aur chilaya kaun??Suspense...great!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
too good...prankster apne hi jaal main phas gye....
gr8 job by navin
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Posted: 17 years ago
@aarthi
thnnnxx!!.......

@ritukaa
ryt!...khus hi phas gayey!...

@rani
lol!pakare gayee!!...thnxx!!

@shaina
thnx!!.........raj aur naina toh badi nautanki hain!!....toh kya hua gadbad ho gayi toh?...its all in he family!..lol!!........
jo haar ke jeet te hain unhe baazigar kehte hain!.....lol!!....raj aur nain haar ke jette!...

suspense!!...

@lipi
thnx!!...

@sweta & rituka
i will!..

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Posted: 17 years ago
PART-33

A flower vase falls and breaks and they hear a scream!!...

All look behind!..Aky lying flat on the floorr!!..

Aakash runs to her!!..

He picks her head and places it on his lap!..

Aakash-Aky utho utho...kya hua...koi pani lao...aur doctor ko phone karo!!..

Navin rushes to get some water!..

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20 mins later!..Rajveer has sent that girl away.....and the doc has arrived!..

Raj aur Naina room ke bahar khade hotein hain...

Raj-Naina chill di ko kuch nahi hoga!!....relax!!...actuallyy i smeel some good news.... 😉

No response!.

Raj-Tumhe nahi lagta di already bahut moti ho gayi hain.. 😆

Naina-Raj please stop it!.. 😕

Raj-Naina tum kyun itna chid rahi hoon..

Naina-Kahin na kahin yeh sab humari wajah se ho raha hain!.

Raj-Naina relaxx....di bilkul thekh hain!... 😉

Raj hugs her!.

Naina-Agar di ko kuch hua na toh mein apney aap ko

Raj-Uff kyun ghisey pettey dialouge mar rahi hoon 😆 ....just chill...mujhe pura bharosa hain di par aur aakash par....you should be happyy...di ko beta honey wala hain!...be happy!..

Naina-TUmhe kaiseey pata?

Raj-Uff pata chal jata hain!... 😆 😆

Naina laughed..... 😆

Raj-Ayye has kyun rahi hain?.... 😉

Naina-Raj aisa kuch nahi hain....so relax..

Raj-Lagi shart??...I can bet woh pregnant hain! 😉

Naina-Bet!....woh pregnant nahi hain!...arrey unhey toh khatti chez khate huye nahi dekhi!

Raj--Ohh wo koi zarrori nahi hain...anyway ab agar tum har gayi toh jo bhi main kahunga woh tumhe karna padega!.. 😊

Naina-Or tum har gayye toh main jo kahongi woh tumhe karna hoga!! 😉

Raj-Done!! 😛

Naina-Done!..Mr.Shekhawatt get ready!...mere isharoon par nachne ke liye!!... 😊

Raj-We will see!!....

Raj was thinkin--Hey bhagwann please meri di pregnant hoon!!... 😆 😆

Naina-Daarr gaye??

Raj-Nah!....tum kuch bhi mang loon jaan...tumharee liyee sab kuch hazir.......jaan bhi!..

Naina-Lekin mujhe jaan nahi chahiye!...anyway sochne ka waqt milta hain na!!

Raj-Hmmm

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Aakash-Doc kya baat hain?

Doc-Kya inhe pehle bhi aisa kuch hua hain?

Aakash-Na

Raj--Haann

Raj and Naina entereed..

Raj--Haan huua tha kuch din pehle

Doc-Phir??

Raj-Phir kya?...she refused to see a doctor!..

AKy-Rajj stop it!..

Raj-What stop it.... 😉

Aky-Humpph

Raj-Whats the point??...Just tell me is she pregnant?

RAj said that rather loud and it was weird to the others..naina tried not to laugh!..

Doc was surprised?

Doc-Aap inke pati hain?? 😆

Raj-Mein????????? 😆 😆

All started laughing!!

Doc-Ohh so aap nahi hian?

Raj-Yeh meri behen hain please!! 😆 😆

Doc (she looked at Navin)-Appki biwi hain?? 😉

Navin looked embarrasedd

Raj murmered...--Biwi toh nahi!...but

Naina punched himmm

Aakash--Excuse me mein iska pati hoon if you can just get to the point! 😡 😡 😡

Aaksh was tensedd

Doc-Uff kaise pati hoon!....arrey tumhari biwi maa banne wali hain!!.. 😆 😆

ANd thats it yeh words sunke raj toh hawa mein udne laga!!.......

Raj-Hurrai!....di ma banne wali hain!..

He sub-consiciously hugged naina!..

Navin-Ahem ahem!...

Doc--Ohh so you aapki biwi hain haan??(pointing to naina)

Raj pulled naina closer!..

Raj-Aisa hi kuch samjah le jiye!.. 😆 😆

Navin--Oyye mere samne tohhh flirt mattt kar!.. 😆

The doc was confused!!..

Navin--Ohhh yaar woh ladki meri beheen hain!! 😉

Doc--Oh!! 😆

Raj--Naina tum toh haar gayi!...now be prepared!!...

Aakash toh ek dum shock mein tha...aky maa mein dad!..

Aky smiled!..

Aky-Aakash kya hua??

Aakash jaa kar aky ke paass baitha!..

Aakash-Aky did you hear that? 😳

Aky blushed!!..

Aakash-Aky what should i say.....tumne phir se meri duniya saja di hain.....

He dint care who evr was around...he placed a small peck on her lips!...iss barr sab ke chehre par ek muskaan thi...they dint mind lettin them romance!..

Aky was blushing..

Aakash--Chado yaar...jab inka patniyaani maa bane wali hongi tab mein dekhta hoon how they dunt kiss her!... 😆

Raj looked at Naina!!....and naina blushed!!...

Raj-Mere bachon ki maa banogi na!.. (he whispered)

Naina dint reply!..

Raj-Ab agaar aap ka hogaya ho aakash ji toh aap doc ko bahar tak le jayie phir humm di ko wish karke chale jayengey!!..

Aaksh smiled and left!..

Raj-Di i am so happy for you....(raj was literallly screaming!)

Shona got up on all the noise!!

Rubbing her eyes!..

Raj-Shona baby!....get up soon!...its not time to sleep!!..

AKy-Raj relaxx kuch zyada hi khush ho rahe hoon!

Raj-Seccret!!... 😉

Naina--Rubbish!! 😛

Aky raised an eyebrow!..

Shona-Mama kya ho raha hain??...

Raj-Shona your gonna get a baby brother!..

Naina-Sister!!

Raj-Brother 😡

Naina-Sister 😡

AKy--Uffooo stop it....tumhara naatak khatam ok!... 😉

Raj-Ok shona baby wants a brother or sister..

Shona by now was confusedd!!..

Shona--Shona wants a brother!! 😉

Raj smiled..

Raj-Goood!...you will get a brother!!.. 😆

Shona-How??

Raj-Umm that i cant tell you!!.. 😉 😆 😆

Naina punched him!!

Naina-Raj bacchi se baat kar rahe hoon......grow up!! 😡

Raj-Thats what i said i cant tell her!.. 😉

Naina--Uff.

Aakash wapas aata hain!.

Raj-Aakash buddy congraxx!!

RAj hugs Aakash...but Aakash's eyes are fixed on Aky...Both their eyes talking volumes!!

Aky bas usee dekhti reh jati hain!...Aakash is very very happy!!....

Naina-Congrax A.D...

Aakash smiles..

Aakash-Bahut dino baad kisi ne A.D bulaya hain!..

Naina gives a sad smile..

Naina-Choddh ke toh tum gayee the na!..

Raj-Uff Naina purani battein chodo...ab sochoo humare little prince bahut jald is duniya mein aayega!..

Shona-Magar kahan se veeru da??

Raj looked at Aakash...

Raj-Paapa se puchoon 😉

Aakash--Umm shona aap bahut small hoon aap jab big ho jaogey na toh papa aapko batayengey! 😆

Raj-REally?? 😉

Aakash gave a stare to Raj..

Raj-Tumhe lagta hain tumhari beti is explanation se chup ho jayegi!.. 😆 😆

Meanwhile shona pulls a stool....stand on it and calls her dad..

Shona-Ab shona big ho gayi...ab batao!..

Raj and naina burst out laughing!.. 😆

AAkash--Ummm thekhe...dekho mama ka tummy hain na woh big big big hota jayega!...phir ek din small ho ayega tab aapka bhai is duniya mein aayega!..

Shona-Phir mein bhi usse rakhi bandhongi!...

Aakash smiled--Hmmm...

Aky-Ladki huyi toh? 😉

Raj-Not a problem phir se try kar sakte hain na!... 😆

Shona--But papa mummy ka tummy bada hota jayega??

Aakash--Haan kyunki aapka bhai wahan aandar hain na!..... 😉


Shona started thinking!...

Raj-Shona aap chalo mere saath!.....mama papa ko kuch bat karni hain!.. 😉

Shona gladly goes with her veeru da....he starts walking....stops next to naina..

Raj-Tumhe kya special invitation dena hoga??? 😉

Naina smiled!..

Naina-Aa rahi hoon!..

Raj leaves with shona!!..

Naina-Umm ok mein chalti hoon!...take care nd congraxx once again!...

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Ab kya hoga raj aur naina ke bet kaa .........raj kya maang karega!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome
aky maa banne wali great
now plz kal jaldi update karna
can't wait
waise raj kya mangega
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice waitinggggggg for next asap.
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😆 😆 😆 hiiiiiiiilarious....faaaaaaaaaaaaaabulous....beeeeeeeeeeeeea utiful.....miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiindblowing...............briiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiliant....maan kar raha hai duniya ki saari praises tumhari jholi mein daal dun...i looooooooove it....hihihihihi....best part was its amaaaaaaaaaazing dialogues....Aky is pregnant..wow...Raj is sooooooo shameless....now the bet...getting excited to read the bet part... 😛 thankuuuuuuuu sooooooooo much for this best entertaining part... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
excelent,awesum,n mindblowin, 👏 ,

realy super sis,


All the best 4 the next part, 😃




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Posted: 17 years ago
hi dear.......
sorry pichli bar comment nahi kar payi as my exams are going on......
update was just superbbbbbbbbbb...... 👏 👏
raj aur naina aub pranks nahi karenge 😭
par navin bhi kaffi sudhar gaya hai... lagta hai naina ke sangat ka asar hai 😆
iss update mai aky aur aaksh ka part bahot accha laga...just loved it..
aub dekhena hai ke raj nainase kya kya karva ta hai 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 superb....raj is damn cute..i wonder what next.....aky is pregnant..that's a good news for raj 😉 ...

shona's dialogue was awesome..especially the stole one..i love all her scenes...

RN are the best..i wonder what will raj ask naina to do...something romantic or funny??
😕 😕 😳

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